Anjali
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Anjali
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Next part pls..đ
Originally posted by: anjali0111
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Summery h ye jab mini Neil ko uthane gai thi
Sandhu aunty ke ghar or macherdaani me
Neil ke vichar
Akadu Akadu bole mujhe
Jaise murgi bole kukadu kuu
Mujhe subh jaagaye ye
Jaise murgi jaagaye kukadu kuu
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Part 20
Mini was very excited to re decorate the house. She thought to give a little ethinic touch to this otherwise modern house to cherish the memory of her haveli in Patiala. She also decided to fill it with Neilâs happy memories. For it she asked Naeem bi for the old photographs. Naeem bi told her that all the old photo albums and other things are kept in out house store room. Mini decided to go there and search for some photos which she can hang on the wall. She was searching through the boxes when some boxes full of documents fall in front of her. âF**k! now I have to clean this mess first.â Mini thought and called servants to keep back the boxes and all the documents back properly. One servant was placing one file back in box when it slipped from his hand. Mini looked at the file and picked it up. She was about to give it back to the servant when the words mentioned on it caught her attention. She opened the file and read the document titled, âDivorce agreementâ Mini gasped reading it. She scanned the document it looked really old. She started reading it. âThis is the deed of divorce between Mr. Yash Oberoi and Mrs. Seema Yash Oberoi.â Mini was so shocked to read it that she dropped the documents on the floor. She become restless as her mind started having doubts. âDivorce deed of Neilâs parents? But nobody told her that Neilâs parents were having troubles in their marriage. They wanted to get separated. May be thatâs why Neilâs mom moved on so quickly after his fatherâs death.â So many questions were popping in Miniâs mind. When again her eyes fell on the clause titled âGrounds of divorceâ Mini read it and another round of shock was waiting for her when she found out that it was not on mutual agreement. It mentioned some police complaint. Mini quickly turned the pages of file. At the end she found a copy of FIR. Mini was about to read it when it was snatched from her hands.
Mini looked above to find who did it. She saw Naeem bi holding it in her hands and she clearly looked shell shocked. âNaeem bi, what is that? Divorce agreement between Neilâs parents and what is written in that FIR. Let me see.â Said Mini. âThere is no need for you to see it. Its was all so many years ago and this was between Neilâs parents. Its kind of their personal document so I donât think we should look at it.â Naeem bi replied sternly. âBut Naeem biâŚ.you never told me that there were some problems between Neilâs parents. Neither Neil told me about it.â said Mini. âWhat is there to tell you about it? Every husband wife have some issues in their marriage. It s common.â Naeem bi tried to brush it off. âDivorce is not common between every husband wife and that too on the basis of some police complaint. What is there in the FIR? Let me see.â Replied Mini as she tried to take back the file from Naeem biâs hand. âMini, try to understand this is none of your business what happened years ago. Whatever it was but now Neilâs father is dead and his mom has moved on. The two person related to this matter are not here anymore than why to dig old graves?â questioned Naeem bi. âWhy I feel that you are trying to hide something from me? Why I feel that what Neil knows is only the one side of story? His parents were trying to take divorce. They were not happy in their marriage. May be thatâs why his mom moved on so quickly in life. I donât think Neil knows about it. If he had any idea than may be he didnât hate her mom.â Mini expressed her opinion. âMini, please listen to me. Forget about Neilâs parents. It was in the past. If you want to save your present. If you want to save Neil from pain then promise me youâll never ask anything about this. Forget that you ever saw this documents.â Replied Naeem bi as she held her hand out to Mini asking her promise.
âBut Naeem biâŚ.whyâŚâ Mini tried to argue but Naeem bi interrupted her, âDo you want Neil to sufferâŚyou want to cause him pain?â asked Naeem bi. âNOâ replied Mini. âDo you want Neilâs happiness?â Naeem bi asked again. âYESâ replied Mini. âThen donât argue my child. Something are best forgotten. Let these things hidden under the darkness. Everything is going fine between you and Neil. I can see how happy he is with you. And believe me if I say I have never seen him this happy and relaxed ever since his father died. Please let him live his life like this only. I know you have fallen in love with him and so is heâŚ.â Naeem bi took pause to look at Mini who was clearly surprised to hear this from Naeem bi. âI know you didnât tell him anything yet....you are scared and he may not have even realized that he actually loves you but things are going so smoothlyâŚI can feel that day is not far when he will completely come out of his past fears and will openly confessed his love but by giving unnecessary importance to these documents you will again throw him back into the darkness. It will ruin everything my child. Please donât do this.â Naeem bi requested Mini. Mini was silent for sometime. On one hand she really wanted to know the truth behind those documents but on other hand after listening to Naeem bi she was hopeful for the first time that may be Neil will understand her feelings and will reciprocate her love. She kept thinking for sometime then her love won over her curiosity and she decided to leave the matter here only. Mini promised Naeem bi that she will never ask anything related to Neilâs parents and their married life again.
Mini decided to use only her photographs with Neil to decorate the house. As the house interior work was on progress Mini also became busy in her college. She was working on her assignment one night when Neil came and kissed her on cheeks. âWhat are you doing since 3-4 days.You work till late. Seem busy always. Not even giving me enough time.âcomplaint Neil. âAww, you are missing me. Come to me.â Said Mini in sweet and cute tone as she extended her arms for him. Neil chuckled at her childishness and came to sit next to her. Mini kept away the laptop and came to sit in his lap. She kissed him on his eyes, nose and both cheeks, âNow you are happy?â she asked as she tilted her head to one side. Neil placed a soft kiss on her lips, âNow I am happy.â He replied. âBy the way, seriously tell me about your assignmentâ asked Neil. âYou wanna see?â asked Mini genuinely happy that he was taking interest in her work. Neil nodded in yes. Mini began showing him her assignment, âThere is a convention day next week organized by this famous media house. The theme is women empowerment. There will be a panel consisting of women achievers from various fields and they will be speaking on the topic and sharing their experience. Our college agreed for volunteering. So different streams of our college doing their bid to make it a success. Being a photography stream our team is responsible for the marketing and design. And also there will be an photo exhibition on the same theme. So I am busy in it. Our team has taken different photograph on this theme and planning on how to use it. The best team will be awarded.â Mini explained.
Mini showed him all the photographs she was working on. âWow! These all are really great. You are indeed good in your work.â Neil praised her. âI was thinking,since we are doing interiors of the house I should convert the two rooms on second floor as my studio and photolab. Soon Iâll be needing it. what say?â asked Mini with her eyes twinkling with the future dreams. âDo as you like kittenâ replied Neil as he kissed her on forehead. âThank youâ Mini said while hugging him happily. She started kissing him. âStop it, donât tempt me. You have to complete your work right?â asked Neil as he tried to push her away. âIt can wait. Right now I have something else in my mind.â Replied Mini as she again kissed him and both ended up making out on the sofa.
Neil was busy in his office when Rosy informed him that someone from star media network want to meet him. âNo Rosy, I am quite busy right now. Tell them to come later.â Replied Neil. âSir, Mr.Sharma trustee of Delhi College is also with him. They are saying they just want to invite you for an event they wont take much of your time.â said Rosy. âOk, ask them to wait for me in my cabin.â replied Neil as he excused himself from the important discussion. âMr. Oberoi, so sorry to disturb you we just wanted to invite you for an event.â Said the guy from media house as he handed over the invitation to Neil. âNeil saw it, âStree Shakti, the convention on women empowerment.â Neil read out loud. âIt would be our pleasure if you grace the event with your presence.â Said the media guy. âAnd also we would be grateful if you can contribute something for the same.â Said Mr. Sharma.âThanks for inviting me and sure it will be my pleasure if I can be of any help.â Replied Neil as he signed a cheque of 5 lacs for donation. Neil decided not to tell Mini about it as he thought he will give her surprise by attending the event that day.
The day of event came and Mini was busy with her team and friends in the arrangements and the exhibition. After completing all their work the team decided to sit in the audience to listen to the panelist. Mini was excited to see and listen to women achievers. She looked at all of them with admiration and dreamt one day she will be giving out speeches like them. She liked all the panelists but the lady who left the most lasting impact on her was Mrs. Seema Shah as she spoke on the challenges a woman face in shaping up her career after marriage and children and how she has to struggle every step to protect her individuality. Mini could so relate to her on this matter. After the speech was over and everyone was having lunch Mini went to Mrs. Shah to interact with her. âHello Maâam, I am from Delhi College of fine arts. I listen to your speech and I must say it was great. I mean your views, your thinkingâŚI could so relate to itâŚ.âMini gushed like some fan girl. âRelate to it? How come? You are very young. The challenges I spoke about will only come into your life once youâll get married.â Replied Mrs. Shah as she smiled at her politely. âActuallyâŚI am married already.â Answered Mini. She looked at the mix of surprise and shocked expression on the ladyâs face and continued, âI knowâŚmany people also have same reaction when they come to know of it..âŚbut itâs a long story how I ended up getting married this early.â Replied Mini. âI can understand. You must have your own reasons. But I can see many dreams in your eyes. Donât let them fade away.â Replied Mrs. Shah. âCan I have your number maâamâŚ.it will be great to be in touch with you.â Mini requested. âAhâŚnumberâŚdonât mind betaâŚbutâŚ.âMrs. Shah hesitated but her eyes fell on the screen of Miniâs mobile where the name âNeil callingâ was flashing with a photo of handsome man. Mrs. Shah forgot what she was saying when she saw the callerâs name and photo. âYour phoneâŚ.its ringingâŚâMrs. Shah said to Mini. Mini saw it was Neilâs call but she cut the call as she wanted to finish her chat with Mrs. Shah. âWhats your name beta?â asked Mrs. Shah. âOh How I can be so stupid I didnât even introduce myself. I am Mini Oberoi.â Said Mini as she extended her hand forward. âFullâŚfull name please?âasked Mrs. Shah to be sure if this girl is really the one she is thinking her to be. âMini Neil Oberoiâ replied Mini. Mrs. Shah kept looking at her for sometime. Mini wondered what happened to her suddenly. Then Mrs. Shah kept her hand lovingly on her head. Mini was touched by her gesture. âYou wanted my numberâŚright please note. Its 982âŚ..âshe gave Mini her number. âPlease do call meâŚ.So that I can save your number tooâŚ.I mean its such a nice meeting to a you and it will be interesting to have conversation with you sometimes.â Mrs. Shah explained. Mini happily exchanged her number.
Mini came back to her friends. She forgot to call back Neil. Mini now came to exhibition area was having fun with her friends. Neil also came there. He scanned the whole hall and finally spotted Mini at one corner. She was laughing and cracking jokes with her friends. They were a group of Five girls and three boys. Neil started moving towards her when he noticed one boy was standing a little too close to Mini and giving her those puppy eyes looks. He was trying to touch her on the pretense of taking hi-five or placing his hand on her shoulder as a friendly gesture a little too much. While Mini seemed oblivious to all this. Neil sighed, âLooks like my kitten has earned a fan boy for herselfâŚ.time to break his heart and crash his hopesâŚ.poor boy.â Thought Neil as he moved towards Mini in style. Mini was busy in chatting when One of her friend noticed Neil coming towards them. âOh yaar baatein band karo ladkiyon aur peechhe dekhoâŚhaye kya banda haiâŚso damn hot.âsaid one of Miniâs friend Ria. All of them turned back. Mini gasped seeing Neil there. She tried telling her friends but no one listened to her as they were busy drooling over Neil. âOh yaar kasam seâŚkinna sexy munda haiâŚaur ye toh hamari taraf hi aa raha hai.â Miniâs another friend Sonal said excitedly. Mini rolled her eyes listening to her friends. âGuys meri baat to suno he is myâŚ.â Mini tried to tell them but all the girls were so busy checking out Neil that nobody cared what she was saying. Mini threw her hands up in frustration. Neil smiled at her reaction guessing what could have been going on there. He winked at her as he came closer. All the friends gasped in shock as Neil came directly towards Mini and hugged her.
Neil pulled apart and tucked some loose strands of hair behind Miniâs ear. âWas my darling wife so busy that she doesnât even have time to answer my call or call me back?â asked Neil. âOh, I forgotâŚsorry.â Replied Mini sheepishly. âIts okâŚwont you introduce me to your friends?â said Neil. âOh Yes. Meet my friends, Ria, Sonal, Shruti, Aditi, Pooja, Amit, Rohit andâŚ.â âAnd who is this handsome Punjabi boy?â asked Neil gesturing towards the fan boy. âHe is bobby. He is literary the joker of our group. Keeps cracking jokes. Makes us laugh all time. And guys meet Neil, my husband.â Mini made the introductions. She said the words âmy husbandâ while giving those âI know you are so jealousâ looks to all the girls. âHii everyone. And bobby thanks for making my wife laugh but now I am here I will give her company.â Said Neil as he slipped his hand on Miniâs waist and pulled her towards him while looking at bobby who clearly looked uncomfortable. âWhat are you doing here Neil? Why didnât you tell me that you will be coming here?â asked Mini. âThought to give you a surprise baby.â Replied Neil. âYou and your strange waysâ said Mini as she smiled at him. âSweet heart wont you show me around?â asked Neil as he leaned towards Mini more. âYes, lets go.â Replied Mini as she took leave from her friends for sometime. All the girls winked at her while the two of guys gave non interested look but Mini noticed that bobby looked angry but she didnât have time to ponder upon it as Neil pulled her towards him.
âSo whats with all the darling, sweetheart and baby? Why so much of a show off? Asked Mini as she showed him her photographs. âJust for funâŚI saw your friends checking me out so wanted to make them loud and clear that I have my eyes only for you.â Replied Neil casually. Mini gave him confused looks as she didnât believe him one bit. Her husband was cryptic and he has his own reasons to do everything but she knew he is not going to tell her atleast now so she let it go.She was really happy to see him here. She showed him the photo exhibition and then Neil took her leave as he had an important meeting. Mini came back to her friends. âNot fair Mini, you never told us your husband is such an eye candy.â Said Ria dreamily. âShut upâ Mini chided her friend. âYou are so lucky yaarâŚhaaye mujhe aisa pati mile toh main toh ghar se kabhi bahar hi na niklu ise chhodkar.â Said Sonal. âGirls! Control. You are talking about my husband.â Mini again admonish them as she couldnât take it anymore how all of them were still drooling over him. All the girls started laughing. âRelax, we were just kidding yaar.â Explained Sonal.
âExcuse meâ said Bobby as he couldnât take the over acting of girls anymore. Mini saw him going and remembered that she saw angry look on Bobbyâs face a while ago.She went behind him. âOye Bobby, what happened to you? Why suddenly you are so cranky?â asked Mini. âMini you are married? You never told me?â asked Bobby feeling hurt. âWhat is there to tell? Everybody knows it already. All my friends have met Neil for the first time but they knew I was married since startingâŚI thought you also knew it.â replied Mini as she couldnât understand what suddenly happened to Bobby. âHow would I suppose to know. You are so young. You donât wear any signs of married woman. You donât behave like oneâŚI thought Mini Oberoi was your maiden name only.â Replied Bobby. âWhat the hell Bobby? Do I have to behave differently if I am married? Kya bakwaas hai yeâŚaur hum ye sab discuss bhi kyu kar rahe hain?â asked Mini as she lost her mind now. âWe are discussing this becauseâŚyou broke my heartâŚyouâŚ..by not telling me about your marriageâŚâBobby blurted out in anger. âWhat do you mean Bobby?â asked Mini suspiciously. âIâŚI meâŚmeanâŚI am your very good friendâŚ.and only I didnât know about your marriageâŚ.thisâŚfact broke my heartâŚI thought we knew each and every thing about each other.â Bobby lied as he tried to control the situation. âBobby, see I understand that this was a surprise to youâŚbut what difference does it make to our friendship?â asked Mini. âYes you are rightâŚI am just overreactingâŚsorry yaar Mini.â replied Bobby and went away from there making some excuse.
The time for the award distribution came. Mini and her friends were on cloud nine as they won the best team award and Miniâs photo was selected as best photo of exhibition. Mini squeaked in delight as she received the award. She came back to her friends who congratulated her but she overheard comments from the other nominated students who didnât won, âYaar isse achha toh mera photo thaâŚaisi kya khaas baat thi is Mini ke photo mein.â Said one girl. âKhaas baat iske photo mein nahi iske husband mein hai.â Said another guy. âWhat do you mean?â asked the girl. âI have heard that her husband Neil Oberoi gave a huge donation to the organizers of this event so to oblige him award toh Mini ko hi milna tha.â Said the guy as he gave the disgusted look to the trophy. Miniâs happiness vanished as she concluded that she has won not because of her talent but because of Neil. May be thatâs why Neil didnât tell her that he got an invitation to come here.
to be continued.....
precap- Mini confronts Neil and meet Mrs. Shah and also Bobby going crazy.đ
H n rhyming talent đ
Mene starting me likhe the mineil ke sences ke liye bhi đ
Tumhare pb forum me entry ke pehle uske baad coffee bites ki prerna mili đ¤Ł
Mera fav vala share karti hoon mineil ka
Summery h ye jab mini Neil ko uthane gai thi
Sandhu aunty ke ghar or macherdaani me
Neil ke vichar
Akadu Akadu bole mujhe
Jaise murgi bole kukadu kuu
Mujhe subh jaagaye ye
Jaise murgi jaagaye kukadu kuu
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Very good .So Mrs.Shah is Neil's Mother and MiNeil will have fight . I like their fights and the way you write I can imagine SouNoor as Mineil enacting these scenes . Bobby heart broken here also đ
Amazing one anjali...
Jealous Neil... đ
Bechara bobby... đ¤Ł
Mrs shah is Minni saasu maa...
Update soon... Mineil fight hone wala hai na... đ
Awesome update
Love it
Cont soon.
There is more to the story than we can see with open eyes. Seems Shah has her motives so does Naeem Bi. Bobby might be someone related to Mrs.Shah. Poor Mini
Beautiful .Neil jealous𤣠Bobby as always fan boy 𤣠Mrs.Shah character looks interesting so because of her will have MiNeil fight đ when Neil will get to know Mini meeting her . Neil don't know what exactly happened between his parents but NB know it but never told Neil but our jasoos Mini will find out all đ Next update will have MiNeil argument đ¤Łi love when they fight or argue they looked hot and cute cant wait to read next .
Loved it. Mrs.Shah knows about Mini now and they have already formed a connection.Nicely written .Neil being jealous about Bobby đ¤Łso will he tell truth about it to Mini in next update during fight? I again imagined them your writing is so beautiful. Tailor made scenes for SouNoor
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