Irrevocably Yours- ff :) part 4(28/10/2019)- page 24 - Page 23

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Posted: 4 years ago

Originally posted by: KalmaBeats

Haan ye baat toh thi...but phir usne dentist wale scene mai uspr shaq kiya..but 26 jan epi mai usne kalyani se directly Rahul ke baare mai nahi pucha tha, he waited himself to know the proof about them, but he still doubted on them due to his own bitter past! That strap scene and Kalma dance mai eyelock, malhar comforting kalyani from her panic on bomb news, and rahul ki dhulai ke waqt uska patni jaap, uske woh possessive dialogues, ufff!!! Yes...u are right! Eventually woh dono kareeb aa hi jaate aur malhar ko at last realization ho hi jaata ki Kalyani hamesha se sahi thi, baaki sab galat!❤ Usne baad mai ek epi mai mana b tha ki Kalyani uski "apni" hai , isliye woh usi pr gussa nikalta hai, baaki kisi pr nahi!❤

That one was gem 


True yaar Dheere dheere hi sahi he wld have realised

Mujhe aisa laga ki sampu ke jaane ke baadh malhar ko aisa lagta hai ki maybe uske nature ke wajah se sab usse chodke jaathe hai, kalyani always proved that woh kabhi uska saath nahi chodegi, he looks at her in wonder ki yeah she is still with me. His heart always in fear of losing her.

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Posted: 4 years ago

I red all chaps in one go. What an amazing storyline you designed n elaborated. I just love reading this, there is constant smile on my face reading this story and that's huge!! You've done a wonderful job!! Now I'll just wait n wait for next update 

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Posted: 4 years ago

Originally posted by: asmitasb

I red all chaps in one go. What an amazing storyline you designed n elaborated. I just love reading this, there is constant smile on my face reading this story and that's huge!! You've done a wonderful job!! Now I'll just wait n wait for next update 

Thank u so much yaar

Reading ur comment truely made my day better.

Thank u 🤗

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Posted: 4 years ago

dear its been a while u havent update this

plz cont soon 

eager to read this one