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Posted: 1 months ago

Hey, vyapti i use IF after a long time today and See Notification of your poetry and after that i read All Your Poetry which i miss a while and It was Really Good even Your poetry gave a really Deep and lovely Quote to me 

"We become like the one we love

If the love is deep enough." 

I really love this One As i also Believe in this .......

Love Your creativity Keep it up!!

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Posted: 1 months ago

Thank you smiley27

There is a saying that we become like the one we love deeply. I don't know how much faith I have in that saying but I find the concept intriguing.

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Posted: 1 months ago

This was so wonderful! smiley31

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Posted: 1 months ago

Thank you dear smiley27

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Posted: 1 months ago

Yeah offcourse its Intriguing as we Became like that Person whome we like Or what Anything else We want In life smiley14

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Posted: 16 days ago

I want to go to a place

Where I can live without shame,

Where I can hold my head high

Without taking recourse to false pretension.

There all the wrongs are forgiven,

All the mistakes become trivial

Like the mistake a four year old makes

While adding numbers.


Is such a place non-existent?

Perhaps it is.

Even the deepest intimate place

Of my heart fails to be such a place.

Because even if I am forgiven

It is almost impossible for me

To forgive myself.

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Posted: 16 days ago

Such deep words! Our insecurities often becoming unbearable, result in massively holding us back!

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Posted: 10 days ago

In these lines, I can see a desire to break free from the past and move forward into a new phase of life. The poem is beautiful, filled with hope and longing for freedom!smiley27