Tujhe Vula diya -open story game

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Posted: 2 months ago

- Everyone was waiting eagerly waiting for the  Doctor to arrive . Malhar was shot by  Ahir . Though he was arrested,Malhar 's life condition was critical .  The doctor said -"ACP Rane  ki jan toh humne bacha liya  Sarthakji , but sar pe goli lagi thi, internal blood clot hone ki 90% percentage ki chances vi the ! pat ab woh out of danger.  Sarthak ,Anu and Madhav heaved a big sigh of relief , but the  Doctor was not pleased.  Swara too was there , she said - 'meine kaha tha na kaka, vahini ki  prathanaye kavi khali nhi jayegi ! lagatar tin din bappa ki mandir mein padi rahi ,unki prathanayon ki asar hai ki dada bilkul thik hai . doctor uncle hum unhe ghar kab le ja sakte hai . The doctor said -"  Mein ek din aur observation mein rakhna chahunga ! fir ap unhe ghar le ja sakte hai...magar...!! magar kya doctor sab ? Anu asked in a quviering voice as she had an hunch that even after  Malhar is out of danger, troubles had not ended.  The doctor coughed and declared in a  sad tone ."  Acp Rane ko head injury ke wajah se partial Dementia hui hai ...  Aise cases mein these things are quite common . Humne cross check karwayie  hai.   humne jo photo album mangwaya tha , waha se woh ab sab ko pehechan pa rahe hai par swaraji , moksh ,Rachit aur Khas kar ke  MRS RANE i mean kalyani ko woh nhi pehechan pa rahe hai....jaha tak mujhe  lag raha hai ki woh pichle 1 sal ki sari yaadien vula chuke hai ... He has lost all the memories of past  One year. 

so guyz to twist ur brain and chew u up this the open story game u will have to play .

 Rules- As many as u can participate but u just need to follow the cue. u will have to start where i have left and then so on so forth. pls write your IF   ID .

try to elaborate the scene . and if u are writing anything bold and mature , use red as color.


All the story link will be added finally and will be enlisted in our story bank as a collavorative effort .

   

Edited by pyaar2012 - 2 months ago
Posted: 2 months ago

Guyz why no reeponse are kaha hai writers ? Koi kuch toh likho !

Posted: 2 months ago

Beautiful written please continue this

Posted: 2 months ago

Scene 2

Anu was shocked 

she said meri hi beti ki naseeb mein ye sab kyun

then she thanked Bappa that Malhar ki jaan aur Kalyani ka suhag bach gaya

just then Kalyani entered

Kalyani- Aai! Mere Malhar ji kaise hai?

Anu- Wo thik hai. Lekin....

Kalyani- Aai! Bolo kya hua hai

Anu- Uska smritibransh hua hai. Usko peechle ek saal ka kuch bhi yaad nahi

Kalyani was shocked and she just sat down in disappointment 

she was senseless

Anu tried to console her

after some time Kalyani was back to normal 

Kalyani- Ok Aai! Kam se kam unki jaan bach gayi. Isimein mein khush hoon. Par wo mujhe pehchan nahi pa rahe hai ye sehna bahut mushkil haismiley19.

She went to Bappa

Kalyani- Bappa! Shukriya. Aapne mere Malhar ji ki jaan bachayi. Aur unki yaddasht gayi hai lekin aapki kripa se wo bhi wapas aayegi. 

Just then she remembered that Pillu is alone at home in this chaos

she ran to home

She found Pillu crying 

she went and clutched him

Kalyani- E Pillu! Papa ka bahaddur baccha. Aishe lota hai kya koi. Tujhe ek good news batani hai, tele papa ab khatre she bahar hai. Wo jald ghar aayenge tere paas. Phir tu aur papa bahut mashti karenge. Pal Pillu, tere papa mujhe bhul gaye. Lekin koi baat nahi, main toh nahi bhul gayi na. Ek baar stable hone de, phir sab yaad dila dungi unhe. Tu shtrong rehna. Love you betasmiley27

She went to outhouse

there was no one

finally she cried out loud and vented all her feelings 

Abhi abhi to mile the aap Malhar ji. Aap mein mujhe mera sab kuch mila tha. Ek sukoon, safety, solace, love everything. Meri life track pe aa rahi thi. Aapke saath se padhai bhi puri karne lagi thi. Lekin ab zindagi ke iss raah par aapka saath chut gaya. Kaise jiungi kaise aapke bina. Aapse dur rahna college mein nahi ho pata, ab kya karu. Aapne mujhko sawara hai, khud ki pehchan banane ka mauka diya, aur ab aap hi........Aapne hi mujhe pyaar ka sahi matlab samjhaya. Janti nahi kab pyaar hua ya isse hi pyaar kehte hai ya nahi, lekin I Love you Malhar ji

she wipes tears and says ab maine bhi than li hai - Aapko puri tarah se thik karungi aur hum dono ka pyaar jeetega

she does shayari

Aap humein bhul jayenge ye humein nahi tha pata

Par iss baat ki koi nahi khata

Phir se hogi meri hi jeet

kehti hai hum dono ki preet

She praises herself- Wa Kalyani! Tu toh ab shayari bhi karne lagi

Edited by Bacillusbadius - 2 months ago
Posted: 2 months ago

Originally posted by leelavathi845


Beautiful written please continue this

This is an open story game u can also participate

Posted: 2 months ago

Wonderful. likhne ka talent nahi so all writers give me more

Posted: 2 months ago

I don't know how to write story so I only read story

Posted: 2 months ago

It’s beautiful...

Do write more....


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