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Posted: 4 years ago

Originally posted by: Nikki_srk

Ansh coming in to the fight Masterstroke - πŸ‘πŸΌ I would love both DD  in this fight

Well, I had told you earlier only that Ansh will be entering into the fight... I like each one to have some role to play...


Guruma in in the beginning when she was recapping what we all knew that was unecessary 

In between when she was explaining about why Ant would attack even after Kaal grahan that was confusing.

Paanch tatva idea was good. After explaining initially when G elaborated further on the panch tatva that felt a bit overexplained. Sometimes we don't need everything to be explained.

Madhumati sol i had that same sol for my horror story. 

Well, wo sab actually flow flow main likh dala... πŸ˜†


The confusion over the Panditji's good twist 

Thanks... πŸ˜Š


Overall enjoyed reading the chapter πŸ‘πŸΌespecially the twists & turns will wait for the next installment.

Thank you so much... I'm glad you liked it.

And about the next chapter... As you can see, I have already started the chapter but this migraine!!! I am hell irritated with it... Isiliye poora nahi kar paye...


You too I get them every day what's worst my tablets are the drowsy ones . It is literally frustrating.  



Well if ansh gets to be the rescuer in this i would like that 



My story i have to come to some alternative than the bones one. 

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Posted: 4 years ago

You too I get them every day what's worst my tablets are the drowsy ones . It is literally frustrating.  

You too??

My tablets too are the drowsy ones... It is definitely frustrating.

Yesterday I began posting the next chapter but thanks to the medicines, I fell asleep...


Well if ansh gets to be the rescuer in this i would like that 

Ansh definitely has a big role here... 


My story i have to come to some alternative than the bones one. 

Okay...

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Posted: 4 years ago

Originally posted by: Nikki_srk

You too I get them every day what's worst my tablets are the drowsy ones . It is literally frustrating.  

You too??

My tablets too are the drowsy ones... It is definitely frustrating.

Yesterday I began posting the next chapter but thanks to the medicines, I fell asleep...


Well if ansh gets to be the rescuer in this i would like that 

Ansh definitely has a big role here... 


My story i have to come to some alternative than the bones one. 

Okay...


By chance are u taking Head set 




Okay now i talk in the evening & coats i'll definitely read see u then 

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Posted: 4 years ago

First of all, main taehe dil se shukriya aada karti hoon, tum bimaar the, phir bhi itni taqleef uthayi! πŸ˜’


About the chapter, it was simple yet thrilling and I loved Ansh the Hulk here. πŸ‘


And yes, I am patting my own back now because I always felt it would be Veer! πŸ˜Ž


So it's a really good way for me to go!


All the best with the remaining chapters and take care of yourself!


Dher Sara Pyaar from one GAP to another. πŸ€— πŸ€— πŸ€—

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Posted: 4 years ago


I knew it  It was Veer !!

 By the way did u reserve this post



Great twist sirjee πŸ‘


aaj ka episode action packed  tha bohot hi badiya πŸ‘πŸΌ



I hope your Migraine gets better.  For drowsiness have u tried eating only half a tablet. The effect is lessened. 

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Posted: 4 years ago

First of all, main taehe dil se shukriya aada karti hoon, tum bimaar the, phir bhi itni taqleef uthayi! πŸ˜’

Well, you had requested me to complete the next chapter soon... So, itne pyaar se kaha tha. Karna to tha hi... πŸ˜Š

About the chapter, it was simple yet thrilling and I loved Ansh the Hulk here. πŸ‘

Thank you so much...

You know na, how much I love the Hulk Ansh?? To yahan kaise nahi lekar aate???

And yes, I am patting on my own back now because I always felt it would be Veer! πŸ˜Ž

Of course... After all, all the evidences were against Rudra and Veer was the elusive one. To definitely it had to be him!!! πŸ˜†

So it's a really good way for me to go!

Of course... πŸ˜Š

All the best with the remaining chapters and take care of yourself!

Thank you so much... πŸ€—

Dher Sara Pyaar from one GAP to another. πŸ€— πŸ€— πŸ€—

Dher saara pyaar from me to you too... πŸ€— πŸ€—

Also, Ramzan Mubarak... and advance Eid Mubarak to you...😊


Edited by Nikki_srk - 4 years ago
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Posted: 4 years ago

I knew it  It was Veer !! 

I guess it was pretty easy?

By the way did u reserve this post

Which post?


Great twist sirjee πŸ‘

Thanks... πŸ˜Š

I was scared that it might turn out to be a boring one...

aaj ka episode action packed  tha bohot hi badiya πŸ‘πŸΌ

Thank you so much... I'm glad you liked it. πŸ˜Š


I hope your Migraine gets better.  For drowsiness have u tried eating only half a tablet. The effect is lessened. 

Achha?? I never did that. I'll try taking only half a tablet next time... 

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Posted: 4 years ago

Originally posted by: Nikki_srk

I knew it  It was Veer !! 

I guess it was pretty easy?


Nah  it was a good twist a little expected but good 

By the way did u reserve this post

Which post?

I noticed chapter 10 came before my answer to chapter 9 

Great twist sirjee πŸ‘

Thanks... πŸ˜Š

I was scared that it might turn out to be a boring one...


Not at all 


aaj ka episode action packed  tha bohot hi badiya πŸ‘πŸΌ

Thank you so much... I'm glad you liked it. πŸ˜Š


πŸ€—


I hope your Migraine gets better.  For drowsiness have u tried eating only half a tablet. The effect is lessened. 

Achha?? I never did that. I'll try taking only half a tablet next time... 


I noticed i was taking too many so i broke one into half. Took longer to make the pain go away but it  helped to reduce drowsiness to some extent. 


All the best with your's  





Goodnight 

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Posted: 4 years ago

Nah  it was a good twist a little expected but good 

I know it was an expected one... I had made it obvious by keeping Veer under covers...


I noticed chapter 10 came before my answer to chapter 9 

Yeah... I had reserved that post.

Actually Nushy had requested me to post this chapter before she takes a break for Ramzan. So, I was planning to post it yesterday only but was unable to do so...courtsey this migraine...


Not at all 

Haash!!! Thank God for that... 


I noticed i was taking too many so i broke one into half. Took longer to make the pain go away but it  helped to reduce drowsiness to some extent. 

All the best with your's  

Thanks... πŸ€—


Goodnight 

Good night... πŸ˜Š

See you tomorrow if you're around...

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Posted: 4 years ago

Originally posted by: Nikki_srk

Nah  it was a good twist a little expected but good 

I know it was an expected one... I had made it obvious by keeping Veer under covers...


I noticed chapter 10 came before my answer to chapter 9 

Yeah... I had reserved that post.

Actually Nushy had requested me to post this chapter before she takes a break for Ramzan. So, I was planning to post it yesterday only but was unable to do so...courtsey this migraine...


Not at all 

Haash!!! Thank God for that... 


I noticed i was taking too many so i broke one into half. Took longer to make the pain go away but it  helped to reduce drowsiness to some extent. 

All the best with your's  

Thanks... πŸ€—


Goodnight 

Good night... πŸ˜Š

See you tomorrow if you're around...


see u tomorrow