Vyapti's Dreamland - Page 11

Originally posted by: vyapti

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She asked the darkness around her,

"Why is not there a single person

With whom I can share this pain?

To whom I can unburden 

This burden of shame?"

The darkness tried to

Come close to her and failed.

Still it said,

"Please, let us stop this 

For a while.

If today we want to

Come close to each other,

Remain intimate with each other

For a long lime,

There is no one to disturb."

A pain expressed in a poetical way, layer by layer, as if a stage built with words to display that inexplicable pain of darkness. 

A well written poem Vyapti. 🤗

There is such a beautiful depth to your poetry. Each word leaves its mark on your soul. Kudos! Keep writing 👏

Originally posted by: nautankitadka

There is such a beautiful depth to your poetry. Each word leaves its mark on your soul. Kudos! Keep writing 👏

Thank you ❤❤

Please do write more ❤️

Two tiny hands clutch at his hands,

Seeing her smile he forgets everything.

She says, "You can do anything.".

So he thinks, "I can do everything.".

I will think of myself with my papa 

thanks dear vyapti 

It is so true, for a daughter, her dad is a superhero ❤️

Thanks for sharing this beautiful piece 👏

This poem in quatrain form  is simply superb Nibedita. 🤗 

Highly meaningful expressions in a simple form. 

How does love smell?

Like the rainy season?

The blue saree is

Wet in salty water

Near the bosom.

It is wet in muddy water

Near the feet.