Originally posted by: Nikki_srk
Ansh coming in to the fight Masterstroke - ππΌ I would love both DD in this fight
Well, I had told you earlier only that Ansh will be entering into the fight... I like each one to have some role to play...
Guruma in in the beginning when she was recapping what we all knew that was unecessary
In between when she was explaining about why Ant would attack even after Kaal grahan that was confusing.
Paanch tatva idea was good. After explaining initially when G elaborated further on the panch tatva that felt a bit overexplained. Sometimes we don't need everything to be explained.
Madhumati sol i had that same sol for my horror story.
Well, wo sab actually flow flow main likh dala... π
The confusion over the Panditji's good twist
Thanks... π
Overall enjoyed reading the chapter ππΌespecially the twists & turns will wait for the next installment.
Thank you so much... I'm glad you liked it.
And about the next chapter... As you can see, I have already started the chapter but this migraine!!! I am hell irritated with it... Isiliye poora nahi kar paye...
You too I get them every day what's worst my tablets are the drowsy ones . It is literally frustrating.
Well if ansh gets to be the rescuer in this i would like that
My story i have to come to some alternative than the bones one.
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