Asya FF : Dekh Dilne Seekhli Baatein Sufiyana - Page 16

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Posted: 3 years ago

Girl I love your writing skills...what a way with words!!! Such cutie cutie updates...am fida....

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Posted: 3 years ago

Originally posted by: friendsall

Girl I love your writing skills...what a way with words!!! Such cutie cutie updates...am fida....


Thank you love ❤️ Your lovely comments always motivate to write more ;)

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will try :D !!

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Posted: 3 years ago

Amazing update please update next part soon❤️

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Posted: 3 years ago

Awesome update 

Loved it 

Teasing part was nice

Update soon please 

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Posted: 3 years ago

Such a lovely update😍😍

Dilshad as always the sweetheart ❣️❣️

Please dillu he really deserves a smack from you...use slippers, broom anything but set him alright😂these aunties and girls teasing them... bechara sharmilla Asad

Update soon author ji!🙃

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Posted: 3 years ago

Chapter 12 - Preview

 

Tu hi haqeeqat…khwab tu


She stood in the middle of the living room, her breath unsteady like her pulse. The silver moon gleamed through the large window as it stood bare of the curtains.

And there he was…just casually staring back into her soul. His eyes glittered and sparkled much like the ring he had placed on her a moment ago.

It was her turn now.

She looked at the hopeful faces of her Aapi and Jeeju as she raised her hand to place the ring on his finger.

Her hand shivered­– much too visually to her annoyance– as she slid it on.

She was about to extract it back when she found Asad’s fingers curling against hers. And before she knew it, he had intertwined their hands.

That whisper of a smile that seldom graced his lips, touched his eyes too.

It didn’t make his gaze any less intense.

But it held promises and reassurances…it comforted her heart and sent it into a frenzy at the same time.

She would have a million questions for herself tonight.

What was she doing? She should talk to him…Why wasn’t she talking to him? Was she that afraid of rejection that she evaded the topic? What if one word from her pushed him in the other direction? She wanted him so much that it almost felt wrong…almost.

But the questions flew away as the eyes entangled…their feathers flocking to the same unsure place she had locked them in.

Right now, all she saw was him. All she felt was him.

His ring on her finger…his hold on her hand…his gaze on hers.

She would open the box of pandora in seclusion…later in the safety of her room when the night was a little darker.

For now, she just belonged.


xx


For anyone still reading,

Preview= all I had written :D Will try to be back in 7 to 10 business days 😆

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Posted: 3 years ago

Originally posted by: parakshi

Such a lovely update😍😍

Dilshad as always the sweetheart ❣️❣️

Please dillu he really deserves a smack from you...use slippers, broom anything but set him alright😂these aunties and girls teasing them... bechara sharmilla Asad

Update soon author ji!🙃


Thank you!! Updated a part of it :D

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Posted: 3 years ago

Originally posted by: asifiqbalsh

Awesome update 

Loved it 

Teasing part was nice

Update soon please 

Thanks for pm


Thank you <3. updated a part of it

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Posted: 3 years ago

Originally posted by: Godaras

Amazing update please update next part soon❤️


Thank you❤️ workin on completing it, updated some of it