FIGHT AGAINST DESTINY-PreRishFF Thd#3 (Chapter 28-34) - Page 27

Originally posted by: WaqtZaya

Prerna talking to self

Poora din hi khud baat kiya usne..

Adi's comment.

Galti se sahi bol gaya wo

Buss ab adi should know high time.

Time hai. Pehle Rishabh to jaan le.

Sorry for the delay in reply

She will tell him.. Iike mentioned in the beginning note she will disclose about Anurag and her child next couple of updates. Post that she will begin her efforts in his direction leading to her telling her about their marriage too. I know I am slow but I don't know any other way to be honest. Next update should be up by sunday. But I am bit scared now honestly. I will post it and leave it on readers like always. Wish me luck..🤗

😚😘

No problem for the delay.😉 Please don't be scared. As I have said always you are an amazing writer. You can call me Prapti if you want😳.

Wishing you a best of luck

- LOVELIFE234 (Prapti)

Originally posted by: Sunita1986

Prerna's rehearsals

She needed it.. rehearsals ke baad she can make mistakes..

Loved the carrom moments

Thank you very much ..

Aww...Pre feeling jealous of Menaka

She.. abhi to start hona. Abhi to aur sehna baaki hai..

They're at the same hotel...come on U can't let it go. Ek PreRish moment to banta hai. Pls

They will. Please allow me chap 32/33 ka time.. they get their moment. I am taking them in that direction only, its just path a bit different. Thank you so much.🤗

Originally posted by: esha143

I have a doubt about the portrayal of Rishabh-Prerna-Menaka in this story.... Don't take it wrong but till now whenever Menaka came into the picture she is portrayed as she knows all there's to know about Rishabh and nobody else knows him like her.... because at present she does. She has known him for the longest duration then anyone else around him. And not known him like Masi, but things not everyone else knows. All 4 had been really close to each other. These three have been hi family from college time, when he had none, not even Masi.

While Prerna has been portrayed as she's not even trying to understand him....

she never did. She mostly misunderstood and accused him. So I am not portraying her that's what her character has been since the beginning. This story is an extension of Bajaj phase 1 and most of the traits have been retained from there with few changes in each character.

I don't know where you intend to go with this triangle since this is a PreRish story, but shouldn't there be some improvement to Prerna's understanding ability of Rishabh?

She is taking smaller steps in that direction. Her love never kindled for Rishabh, not in the show and ab tak yaha bhi nahi. Her main aim was Kukki mostly..now she is getting to know in that process.

Shouldn't you show her a little more sensitive to him and his moods if she's trying to win him back??

I am but a person who couldn't understand him during 3 months of being married to him; how do I even justify her being so sentitive in 3-4 weeks time that she's read him so well. All she has done is spent a little time over discussing work. She will get their but as of now, but at this stage it sounds odd to me.

Isn't it one of her goals in coming to Mumbai??

Her main aim is Kukki, and she also came here knowing that it won't be easy and it is possible that she might not even get what she wants. In case things don't work she will sign the divorce paper only thing connecting her to him.

Instead whenever Menaka comes it's shown like she's so much sensitive to all his moods and problems and there's no one else more concerned for him than her in this entire world....in that case why can't RB reciprocate??

Because he has his own reasons, which have not yet come into the picture.

Doesn't that show he's not interested in her but why isn't he shown making it clear to her??

I didn't get it. He did when she actually confronted him. Right now she is around but she hasn't done anything to cross her boundaries with him. Again there is a part of their past that hasn't come out.

I always feel unsettled whenever I read her name and her part in this story.... I feel it's unnatural....

I never had any intention to cause any such feeling but that's how characters are. I just don't connect with Sneha, but I do get into writer's perspective and it makes it better. If I can help ease this feeling in some way let me know.

Agreed she's part of the project and even sort of family but her taking such interest in him now is not normal....

Everyone's normal is quite different. We all are different, so I understand if certain things do not appear normal to you as a reader. But again let me know how can I help. Many readers give suggestions, ideas when they like ot dislike something .. it helps. I have used so many of those too.. if your suggestion works without me having to alter the basic plot, I'd be happy to hear .

I know this is your story and you have a certain plot in mind... But shouldn't there be some sort of development in PreRish relationship after all this time...???I agree she's getting independent but then isn't she still lost in matters of heart?

She always was lost. Now again, it's a matter of perspective. I see a change but you don't may be because it's isn't a drastic one. She is changing at a slower pace. Each one of is lost in the matters of heart.. sometimes our brain all our lives. Do we ever get to a state where we don't have anymore questions or doubts or worries? I haven't reached that stage and I think that reflects here. I am sorry ..

Sorry if I misspoke anywhere which isn't my intention... I love all PreRish stories... I try to read everything...

I think I see a problem here. When you have to try that means it doesn't connect with you at a level it should. And certain things don't connect and if this story is one of them then I apologise.

But everytime I read something related to Menaka in this story, she's coming across more like the most suitable partner to RB than Prerna which my PreRish heart can't accept and I really find it hard to read more...

I don't see anything wrong even if there is someone more suitable for him then Prerna. Is it necessary to have everyone else inferior than Prerna so she could shine. What if she outshines even the most suitable one. That's what I want to do here, will I be successful? Will see. I always say, i don't possess a writer's skills so I won't deny communication error here. I do have a certain limitations and I have never tried to hide that :)

I'm not saying every update should have PreRish romance but there should be some progress too na??spending time with each other in meetings or quarrelling can't compensate for some meaningful moments where they are shown to understand each other more...talk not accuse.... If Prerna is still accusing him and not shown thinking and understanding him then what is the use of her trying to find a place in his life???

Why not? Why can't she find a place in his life? She made her place earlier. As far as meaningful moment is concerned, how can I say a quarrel or a meeting is not? Again I'd say it's a matter of perspective and I respect yours at the same time don't expect that you have to agree with mine :). Also the story isn't over yet.. thanks for sharing your views

Sorry for the long rant, just the frustration of a PreRish fan....please don't misunderstand me....

I don't think I misunderstood. I have always welcomed all kind of views and have tried to answer in my capability. This forum is full of talented writers and I have always known where I stand in story telling, therefore while writing this or other 4 stories I knew that I don't have anything amazing but I never thought it will be a reason for frustration. I am sorry that this story has been a cause of frustration and a bad exprience.

I really want to understand what I'm reading... And I am unable to right now... All other characters are good and fine.... The story around projects and meetings is good.... But the heart of the story is PreRish relationship and their development as couple, but I don't see that very much till now... If there's some other purpose of this story, then I've lost it entirely....

Thank you.. I agree that this is a PreRish but this is also a story, that has some characters and progression (you haven't been able to relate with the progress) like life happens. Every one has a way do to things and I only know to write with a plot around characters. I am incapable of writing stand alone moments and that's the reason anything I have written is likr that. A 15 line prompt converted into a 5 chap story.. everything revolved more around the plot with each character playing their roles. Ankie shared another prompt long back but I couldn't write because I had nothing to weave around it. That's my limitation. I had no idea what a prologue or an epilogue is. I think that speaks about my knowledge about writing.

Again sorry for the rant.... My intention is not to hurt you.... It would be great if you can clear my doubts.....

I tried to share my POV but as far as story is concerned, I have always believed work should speak for itself. And in this case it is evident that it didn't, therefore I am not sure how much my explanation will say when 30 painfully lonnnggggg (for readers) chapters couldn't.

Thank you very much for sharing your views. I can not do much to reduce your frustration or give you back the time lost you spent (let me know if I can) but I do appreciate your time and apologise for not giving you something to read that was worth your time

Huge hug 🤗

Originally posted by: Tvfanatic85

Same here. Same here. I mean I am fine the Prerna feeling guilty and all for not listening to Menaka but I don't want Menaka there with him when he is sick.

I am so sorry in advance for the next update..🙏🏼

Originally posted by: WaqtZaya

you have said it. 😣

😔😞😒

Originally posted by: WaqtZaya

replied. Did so after many years!

How?? You always reply 🤔

Originally posted by: WaqtZaya

Yayaya reply mila woh bhi essay wala let me attempt to answer. 😎

I will also reply in a while...

Originally posted by: MR21

The battle between her brain & her heart is very well written. She can't ask Bajaj to look for Anurag when she left Kukki for Anurag.

She has decided not to drag him into this. But does this makes sure he won't be?

She decided not to tell Bajaj about Anurag. Let's see how this gonna be now.

Yaass.. Anurag needs Bajaj 😎

Rehearsal to ask his help🤣

What to do 😃

He double-checked his room door🤣

He is not ready to take a chance. Pakka make sure karega..

She misunderstood that he can't help...I really wish her behavior changes soon...she needs to think before assuming his words or his actions/reactions...

Prerna and her assumptions.. 😒

He helped her in his own way, giving her Ara's file, which is a big deal for anyone.

It is.. in a way it symbolises her entry in thr clan, filling the void created by Ara..

Adi's teasing about them being husband-wife😆...I need to know his reaction when he would know their relation...

You will kmow.. he would be kind of stuck coz his best frnd happiness on one side and his sister's happiness on another..

Good for her, the meeting with him went well this time & he solved her accommodation issue too.

He is always there and will be there to solve hrr problems.

Carroms, looks like Rishabh is not so good with it😆

Not at all.

He lost every time against Adi & Kukki😆

He is so bad that he loses to Kukki as well 🤣

Poor Rishabh thinks he can't lose in front of Prerna thinking she is not family, lets see his reaction when he knows she is family😆

Pride insaan, aise kaise apne kamiya show hone dega 😃

Finally, Team Rishabh-Prerna won the game

She saved him, like he did. They have not realised it yet but they kind of complete each other..

She started observing & following him👍🏼

Yess and she will do it more in coming updates.

Menaka is here & Prerna really tried very hard twice to stop Menaka talking to Rishabh.

She is.. she thinks she is stopping her because of Rishabh but deep inside it's her wish to stop her...

I really wish his health doesn't deteriorate by the next morning.

He'd be fine :)

I think now its time for her to know that Rishabh is someone who doesn't say his problem to anyone & she doesn't know much about him compared to Menaka. A reality check is a must.

That's what I am working on, let's see if it works for the readers too. She needs to see Rishabh, not just Mr. Bajaj. For that to happen he needs to be in his safe zone..

Awesome update Meenakshi, continue soon.

Thank you very much for reading.. working on the next one.. 🤗

Originally posted by: WaqtZaya

Meneka deserves this buss

No no...