- Everyone was waiting eagerly waiting for the Doctor to arrive . Malhar was shot by Ahir . Though he was arrested,Malhar 's life condition was critical . The doctor said -"ACP Rane ki jan toh humne bacha liya Sarthakji , but sar pe goli lagi thi, internal blood clot hone ki 90% percentage ki chances vi the ! pat ab woh out of danger. Sarthak ,Anu and Madhav heaved a big sigh of relief , but the Doctor was not pleased. Swara too was there , she said - 'meine kaha tha na kaka, vahini ki prathanaye kavi khali nhi jayegi ! lagatar tin din bappa ki mandir mein padi rahi ,unki prathanayon ki asar hai ki dada bilkul thik hai . doctor uncle hum unhe ghar kab le ja sakte hai . The doctor said -" Mein ek din aur observation mein rakhna chahunga ! fir ap unhe ghar le ja sakte hai...magar...!! magar kya doctor sab ? Anu asked in a quviering voice as she had an hunch that even after Malhar is out of danger, troubles had not ended. The doctor coughed and declared in a sad tone ." Acp Rane ko head injury ke wajah se partial Dementia hui hai ... Aise cases mein these things are quite common . Humne cross check karwayie hai. humne jo photo album mangwaya tha , waha se woh ab sab ko pehechan pa rahe hai par swaraji , moksh ,Rachit aur Khas kar ke MRS RANE i mean kalyani ko woh nhi pehechan pa rahe hai....jaha tak mujhe lag raha hai ki woh pichle 1 sal ki sari yaadien vula chuke hai ... He has lost all the memories of past One year.
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Anu was shocked
she said meri hi beti ki naseeb mein ye sab kyun
then she thanked Bappa that Malhar ki jaan aur Kalyani ka suhag bach gaya
just then Kalyani entered
Kalyani- Aai! Mere Malhar ji kaise hai?
Anu- Wo thik hai. Lekin....
Kalyani- Aai! Bolo kya hua hai
Anu- Uska smritibransh hua hai. Usko peechle ek saal ka kuch bhi yaad nahi
Kalyani was shocked and she just sat down in disappointment
she was senseless
Anu tried to console her
after some time Kalyani was back to normal
Kalyani- Ok Aai! Kam se kam unki jaan bach gayi. Isimein mein khush hoon. Par wo mujhe pehchan nahi pa rahe hai ye sehna bahut mushkil hai.
She went to Bappa
Kalyani- Bappa! Shukriya. Aapne mere Malhar ji ki jaan bachayi. Aur unki yaddasht gayi hai lekin aapki kripa se wo bhi wapas aayegi.
Just then she remembered that Pillu is alone at home in this chaos
she ran to home
She found Pillu crying
she went and clutched him
Kalyani- E Pillu! Papa ka bahaddur baccha. Aishe lota hai kya koi. Tujhe ek good news batani hai, tele papa ab khatre she bahar hai. Wo jald ghar aayenge tere paas. Phir tu aur papa bahut mashti karenge. Pal Pillu, tere papa mujhe bhul gaye. Lekin koi baat nahi, main toh nahi bhul gayi na. Ek baar stable hone de, phir sab yaad dila dungi unhe. Tu shtrong rehna. Love you beta
She went to outhouse
there was no one
finally she cried out loud and vented all her feelings
Abhi abhi to mile the aap Malhar ji. Aap mein mujhe mera sab kuch mila tha. Ek sukoon, safety, solace, love everything. Meri life track pe aa rahi thi. Aapke saath se padhai bhi puri karne lagi thi. Lekin ab zindagi ke iss raah par aapka saath chut gaya. Kaise jiungi kaise aapke bina. Aapse dur rahna college mein nahi ho pata, ab kya karu. Aapne mujhko sawara hai, khud ki pehchan banane ka mauka diya, aur ab aap hi........Aapne hi mujhe pyaar ka sahi matlab samjhaya. Janti nahi kab pyaar hua ya isse hi pyaar kehte hai ya nahi, lekin I Love you Malhar ji
she wipes tears and says ab maine bhi than li hai - Aapko puri tarah se thik karungi aur hum dono ka pyaar jeetega
she does shayari
Aap humein bhul jayenge ye humein nahi tha pata
Par iss baat ki koi nahi khata
Phir se hogi meri hi jeet
kehti hai hum dono ki preet
She praises herself- Wa Kalyani! Tu toh ab shayari bhi karne lagiEdited by Bacillusbadius - 2 months ago
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