Originally posted by: Octothorpe
I read. I re read. I re read it five times to get that feeling settled. It is so beautifully written. It moistened my eyes. I could feel all of it. Sujz, it was very very very beautiful🤗❤️. I'm just so speechless.
Thank you for this beautiful piece❤️
You had to read five times to get that feeling settled?
Anyway, Thank You. Glad you liked it.❤️
Originally posted by: --Lalz--
Suj
First thanks for writing this wonderful os
This was so emotional 😢 and you penned it beautifully!
Could feel the pain of separation
" untill they meet".
This is soo good to read
Keep writing 😳
🤗Thank You Lalz dear.
I came here after such a long time to find this beautiful peace of work I could not decipher !!!
This was such a journey - a long one , in a few words.The memories of this show just rushed down my body - or must I say of the write-ups. I felt futile, drained and week in my knees. Is this how sadness is ? - contagious .
Sujz- you just invented a masterpiece. The emotions were extremely heavy. I have read extreme vocabularies and unending sentences and master-pieces of English- but this was something different. It was the language of heart. The story felt beating till Anirudh talked and then finally it seemed that it was dead.
Bondita was like - “ I shall die too, not with the same rush of blood and pain- but, honestly - who could live without heart for long.”
I loved each sentence , each word. I could get flashbacks of a young ravishing Anirudh speaking volumes and suddenly an old man with dropped shoulders waiting to be taken away !!!!
Wonderful!!!
I really don’t have words for this.
This comment warmed my heart.🤗
:) I am glad you felt whatever I wanted y'all to feel through this.
Thank You Nancy Di, your comments are always so uplifting.❤️
This heartfelt, poignant, beautifully written OS just broke my heart 💔
Thank You Dear😊
It's really beautiful. I don't know how to praise this one. But I can say one thing it touched my heart.
It's really beautiful. I don't know how to praise this one. But I can say one thing it touched my heart.
Thank You
I don't know what to say what to write how to express my emotions I'm feeling right now.. I was, seriously not expecting anything like this..
This update is sheer beauty
It made me cry actually burst into tears.. Power of your writing .. Evoked such strong sensation within me
My heart needs time to get back to normal after reading this painfully beautiful story
Going to read it for the 3rd time and shed tears again
Love
Lalchi reader
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