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Posted: 4 years ago

i have read all parts of this story at once and must say all the writers are very talented. while reading 3-4 i felt a bit sad for kalyani and couldn't digest the fact that malhar thinks sampada is still his wife. but it was much needed for the story to progress and it came out pretty well. malhar not being able to get close to sampada even tho he forgot kalyani shows the purity of kalma's relationship. kehthe hai na 'jo dil se ek dusre se pyaar karthe hai woh jismon ki baathein nay kiya karthe' this is proved here. even tho malhar got physically injured and lost memory he could not totally forget kalyani as kalma's relation is a heart to heart connection. an injury on the brain wouldn't do much damage to their relation nor it change their feelings for each other. all scenes were superbly written. will be waiting for your next update.👍🏼

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Posted: 4 years ago

Scene 14 

Kalyani was getting worried by the minute. It was already evening and Malharji had not yet reached home. "Where was he? He had left the police station long time back. He should have reached home now." 

Anupriya was trying to calm her down, "aa jayega Kalyani, bacha thodi hai woh!"

"Haan Aai lekin unki tabhiyat kharaab hain na. Bina bataaye bahar jane ki kya zaroorat thi unhe?"

Malhar entered home at that moment. Kalyani lost her control and shouted at him, "Kahan ghoomne gaye the aap? Police station gaye the, tho seedha ghar wapas aana chahiye na? Wakt se dawai leni hai na?" 

Malhar took a step back seeing how angry she was. "Tumhe kaise patha ki main police station gaya tha. Maine kisiko bathaya nahi tha. Tum meri jasoosi kar rahi ho, ya phir police station main tumhara koi jaasoos hai jo tumhe report karta hai?" 

Kalyani was at a loss for words. "Woh...doctor ne kaha hai ki aapko ghar main aaram karna hai, bas Isliye pooch rahi thi."

"Hmm…… ek tum ho jo meri itni fikar karti ho aur ek meri biwi, Sampada, jise meri koi fikar nahin hain. Kash tum pehle mil jaati Mujhe."

"Sampada… .Sampada..kahan ho tum. Meri dawaaiyan de do."

Hearing Sampada's name, Kalyani felt like throwing something at him. She huffed into Swara's room and sat down on the floor,  knees huddled together, tears flowing from her eyes.  

In his room Malhar was all smiles thinking how protective and possessive his cute wife was. He felt an inner peace after knowing that she belonged to him. After meeting Rahul and Palak, he had gone to see the doctor who had advised him to take therapy along with the medicines, which the doctor had said would work well now that his anxiety had lessened. 

Sampada came in, "Malhar! Kahan chale gaye the tum, bina bathaye, mujhe bohot chinta ho rahi thi." she tried to touch him. 

He quickly moved away, "I was feeling bored Sampada, Main bas park main walking karne gaya tha… waise tumhe chinta karne ki koi zaroorat nahi hai Sampada, Main sirf ek saal ki cheezein bhoola hun puri zindagi nahi, tho mujhe akele aane jane mein koi problem nahi." 

She left from there. Sometime later when Kalyani brought in his tea, he noticed that her eyes were puffy due to crying. It pained him, still, he wanted to hear the truth from her. 

Kalyani and Swara were in the kitchen making dinner. Malhar saw his sister trying to console her. He also saw Sampada lazing around with a magazine. 

"Sampada!!" he called loudly. All the three ladies looked at him. 

"Sampada! Aaj khana tum banao na please. Bohot din ho gaye tumhare haath ka khana khake. Kuch special bana do." 

Sampada entered the kitchen giving a victorious smile. Kalyani just banged the vessels down and was leaving from there. 

"Kalyani, tum kahan ja rahi ho? Tum apni kitabein lekar mere kamre mein aao. Tumhare principal ne phone kiya tha mujhe, ki tum padhai pe dhyan nahi de rahi ho. Main tumhara guardian hun aur mujhe bilkul pasand nahi agar tumhare numbers kam aaye tho. Isliye tum roz college se wapas aane ke baad seedha mere kamre main baithke padai karogi." he said sternly. 

He sweetly announced that everyday Sampada would cook for him, Swara would take care of Moksh and Kalyani should study well for her exams. 

He wanted his wife beside him and this was the best way he could come up with. In his mind, "let that witch do some work for the food she eats and my wife can remain in front of me". 

Kalyani's books were open but her mind was in turmoil. Sampada brought his dinner and gave Kalyani an evil look. Kalyani was getting riled up and she got up to leave the room but he stopped her. 

"Kalyani, Mai ne bataya ki tum acha massage deti ho. Mere shoulders ko zara massage kar do" he requested. 

She quietly massaged his shoulders but seeing Sampada beside him was too much for her. Her tears wet his shoulder and she quickly ran away from there. 

Malhar kept Moksh with him for the night, in the hope that Kalyani would come and check on him. She came, sat down on the bed and softly spoke to the only soul she could share her feelings with, her Pillu. "Pillu dekha tune, tere baba ko ab mere haath ka khana bhi acha nahin lagta. Agar unhe meri yaad kabhi wapas nahi aayi tho mera kya hoga? Tu bhi door chala jaayega mujse? Bolna Pillu, main kya karoon? Tu apne baba ko batha na ki mai teri Aai hun wo Sampada nahi. Please meri help kar na Pillu, tum dono se door hona bardash nahi hoga mujhse." Her tears were unstoppable as she bent down to kiss her son. 

A strong arm engulfed her, she noticed that Malhar had turned to hug his son and she was also caught in the embrace. She didn't want to free herself so she laid down beside Moksh and slept peacefully in the warmth. What she did not know was that Malhar had been pretending to sleep and had heard every word she spoke. 

Edited by rekha1975 - 4 years ago
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Scene 14 

Kalyani was getting worried by the minute. It was already evening and Malharji had not yet reached home. "Where was he? He had left the police station long time back. He should have reached home now." 

Anupriya was trying to calm her down, "aa jayega Kalyani, bacha thodi hai woh!"

"Haan Aai lekin unki tabhiyat kharaab hain na. Bina bataaye bahar jane ki kya zaroorat thi unhe?"

Malhar entered home at that moment. Kalyani lost her control and shouted at him, "Kahan ghoomne gaye the aap? Police station gaye the, tho seedha ghar wapas aana chahiye na? Wakt se dawai leni hai na?" 

Malhar took a step back seeing how angry she was. "Tumhe kaise patha ki main police station gaya tha. Maine kisiko bathaya nahi tha. Tum meri jasoosi kar rahi ho, ya phir police station main tumhara koi jaasoos hai jo tumhe report karta hai?" 

Kalyani was at a loss for words. "Woh...doctor ne kaha hai ki aapko ghar main aaram karna hai, bas Isliye pooch rahi thi."

"Hmm…… ek tum ho jo meri itni fikar karti ho aur ek meri biwi, Sampada, jise meri koi fikar nahin hain. Kash tum pehle mil jaati Mujhe."

"Sampada… .Sampada..kahan ho tum. Meri dawaaiyan de do."

Hearing Sampada's name, Kalyani felt like throwing something at him. She huffed into Swara's room and sat down on the floor,  knees huddled together, tears flowing from her eyes.  

In his room Malhar was all smiles thinking how protective and possessive his cute wife was. He felt an inner peace after knowing that she belonged to him. After meeting Rahul and Palak, he had gone to see the doctor who had advised him to take therapy along with the medicines, which the doctor would work well now that his anxiety had lessened. 

Sampada came in, "Malhar! Kahan chale gaye the tum, bina bathaye, mujhe bohot chinta ho rahi thi." she tried to touch him. 

He quickly moved away, "I was feeling bored Sampada, Main bas park main walking karne gaya tha… waise tumhe chinta karne ki koi zaroorat nahi hai Sampada, Main sirf ek saal ki cheezein bhoola hun puri zindagi nahi, tho mujhe akele aane jane mein koi problem nahi." 

She left from there. Sometime later when Kalyani brought in his tea, he noticed that her eyes were puffy due to crying. It pained him, still, he wanted to hear the truth from her. 

Kalyani and Swara were in the kitchen making dinner. Malhar saw his sister trying to console her. He also saw Sampada lazing around with a magazine. 

"Sampada!!" he called loudly. All the three ladies looked at him. 

"Sampada! Aaj khana tum banao na please. Bohot din ho gaye tumhare haath ka khana khake. Kuch special bana do." 

Sampada entered the kitchen giving a victorious smile. Kalyani just banged the vessels down and was leaving from there. 

"Kalyani, tum kahan ja rahi ho? Tum apni kitabein lekar mere kamre mein aao. Tumhare principal ne phone kiya tha mujhe, ki tum padhai pe dhyan nahi de rahi ho. Main tumhara guardian hun aur mujhe bilkul passed nahi agar tumhare numbers kam aaye tho. Isliye tum roz college se wapas aane ke baad seedha mere kamre main baithke padai karogi." he said sternly. 

He sweetly announced that everyday Sampada would cook for him, Swara would take care of Moksh and Kalyani should study well for her exams. 

He wanted his wife beside him and this was the best way he could come up with. In his mind, "let that witch do some work for the food she eats and my wife can remain in front of me". 

Kalyani's books were open but her mind was in turmoil. Sampada brought his dinner and gave Kalyani an evil look. Kalyani was getting riled up and she got up to leave the room but he stopped her. 

"Kalyani, Mai ne bataya ki tum acha massage deti ho. Mere shoulders ko zara massage kar do" he requested. 

She quietly massaged his shoulders but seeing Sampada beside him was too much for her. Her tears wet his shoulder and she quickly ran away from there. 

Malhar kept Moksh with him for the night, in the hope that Kalyani would come and check on him. She came, sat down on the bed and softly spoke to the only soul she could share her feelings with, her Pillu. "Pillu dekha tune, tere baba ko ab mere haath ka khana bhi acha nahin lagta. Agar unhe meri yaad kabhi wapas nahi aayi tho mera kya hoga? Tu bhi door chala jaayega mujse? Bolna Pillu, main kya karoon? Tu apne baba ko batha na ki mai teri Aai hun wo Sampada nahi. Please meri help kar na Pillu, tum dono se door hona bardash nahi hoga mujhse." Her tears were unstoppable as she bent down to kiss her son. 

A strong arm engulfed her, she noticed that Malhar had turned to hug his son and she was also caught in the embrace. She didn't want to free herself so she laid down beside Moksh and slept peacefully in the warmth. What she did not know was that Malhar had been pretending to sleep and had heard every word she spoke. 



🥺🥺🥺 Beautiful ❤️❤️ please do continue it's awesome 

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Posted: 4 years ago

Beautiful 

Mj pretends to be not known abt kalyani

N y don't kalyani understand that he is trying to be with her all the time 😡

Waiting for next


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Posted: 4 years ago

Aww

so cute

Sampada🤣

Finally KalMaSh❤️

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Posted: 4 years ago

Please continue

Do write more

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Posted: 4 years ago

That’s so good....  Malharji wants to be with his wifey....

Waiting for next....

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Posted: 4 years ago

I am thinking to write next part. From whom should I discuss plot so it continues with other story writer 😃

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Posted: 4 years ago

Originally posted by: Vermilion

I am thinking to write next part. From whom should I discuss plot so it continues with other story writer 😃

Please continue Neera. 

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Posted: 4 years ago

Please continue this story also