Irrevocably Yours- ff :) part 4(28/10/2019)- page 24

Posted: 4 years ago




just a random os turned into ff😆

hope u like this , comment to let me know.

thank u mere m2 for the name❤️


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life changes in a sec is the  truest statement i have ever heard in my life.


yesterday i was this happy go lucky girl getting tattoo of madhuri and papa and now am sitting here in the outhouse of deshmukhs in darkness with no will to even face another day.


it still flashes in my eyes how madhuri fell from the building taking my life along with her.


I wiped the tear that slipped from my eyes, done with being dehydrated over that horrible event that flipped my life.


for people am back in my ancestral home surrounded by my long lost family and happy but truth be told I never felt so alone in my entire life as i was feeling right now.


seriously..... how did my life get to this!



i walked out and stared at deepness of well in the backyard.


wouldn't be just awesome to just fall and disappear.


no I was not suicidal..I just have lost the will to live. more like lost the will to look at deshmukhs and hear their vile taunts.




kiske liye jeena.... i could ask but then her face pops up- aayi.



the woman who is the living truth of my father's betrayal.


the word najayaz pierced through my skin into my heart whenever i look at her.



she is trying...god she is ..for me..


she looks at me as if am the daughter who was meant for her but alas madhuri.....



now also as i stand here in darkness, i know she must be fidgeting with her saari worried about me being alone in the outhouse while all others were busy celebrating in the house.



ab kya kar sakthe hai..i was banned by aao saheb from entering the house.


nothing new there though. 


apparently I am apshagun..watever that means.



i rolled my eyes at the absurdity.



the woman considers her own grand daughter apshagun. i am not well versed in her village ways but to me one who pushes the people who love them away for some superstition is more apshaguni in my eyes.


i shook my head getting images of her twisted face out of my head.


i was about to turn back but unfortunately my feet slipped and i felt myself falling into the well.



everything was so dark and it was so..... so cold.



oh bappa..was my last thought before i lost my consciousness.



i did not know if it was minutes or hours when i regained my bearings back.


to my surprise i was in my bed , tucked in with a million blankets.


i looked around frantically not knowing how i reached back here. 


was all that just my nightmare!?


i suddenly realised that my clothes were still wet making me understand that falling into the well was not just a  nightmare but was reality.


i stood up at once only to feel dizzy.


suddenly two hands wrapped around me steadying me.


the palms little rougher than usual soft ones of aayi making me look up at once.


i was taken aback when i saw it belonged to man i did not recognise.


"i could charge you for that stunt outside.." he said sternly making me look at him confused.


i thought he would leave me but he gently made me sit on the bed.


"aap...?" i asked confused.


"i am malhar ...malhar rane...."


i racked my brain for a malhar rane but came up empty.


"the half of wada belongs to me.." he said seeing my confused look.


oh my god he was sampada's husband.


sampada andhi thi kya to leave this man for that wahiyat atharv.


he rolled his eyes at my expression.


"now are you going tell me why did u jump into the well?" he asked seriously.


"hain? yeh aap kya kah rahe hai..i did not jump..i fell accidently."


"accha? i saw you ghooring at the well followed by splash. you were sure not summoning devil staring at it like that" he said sarcastically.


" i was just watching the water."


"accha? raat ke 9 baje? u do know that it is pitch black out there na"


i sighed.


okay it might have  looked like that , cant blame nim.


"see malharji..i was just thinking about my life...but ithni bhi nahi ki chalang laga doon...i would never do that to my aayi."


"aayi? waise who are you...are you a relative?" he looked really curious.


well cant blame him..aadhi raath ko ek ladki is busy jumping into his well and almost cutting of his water supply can do that to a person.


i sighed again not sure where to begin.


"yep you could say that...am aao saheb's najayaz granddaughter." i said with a smile that looked more like grimance trying to reassure him that i was not some psycho stranger obsessed with his well.


"huh? naajayz..what?" he asked confused.


"long story dude..very long story..."


"i got time..." he said with a smile surprising me.


he himself looked surprised at his expression but shrugged and sat on my bed and looked at me expectantly.

.....and that is how me kalyani deshmukh met malhar rane and fell in love with his dimpled smile.




index


part 2 -https://www.indiaforums.com/forum/topic/5108379?pn=12#151031487 (page- 12)

PART3- https://www.indiaforums.com/forum/topic/5108379?pn=20

(page-20)

part 4 - page 24

Edited by lavender_mist - 4 years ago


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Posted: 4 years ago

 omg mere jaan le loge ke mere adha half 

*Edited 

beautiful os

loved it 

wish KalMa met like this

then koi Mus nehi hota

kitna accha hota

like their cute convo

m really curious for more ..

M1 my Adha half likh daal na next part kuch parts aur de 

Edited by KrishnaSourav - 4 years ago
Posted: 4 years ago

Aww! Beautiful

liked how Malhar ji saved Kalyani

liked their cute conversation 

last line is❤️

thanks for writing 👍🏼

Posted: 4 years ago

Originally posted by KrishnaSourav


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 omg mere jaan le loge ke mere adha half 

missing thr has made me lose sm marbles babe😆

Posted: 4 years ago

Originally posted by Bacillusbadius


Aww! Beautiful

liked how Malhar ji saved Kalyani

liked their cute conversation 

last line is❤️

thanks for writing 👍🏼


thank you bhagya

it makes me so happy that u actually liked it🤗

Posted: 4 years ago

Originally posted by bluemoon255


missing thr has made me lose sm marbles babe😆

accha hua uss bahane hume os toh milna parene ke liye😆

Posted: 4 years ago

Originally posted by KrishnaSourav


accha hua uss bahane hume os toh milna parene ke liye😆

yeah yeah enjoy while i cry in corner for ur baby ff🤣

Posted: 4 years ago

This is such a relief ! How nice ! Such stories boost u up when u are in a foul and confused mood.thank u for writing .

Posted: 4 years ago

Originally posted by pyaar2012


This is such a relief ! How nice ! Such stories boost u up when u are in a foul and confused mood.thank u for writing .

thank u titli 🤗

am glad re

Posted: 4 years ago

Originally posted by bluemoon255


yeah yeah enjoy while i cry in corner for ur baby ff🤣

ole mele adha half crying kyuon kallu ne pita kya tujhe 🤣 aayega baby baby ff aayega mere sar khalya tha koi manhush ne last few days 

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