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Posted: 4 years ago

Originally posted by: Viswasruti

Vyapti, why you deleted that poem, it is really good. Please , post it again.smiley1

I did not delete the poem Madhuri, it is still there on page 12. 


I was trying to post some sketches and made a mess. Those are the deleted posts.

Edited by vyapti - 4 years ago
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Posted: 4 years ago

Originally posted by: vyapti

Leave a kiss below my eyes,

Your thirst will be quenched

By my tears.

I will feel the glow of your lips

On my eyes.

Will I get out of this maze

Of dream and nightmare?

I no longer want to know.

Because our feet are red

By the same thorns.

A strong emotion was expressed in a delicate manner, good poem Vyapti. ⭐️

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Posted: 4 years ago

Originally posted by: Viswasruti

A strong emotion was expressed in a delicate manner, good poem Vyapti. ⭐️

How can I thank you Madhuri, my motivation?

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Posted: 4 years ago

Dark


You think

You have own

In this game of love?

No Dear,

You are mistaken.

You are

You were

And you always will be

A loser.

You have tried all your strengths

You have tried all your tricks

You have even erased my existence

Completely.

Still that non-existent me

Continues to love you.

Which victory can be sweeter than this?




I had posted this on Pratilipi and on a different forum on IF too. I do not know whether I am allowed to post it here.



This is my first poem. Sometimes I feel it is too negative. Still.

Edited by vyapti - 4 years ago
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Posted: 4 years ago

Originally posted by: vyapti

Leave a kiss below my eyes,

Your thirst will be quenched

By my tears.

I will feel the glow of your lips

On my eyes.

Will I get out of this maze

Of dream and nightmare?

I no longer want to know.

Because our feet are red

By the same thorns.


Its so beautifully written ❤️


Originally posted by: vyapti

I hope to get a little place here.


You get a big space here🤗



Thank youuu 🤗🤗


Originally posted by: 18shabbo

This is fantastic tanu smiley32


Thank youu😛🤗

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Posted: 4 years ago

Originally posted by: surabhi01

New sun come with new hope of light 

Give us chance to make future bright 

Every moment is golden opportunity 

Let's filled every moment with creativity 


❤️


Originally posted by: vyapti

Dark

You think

You have own

In this game of love?

No Dear,

You are mistaken.

You are

You were

And you always will be

A loser.

You have tried all your strengths

You have tried all your tricks

You have even erased my existence

Completely.

Still that non-existent me

Continues to love you.

Which victory can be sweeter than this?

I had posted this on Pratilipi and on a different forum on IF too. I do not know whether I am allowed to post it here.

This is my first poem. Sometimes I feel it is too negative. Still.


You can post your poems even which you posted elsewhere. 😳 Its nice🤗

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Posted: 4 years ago

Originally posted by: BilliCat.


❤️



You can post your poems even which you posted elsewhere. 😳 Its nice🤗


Thank you. ❤️❤️❤️.


Is there any way to post images directly without the help of websites like Imgur?

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Posted: 4 years ago

जन्नत की परी हूँ मैं

जन्नत की परी हूँ मैं,पर धरा पर रहती हूँ

हर मानव के जिस्म में, मैं जान बनकर बहती हूँ

मत दो सिर्फ मुझे तुम नाम एक अबला का

रोशन करती जो जहान को,मैं वो रोशनी हूँ

मैं सिर्फ एक औरत नही,मैं जिंदगी हूँ

मैं ही हर हाथ की लकीर लिखती हूँ

मैं ही धरा की नई तकदीर लिखती हूँ

पर शायद मैं खुद अपना ही भाग्य लिख ना पाई

ध्यान से समझो मुझे,मैं रब की बंदगी हूँ

मैं सिर्फ एक औरत नही,मैं जिंदगी हूँ

हर वक्त रहती है मेरे रुख पर सोच,उदासी

मैं नीर होकर भी अकसर रह जाती प्यासी

लाखों बरस बीते,पर सोच ना बदली जमाने की

जो कभी पूरी नही होती,मैं वो तिशनगी हूँ

मैं सिर्फ एक औरत नही,मैं जिंदगी हूँ

अकसर हो जाती मैं जमाने की हवस का शिकार

ढेरों कानून आये,पर मैं ढूंढती रहती अपने अधिकार

पतझड़ का मौसम,मत समझो मुझे मेरे प्यारों

जो महकाती सदा घर आँगन को,मैं वो ताजगी हूँ

My blog is hindisuvichaar.in

मैं सिर्फ एक औरत नही,मैं जिंदगी हूँ

मैं हर जिस्म में अदभुत जां बनकर रहती

मैं कभी बहु, कभी बेटी,कभी माँ बनकर रहती

जो सदा अपनों पर जान लुटाने को रहती आतुर

मैं वो दिवानगी, वो आवारगी,वो सादगी हूँ

मैं सिर्फ एक औरत नही,मैं जिंदगी हूँ

नीरज रतन बंसल'पत्थर'

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Posted: 4 years ago




Made by caps of water bottles by one of my friend who runs a hotel in Arunachal Pradesh. Image

Edited by indraneelbb - 4 years ago
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Posted: 4 years ago

Originally posted by: indraneelbb

[img]https://i.ibb.co/JF261mW/IMG20200211145827.jpg[/img]


Made by caps of water bottles by one of my friend who runs a hotel in Arunachal Pradesh. 


It somehow reminds me of the Alpana's made by my Nani. Women were always great artists.