Originally posted by: Onyourface
Hi shona,
Sorry for being so late here , read all the remaining 3 parts in one go and my my what transitions , I so loved the description of chotu mishti in the songhanias , from a pampered child loved by everyone to a grown up struggling to find acceptance around, mishti's journey is so heart wrenching and in your words, it makes me feel connected to her all over again
Loved the little conversation between kunal and mishti, from fighting to being neutral to understanding each other to this level, they have definitely come a long way
Your abir is so perfect , first of all special mention to his new nickname he gave to mishri, mini Chorni 🤣 I want to see more of these cute abir mishri scenes , especially in such heavy write ups ! I so knew that even mishti asked him to control , he would not stop confronting meenu , I was literally disco dancing in my mind imagining that whole scene with those intense expressions from both the sides
Loved the sisters' conversation, the highlight of the whole write up, it's almost like mishti is seeing her younger self in front of her , this bond will surely help her get her the answers I believe
Lastly love the way shekhar is calmly trying to balance everything, it's a difficult phase for karishma too ...lets see where it all goes
I am so in love with your writing I know it's so difficult to write a story when you know the situation is so tense and grey and you need to so that justice to everyone and explore all the emotions ....brilliant writing skills ❤️👏❤️
Waiting for the next part
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