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Part 20
Incredible update.... superbly written
happy that Geet's mood was uplifted
so Arpita is tensed seeing the black rose
great that she shared this Samarth
glad that Samarth is aware that someone is trying to harm Geet and the baby
of cos that he assures Arpita
can understand Arpita's restlessness and concern after seeing the black rose
Aahna is at KM... can she not just leave Maan alone?
nice how Arpita was suspicious and questioned her
why did Maan lie to his mom?
at least Arpita knew he was lying to her
well Aahna is happy that Maan came to her rescue
hate how she hugged Maan
oh so Maan hugged her as he saw Geet there
why did he did this?
as expected Geet is jealous
loved how Maan pushed her away and asked why she came there
pleased that he does not believe Aahna
dismayed that Ahana spoke like that about Geet
how dare she say those things
Maan's anger is reasonable
loved how he warned her and and put her in her place
Aahna was shocked with his behavior
she indeed apologised
Maan told her that Geet is his wife and Khuranas daughter in law
oh no Geet seeing their closeness assumed they were kissing
she is furious and misunderstands
Gosh Aahna adds fuel to the burning fire
will Geet confront Maan?
Arpita and Samarth's worried about Geet
Arpita indicates that she will keep an eye on Geet throughout the party
I am sure Shiala will plan something
Arpita will have to be alert
hope everything will be fine
update soon
Arpita and samarth are worried behind geet for the black rose she received from fairies. Aahana came to meet maan and maan lied to his mother about Aahanaβs presence. When geet saw maan with Aahana and burned in rage. She thought they are close and Aahana too portrayed the same. Hope nothing goes wrong and brings maaneet together soon
Part 20
Curious and Intriguing Update
After Geet has seen the fairies and was gifted
a black rose , her mood changed she became happier
and was energetic
however when Arpita sees the black rose , she becomes worried
and restless
she wants to know why the fairies gave a black rose instead of
another color
Samrath knows that the fairies have blessed Geet but seems like danger
lurks around Geet and
Samrath is confirmed that there is someone that wants to harm
both Geet and the baby
I wonder what both Arpita and Samrath will do when they know Shaila
wants to harm Geet
Aahna comes to KM and both Arpita and Maan did not like her presence
though Maan lied to his mother that he called Aahna but the moment
Arpita left Maan was his stern self
he truly disliked the fact that Aahna called Geet with such a vulgar name
and his possessiveness and anger took control over him
he choking Aahna while Geet thinks that Maan and Aahna are getting cozy
with each other
I actually liked that Samrath offered to take Geet to his factory so that she
can be protected while all the elite women are at Khurana Manor
Maan did he want to make Geet believe that he has something with Aahna
because he kept looking up at her
this Aahna lies as she sees Geet fuming , she makes Geet believe that
Maan kisses her breathless , shameful girl
Part-20
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Geet mood get good and feeling extra energy Arpita saw her and knows fairies π gift and black rose
This make Arpita and samrath get worried equally they knows the meaning of π€ black rose so they want to protect geet and baby from coming danger
There going to b party on Khurana of elete women's as all get together every month and it's now their turn Arpita assure samrath she can take care of geet bz he want to take her factory but Arpita knows all women question about her now she's daughter in law hope everything go well and geet baby b safe
Ahana came to meet maan and Arpita get suspicious on her reason but Maan to lied to his mom to save her
After his mom went away he didn't like her coming to his home without any reason and when Ahana try to bad mouth about geet he show Ahana her place on giving bad name to his wife but other side he making his wife jealous and when geet came down Ahana pretend to show that both were kissing
Ahana mom definitely planning something that's y she sent her daughter to know current situation in Khurana about geet
part 20
nice episode geet is under some kind of danger as arpita is thinking that black rose given by small fairies is sign of danger that would result in harming geet a big time. she wants to confirm from her hubby that she is safe from all wrong eyes thats why she is worried about meet up
other side aahana came up with excuse of meet up of women instead of elf she herself shows up and even maan saved her she was hitting on maan and when maan see geet and it shows like they both are kissing and this put ghee in fire to geet
Nice update
Arpita worried for seeing black rose for geet
Samarth trying to make Arpita make her understand
Ahana come to meet maan
Seeing ahana say she wants to meet maan arpita not like it
Maan cone and save her
Maan say y she come
Ahana bad word to geet
Maan warn her
Seeing them geet feeling angry
Arpita and Samarth worried for geet
Arpita say she take geet with her to party
Waiting for next update
Nice update
Geet is happy and relax
Maan parents know about black rose and worried about her as they know someone is trying to harm her.
Aahana come to meet Maan and Maan lie to his father bec of her
Maan mother know he is lieing to her
Maan hug Aahna that make Geet jealous
Maan also saw this but when Geet left he push her back
Itβs good Maan took stand for Geet and warn Aahana
Aahana and her mother planning something against Geet hope Maan parents save her also Maan and Geet start to open up with each other
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Update soon
Part 20
Phenomenal update !!! πππ
The only complaint that I have di , is that it was too good & at the end I was left wanting to read more π
So Arpita is wondering the same thing I was ...... why the fairies gave a black rose b/c black roses are so ominous & usually signify death ....... so why black ??? Even Samarth βs suspicions are reconfirmed that someone is trying to harm geet & the baby
In the chapter you also showed another flicker of Arpita βs motherly concern for geet which was quickly shaken off to her usual uptight & stern appearance . Curious if the Khuranaβs are actually good hearted but put up an arrogant pretext to keep everyone at bay ??? π€
However, I am glad that they are powerful, intelligent & caring b/c initially I felt sorry for geet moving into their house but now I know that might be the safest place for her.
And what is young Khurana upto???
Why did he initially defend aahna?? & why did he hug her when he saw geet ?? To make her jealous ??? Well it worked π. I am glad that he forewarned aahana & set her straight but poor geet misunderstood again & that horrid girl stirred the pot before she left . I wish I had powers so I could cast a spell on her & turn her into a toad π
And what are Shaila & aahna upto now ???Glad that Arpita has her guard up & is suspicious b/c the mother /daughter duo are upto no good.
I am just concerned with this party with so many people ...... geet & her baby will be in danger !!! π
Thank you so much for the update π€
Canβt wait to read the next one
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