MiNeil story- Cure me with your Love Epilogue updated on pg 87 - Page 32

Originally posted by: Anshu19

Nice update....once again I have to say no doubt over your writing skills.... Jhakkash as usual...

But one thing I don't like....n it's my personal opinion.....that the story show Mini became vulnerable and desperate in last 2 episode...

She is not focusing on her work....she wants attention at all time..she need NEIL for everything....on the other hand Neil is right at every step only he is doing wise things...

Their are Mineil Mature.. Understanding and have trust on each other....so they both should complete each other not like just in story...

That's the only thing mini told to  her mother when she lost her identity after marriage ...babes love to wo hota h jisme hum ek dusre ko samjhte h n Apne aapko improve krte h na ki kamjor bnate h...

Sorry if anyone hurt from my reply...but thats my personal view as mini is not an ordinary girl she is unique and that's the only reason Neil like her so...

Thanks for liking the story😳

And dont worry nobody is offended here. You are welcome to give your opinion and suggestions and I am also open to constructive criticism.🤗

I started this story with no prologue and character sketch of its own. It entirely started on the current storyline of the show but I also mentioned after some updates that this story will be taking different course from the show as its just a short story and show will go on longer.

So I took some liberty to shape the characters. They are still MiNeil but different from the show now. In the show Mini is the stronger and more mature one while what I have written till now here neil is the wiser one. I am not trying to prove anything here nor I planned it in this way....it just occured naturally while writing.

And dont worry I am not going to show mini weak like babita. She is young and so much in love right now so she is acting that way and like i wrote in the update also in naeem bi words "even the strongest person sometimes needs support"

From now on the story will focus on their marriage and ups and down they go through and how they will handle it. 

So in short you can say that since last few updates this story's MiNeil are quite different from the show's MiNeil and they will go on like this.

However in show CVs have till now handled mini's character well and didnt let her break down even in front of neil..i really liked that. Hope they continue it in future also.

Originally posted by: Anshu19

Hope in future they handle things like a team.

History will not repeat what mini felt should not be with Arya fingers crossed.....

 wish mini will fulfill her dream of successful and strong woman also her photography.

A happy and trustable family who is always unite against all odds of society..

Dont worry I dont like sad endings

This is just a phase she is going through in the story.

I find it a little difficult to believe that in the show she is always shown so strong that it seems surreal sometimes. We are only humans we all need someone to depend upon. Just as neil said in the hospital episode that "everyone needs some warmth in their life even you mini"

So I have tried here to bring some more colours to her character rather than plain simple strong mini. Here she will be all vulnerable, weak, love sick, dependent but will not break down. She will fight back. Infact both mineil will do it together.

Originally posted by: anjali0111

Thanks for liking the story😳

And dont worry nobody is offended here. You are welcome to give your opinion and suggestions and I am also open to constructive criticism.🤗

I started this story with no prologue and character sketch of its own. It entirely started on the current storyline of the show but I also mentioned after some updates that this story will be taking different course from the show as its just a short story and show will go on longer.

So I took some liberty to shape the characters. They are still MiNeil but different from the show now. In the show Mini is the stronger and more mature one while what I have written till now here neil is the wiser one. I am not trying to prove anything here nor I planned it in this way....it just occured naturally while writing.

And dont worry I am not going to show mini weak like babita. She is young and so much in love right now so she is acting that way and like i wrote in the update also in naeem bi words "even the strongest person sometimes needs support"

From now on the story will focus on their marriage and ups and down they go through and how they will handle it. 

So in short you can say that since last few updates this story's MiNeil are quite different from the show's MiNeil and they will go on like this.

However in show CVs have till now handled mini's character well and didnt let her break down even in front of neil..i really liked that. Hope they continue it in future also.

Thanks for understanding my point of view Instead of taking it other way....

Actually I agree with you that everyone need someone to feel that comfort and warmth....my point is just in even in reality whatever is the situation we should act like strong, happy and trustworthy for eachother and so miniel ...

And btw waiting for next update..me n my friends wait for your story and then we all have a good discussion over story, society, emotions, reality, respect, trust and love..

And that's your charm yaar.... :* :)

Originally posted by: anjali0111

Dont worry I dont like sad endings

This is just a phase she is going through in the story.

I find it a little difficult to believe that in the show she is always shown so strong that it seems surreal sometimes. We are only humans we all need someone to depend upon. Just as neil said in the hospital episode that "everyone needs some warmth in their life even you mini"

So I have tried here to bring some more colours to her character rather than plain simple strong mini. Here she will be all vulnerable, weak, love sick, dependent but will not break down. She will fight back. Infact both mineil will do it together.

Yoo go girl....thanx... waiting for next update

Originally posted by: Anshu19

Thanks for understanding my point of view Instead of taking it other way....

Actually I agree with you that everyone need someone to feel that comfort and warmth....my point is just in even in reality whatever is the situation we should act like strong, happy and trustworthy for eachother and so miniel ...

And btw waiting for next update..me n my friends wait for your story and then we all have a good discussion over story, society, emotions, reality, respect, trust and love..

And that's your charm yaar.... :* :)

Well than thanks everyone of your friend from my side

Its because of your love that i have reached this far🤗

Originally posted by: anjali0111

Thanks

I want to see dadu spying on them in the show too.😆

Neil knows mini better than herself he knows that she is hurrying into marriage but he also cant see her in emotional mess so he said yes

Marriage is a big step for them and like every marriage they will go through rough patches but how they come out of it will form the story now

First I never intended to bring the story this far but seeing the love and appreciation its getting from you guys I decided to continue it a little longer

Daadu spying is something we all want to see in the show 😆 and also am liking changes in Mini . Different side of her . She is also going through changes mentally and physically and Neil understand this. Please continue the story we would love to read more phases in MiNeil's life  through your write ups.

Originally posted by: anjali0111

:Cure me with your Love:

Part  19

Mini and Neil were in balcony contemplating what dadaji had just said. “Marriage…really? Duniya kaha ki kaha pahuch gayi…aajkal log live in mein rehte hain lekin Nahi…..hamara bina shadi ke ek hi ghar mein rehna paap hai…dadu ye kis zamane ki baat kar rahe hain?”said Mini irritated with dadaji’s suggestion. “I told you, ye toh hona hi tha…Don’t worry. Everything is going to be alright. What if I cant stay with you here. I am not far away. I already come to meet Arya daily. We’ll spend some time together then.” Neil tried to pacify her. ”Yes, but that time is for Arya. I have seen how she keeps you engage all the time. What about me? You said that we cant be close in the restaurant now dadaji is not allowing you to stay here….how am I supposed to get you all to myself..when and where?” said Mini as she raised her hands in frustration.

🤣Mini naye naye pyaar mein pagal hai .

Muhje accha lag raha hai ye changed mini. 

Ye mini kahi na kahi uss sherni mini ke   andar thi.

Abh woh thoda thoda bhaar aa raha hai shayad .

 Neil came towards her and hugged her from back side, “Don’t worry. You are over thinking. Its not that difficult. We’ll manage some how.” Said Neil as he kissed on her forehead. At the same time dadaji arrived there and cleared his throat loudly to catch their attention. Mini and Neil parted quickly and looked at him. “kya ho raha tha yaha?” dadaji asked Neil. “Nothing…nothing dadaji….we were just discussing….”Neil stammered but couldn’t complete as dadaji said, “I can see whats going on. Discussion to dur se bhi ho sakta hai…itne paas khade hone ki kya jarurat hai?”Neil immediately shifted atleast two feet away from Mini. 

🤣🤣 come on dadu🤣

Neil ka popat wala expressions🤣

Muhje ye scene chahiye show mein🤣

Mini just gaped at dadaji for his rude interruption. They waited there sometime for him to leave but he opened the magazine and sat down on the chair in front of them and acted as if he was busy in reading. Mini couldn’t believe he is actually keeping watch on them. She tried to say something but then decided against it as she didn’t want to fight with dadaji right now.

She took Neil’s hand and said loudly to make sure that dadaji would hear it, “There is so much disturbance here. Come Neil we’ll go to my room for privacy.” Mini quickly led him to her room and locked the door from inside while Neil laughed at her antics. “What is this Mini? Atleast open the door..kahi bechare dadu ko heart attack na aa jaye”,said Neil while laughing hard. “Don’t ask me anything. Did you see what he was doing? He was spying on us. And that’s what he is going to do. Even if you come here na he will always be watching us like hawk.” Said Mini angrily as she didn’t understood when finally everything was alright between her and Neil why the whole wide world is conspiring to keep them separate. Soon dadaji was banging the door and shouting from outside to open the door. Neil went to open the door but Mini held his hand and stopped him, “Let it be….sochne do unhe jobhi sochna hai” said Mini. Neil laughed at her again, “Stop being a child”. Neil opened the door and dadaji barged in with Biji, “See whats going here. This boy is a bad influence on our Mini. Our Mini never used to disobey us before.” Said Dadaji to Biji while glaring at Neil. Neil gulped hard looking at angry dadaji. “dadaji, what is this? why you are so hell bent to fix our marriage?” asked Mini unable to control her temper. “Why I am hell bent on it you asked? Why shouldn’t I? When you two like each other then what is the problem in marriage?Asked dadaji.

🤣🤣  young hai aur naya

pyaar mein sab aise hi  nashe mein hote hai 🤣

dadu is the star 🤣

Ek ek scene imagine kiya🤣

“Dadu We are still young for marriage specially Mini and top of that right now she has lot of things going on…restaurant..Arya’s responsibility. At this time marriage is not a right decision to take.” Neil tried to explain. “Don’t give me excuses. I have seen enough world to know all that. There is no ‘right time’ for marriage. You children these days…you never understand these things” dadaji gave his point of view. “And Mini, you better behave. How could you lock  the door on my face? if you are going to pull of any such stunt again then I will stop him from visiting this house.” Dadaji warned. “Biji, at least you help us. Don’t you trust us?”asked Mini knowing that only Biji can take them out from this mess. “Mini beta,Mujhe tumhari aur Neil ki Jodi pasand hai aur tum dono par trust bhi hai Par is mamle mein mujhse koi help ki ummeed mat rakho. Whatever you dadu is saying is correct. Even if we trust you society wont trust you. They will raise questions on your relationship.” Said Biji expressing her inability to help Mini. “Oh come on Biji, again society and its never ending expectations. This society destroyed my mother’s happiness and still you are worried about society. Now this society will tell us how to live our life” said Mini not believing after all these years its society for which her dadu Biji cares about. “Mini, you are very brave from childhood. You were the rebellious kid of our family. Always stood up for yourself and your mother. Didn’t care about the world. But my dear, we are just old people. We didn’t have courage to fight against society either earlier nor we have it now. We wont be able to bear it if they point fingure on your character. And besides that you two like each other sooner or later you will get married so why not now.” Biji explained her point of view.

“Because I am not ready for the marriage Biji, not yet. I have the responsibility of restaurant and also Arya.I still have to learn to make a balance between the two. Then there are my dreams and I am also not at that emotional stage right now where I can think about marriage.” Mini tried to explained her situation. “Mini, this is your house. You have the full right to decide who will live here with you and who will not. What I am saying about marriage is also not binding upon you. We said that to you because we think that you respect us. If you want to disrespect us than you can invite him here without getting married we will somehow explain to our hearts that we are not important in your life” said dadaji as he played the emotional blackmail card. Mini couldn’t argue after that point. She just left from there in frustration followed by Neil.

“Mini, stop. Where are you going just calm down” Neil stopped Mini. "If you ask me, I don’t really have any objection to marriage but I am saying no because I know you are not ready for it. what are you going through…I can understand. And I am ready to wait until you are sure about it.our relationship is of utmost importance to me and I don’t want to ruin it at any cost” said Neil lovingly cupping her face in his hands. “I know Neil, but If he is not going to allow you here and we will not get any privacy in restaurant also then..how this is going to work…you know when we broke up…that time was so difficult for me. You were there in front of me all the time but I couldn’t reach you, I couldn’t talk to you freely, I couldn’t hug you…that was killing me. It was nightmare and I don’t want to go through it again.” Said Mini as she shivered remembering the lonely nights and days during their breakup. Neil hugged her and consoled her, “Don’t think too much. We will find some way. We will make this work ok.” “Neil…I need you by my side…I don’t want to be alone again…Please make them understand…I don’t want to be away from you” Mini cried in his arms.  He tried to console her, “please stop crying love. You know I cant see you like this. Have some patience. This is not the end of the world. Many couples sustain their relationship like this infact many couples successfully maintain long distance relationship also. Our problem is nothing in front of that. There is no big deal. We can survive through it.”Mini nodded to him still crying. Neil wiped her tears and just as he was going to kiss her dadaji again emerged from nowhere and startled them. Both of them quickly jumped away from each other. “This…this behavior will not be allowed in my presence” dadu threatened Neil. “I was just….just..consoling her” Neil stammered. “Hum sab log kya mar gaye hain jo Mini ko sahara nahi de sakte”dadaji asked sarcastically. Before he could say anything  in his defense dadaji asked him to go back to his house as he felt he had given enough time to them to talk. Mini also went quietly to her room as she knew there is no point of discussion left with dadu.He wont understand her.

I don't say mini is desperate for physical desire here .

Haan usse Neil chahiye mentally as a support system aur physically b (not necessarily be sex) uska touch , uska warmth chahiye.

She finds that solace in Neil's arms.

Woh sirf Neil ko apne paas chahti hai.

Mini became busy in her regular routine though she was visibly upset. Arya was upset too knowing that Neil wont be shifting with them anytime soon. She asked Mini about what all the elders were talking. Mini first thought to avoid her question as she was so little to understand all the complexities but then she remembered their promise to share everything. She told Arya that she liked Neil and since their fight was over she wanted him to shift here again but dadu and Biji feel that they have to get married to live together again in this house. Arya was both happy and surprised listening about her Veer Balika’s marriage with Neil…something that she always wanted. But then Mini told her that she is not going to marry him soon as she needs some time. Arya became sad after that but she thought at least her Veer Balika considered marriage with Neil in future. For now this was enough for her. A hope that some day she will live her life with Neil and Veer Balika like a family.

Bechari mini :( 

Two month passed like this. Mini became accustomed to this new arrangement where she and Neil talked on phone at night and sometimes used to go on dinner dates. Neither Mini nor Neil was fond of going out on dates as it was nothing in comparison to the comfort of their home. Phone talks also were not as half assuaging as their balcony talks but for them something was better than nothing. Neil was worried over Mini’s changed behavior. She was either angry and cranky all the time or sounded upset over phone whenever they talked. knowing that both of them becoming sexually frustrated  he didn’t thought that Mini’s changed behavior waa cause of concern but when she visibly become more upset and displayed lack of attention in work also Neil become worried.

😳😳

He discussed with Naeem bi about Mini. “I don’t know Naeem bi what is happening to her. she was used to be this ideal independent strong girl for me and now she just seems like a emotionally weak and needy girl.” Said Neil concerned about Mini. “This happens sometimes. Even strong people needs support in life and don’t forget she is in love with you” Naeem bi told him guessing Mini’s problem. “But she never faltered in her life even in the most difficult situation then why now?” asked Neil confused.“See there is a limit to everyone’s strength. Before you she was all alone she knew she cant afford to break down but now you are there to support her and she knows it. May be she is tired of fighting alone.  Neil continued further, “You know I thought my love will make her even more strong. I don’t  want to become her weakness. I want to be her strength.I know that she is not ready for the marriage if she succumbs to this pressure and say yes to our marriage now then I am afraid in future she might regret it.” “I know what you are saying is right but sometimes to salvage the present situation we have to take the risk of future.” Naeem bi concluded in one line.

Kya baat Nayeem bhi 

Humesha ek dum dhasu bolti hai 😎

Starting mein Shayad lag sakta hai ki ...

Ye mini Achanak se despo( ye sahi word nahi hai shayad viewers ko lag sakta hai issi liye use kiya ye word for example), childish type kyun behave kar rahi hai ?

Aur tum ne Anajli.. yahan uska answer  de diya hai 

Changes kyun hai mini mein abh 

Abh neil hai .

Kuch gadbad hua toh Neil suport karega

Sambhal lega wala feel hai shayad

Aur abh woh apne moments ko jeena chahti hai

Woh andar chupi mini kabhi kabhi usse ye sab karwa rahi hai .

Don't blame her state of mind  now .

sometimes to salvage the present situation we have to take the risk of future.👏 Nayeem bhi 😎 sahi bola 

Kabhi kabhi risk lena chahiye life mein.

It can be your best risk for life also 😎

Another few days passed. Mini became more silent. Except the time she was with Arya she didn’t talk to anyone at home much. Dadaji also noticed these changes and he was feeling guilty to put her through so much pressure but he was adamant on his stand of getting them married. Mini was working like maniac for restaurant to keep her mind occupied.From some days she was behind a high profile corporate dinner deal. She was following it up day and night investing all her energies and was expecting a call from them when they rejected her sighting the reason that she didn’t send the confirmation mail to them. She just couldn’t believe how she could forget that. How could she be so careless. That was her breaking point. She was angry with herself for lack of concentration on work. she called Neil and asked him to come immediately. Neil went there and she took him to her room ignoring dadaji’s warnings. She locked the room from inside.

“Neil, I cant take it anymore. Lets just get married.” She said with finality. “Mini…just think…”Neil tried to say but she cut him between, “I don’t want to think anything…All I could think is you always…I cant concentrate..I cant work…I need you. That’s it.” Mini said not wanting to discuss anything. “Mini, calm down. Think rationally, I know you are missing me but you are making a decision on emotional impulse” Neil again tried to reason. “I don’t know anything…damn! I cant even think straight without you…if you love me Neil then please say yes.” Mini cried as she pleaded him. Neil saw her he hated when she cried. He cant see her so broken. But he knew she is saying that on emotional impulse. Then Naeem bi’s words rang in his mind, “sometimes to salvage the present situation we have to take the risk of future” and he took a deep breath, “If that’s the only thing you want then you will get it. lets get married.” Neil said smiled at her. Mini screamed in joy and excitedly hugged him making him stagger backwards. he lost his balance and fell on bed with Mini on top on him. he tried to get off from the bed but Mini pushed him down kissing him soundly on the lips.

to be continued...

 MiNeil babies

Shaadi hogai abh ☺️

Jis kaha hume tha intezar 

Jis ke liye ye dil tha beqarar 

Woh ghadi aagayi aagayi 

Precap- MiNeil shadi❤️

Muhje ek baat acchi lagi ki jab jab mini anjaane mein immature behave kiya  Neil calm tha  wahan.

Uss mein calmness thi

Woh mini ko samjah raha tha

Mini wants to live life with Neil 

Woh abh Neil ke saath jeena chahti hai 

Aur agar marrige is only solution she is ready for it 

Anjali🤗

Kya perfect plan kiya marriage ko 

Part 20  MiNeil wedding☺️

Lekin story ko end mat karo 💔

And they lived happily  ever affer bolke 🤣

Kyunki ki abh toh life start hua hai unka ☺️

MiNeil babies as hubby wife ☺️

Sundar sundar

Part 20 jaldi update karo 🥳

Originally posted by: zalima

Muhje ek baat acchi lagi ki jab jab mini anjaane mein immature behave kiya  Neil calm tha  wahan.

Uss mein calmness thi

Woh mini ko samjah raha tha

Mini wants to live life with Neil 

Woh abh Neil ke saath jeena chahti hai 

Aur agar marrige is only solution she is ready for it 

Anjali🤗

Kya perfect plan kiya marriage ko 

Part 20  MiNeil wedding☺️

Lekin story ko end mat karo 💔

And they lived happily  ever affer bolke 🤣

Kyunki ki abh toh life start hua hai unka ☺️

MiNeil babies as hubby wife ☺️

Sundar sundar

Part 20 jaldi update karo 🥳

aww i just love your comments🤗

yes you got the exact reason why Mini is behaving like this. she is not out of character she is just going through a different phase in life. she is not despo or anyhting but she is quite young and in love she is behaving like any other normal girl in love. aur Neil ke sath ka chaska use lag chuka hai iske baad use bilkul bhi acha nahi lag raha usse dur rehna.

its true that she is more mature than her age but now with neil she has someone to depend upon for her worries so she is behaving like a normal girl. naeem bi hamesha kehti hai show mein ki mini apni umar se pehle hi badi ho gayi aur apni maa ki maa banne mein lag gayi. i feel she missed out all this fun and carefree and childish attitude of a young girl now that she has neil in her life to take care of her she is living that phase.

dont worry agle episode mein ending nahi hai...abhi to bahut kuch dekhna baki hai unhe.

Originally posted by: anjali0111

aww i just love your comments🤗

yes you got the exact reason why Mini is behaving like this. she is not out of character she is just going through a different phase in life. she is not despo or anyhting but she is quite young and in love she is behaving like any other normal girl in love. aur Neil ke sath ka chaska use lag chuka hai iske baad use bilkul bhi acha nahi lag raha usse dur rehna.

its true that she is more mature than her age but now with neil she has someone to depend upon for her worries so she is behaving like a normal girl. naeem bi hamesha kehti hai show mein ki mini apni umar se pehle hi badi ho gayi aur apni maa ki maa banne mein lag gayi. i feel she missed out all this fun and carefree and childish attitude of a young girl now that she has neil in her life to take care of her she is living that phase.

dont worry agle episode mein ending nahi hai...abhi to bahut kuch dekhna baki hai unhe.

Anjali🤗

Haan aaj kal  mera Sensing power zyada hogaya hai ☺️🤣

@bold tum ne sahi kaha mini ke character ke baare mein she grew up very soon .

Aur woh sab enjoy nahi kar payi 

Woh butterflies wala feel 

Woh pehla crush wala feel 

She had to put in this sherni wala mask throughout her life. 

Abh jaake woh sab feel kar rahi hai aur karne ko  mann kar raha hai 

Updates  hai aage aur b ??☺️

Anjali yaar ...thank you 🤗☺️

Dil kush kardiya 🥳

*Blush * MiNeil as couple ☺️

Abh toh license b hai ☺️🤣 

Woh dono imperfectly perfect couple hai

[QUOTE=zalima]

Anjali🤗

Haan aaj kal  mera Sensing power zyada hogaya hai ☺️🤣

@bold tum ne sahi kaha mini ke character ke baare mein she grew up very soon .

Aur woh sab enjoy nahi kar payi 

Woh butterflies wala feel 

Woh pehla crush wala feel 

She had to put in this sherni wala mask throughout her life. 

Abh jaake woh sab feel kar rahi hai aur karne ko  mann kar raha hai 

Updates  hai aage aur b ??☺️

Anjali yaar ...thank you 🤗☺️

Dil kush kardiya 🥳

*Blush * MiNeil as couple ☺️

Abh toh license b hai ☺️🤣 

Woh dono imperfectly perfect couple hai

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Tumhari sensing power kuch jyada hi ho gayi hai🤣

And yes i know why you are blushing😉🤣