YOU ARE MINE.....AKSHAN FF (CHAPTER 32 updated pg 69) - Page 4

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Posted: 4 years ago
#31

Akshat bechara🤣🤣🤣🤣

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Posted: 4 years ago
#32

🤣ye sach mein funny tha🤣bechari dadi v frustrate ho gyi inse🤣

Next part v aaj hi milega na😃as aur wait krna hamse nhi ho paa rha plz😒

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Posted: 4 years ago
#33

Originally posted by: Kammy02

🤣ye sach mein funny tha🤣bechari dadi v frustrate ho gyi inse🤣

Next part v aaj hi milega na😃as aur wait krna hamse nhi ho paa rha plz😒

Ji jarur aaj hi milega next part...work in progress....will update soon

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Posted: 4 years ago
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Originally posted by: Akshananju

Akshat bechara🤣🤣🤣🤣

sher jindal sherni ke saamne bechara ban hi jata h🤣

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Posted: 4 years ago
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CHAPTER 3(the ahem part)😳

Jindal mansion

Guddans situation was no better she hadnt slept well because of one hulk of man who made her scream his name every night in dreams.

Guddan pov

Yeh kya ho gaya hai mujhe...pehele ajeeb sapne dikhte the aur ab...Doctor ne kaha bedrest par jab hi sone ki koshish karti hoon bar bar mujhe jindal saab  ki yaad aati hai...bed pe rest hi nahi milta.Pov ends.guddan  walks to her sofa but unforutunately she slips because of the water on the ground.

(Akshat in front of jindal mansion...everyone was sleeping as it was late when he returned..)

"Jaon...nahi..jaon...nahi"Gosh from when did akshat have problem in dashing inside his own house.Suddenly akshnt hears guddans voice and rushes inside.

"Guddan!!!Tum thik ho...laga toh nahi."akshat  carries her inside her room and makes her sleep on the bed.

"Haan..jndal saab  hm thik h ...woh bas pair slip ho gaya." Guddan replies.

They soon realize that they were in the same position like before and break apart so as to not lose their mind again.

"Guddan woh...mein..woh..uss din..."guddan knew what akshat was trying to tell.She didnt want him to break their friendship because of the kiss.

"Konsa din jindal saab ...mujhe kuch bhi yaad nahi."This was soo not guddan.

Akshat was shocked...angry or happy he had no idea.He was happy that guddan was behaving normal and not awkward but angry that she forgot about their first kiss.He was repeating that kiss everyday on his brain and she seemed to forget it.But right now he had to build their friendship.

"Haan guddan.vo..itne din ho gye na ghr k bahar..meeting k chakkar mei to muje raat ki flight mili to vo hi le li."Akshat was also behaving normal but keeping a fine distance from the very tempting bed.

It wasnt long before that they started behaving as if nothing had happened.

(One day later)

"Jindal saab .bas bhi karo..aisa lag raha hai jaise aap mere pati ya dost  nahi balki mere papa ho."

"Arey apni har dost ka dhyaan rakhna meri zimedari hai...khas kar uss dost ka jo itni smart hai...intelligent..hai..sensitive hai.."

"Bas..bas jindal  saab itni tareef mein digest nahi kar paungi."

They both were back to normal...but their dreams werent.

"Jindal saab hme aapse ek baat krni thi ..."

"Haan bolo guddan"

"Kya aap hmko apne office mei kuch kaam denge...hmko bhi kaam krna h "

"Haan kyu nhi...pr jb tum puri tarah se thik ho jao...tum mere office mei kaam kr skti ho.." He was really happy listening to guddan..he informed everyone about guddans wish and evruone got soo happy..

(Two days later...at night...guddan was alone at home..as everyone was out to attend an very imp marriage..akshat was in office)

Jindal mansion..

Guddan was trying to read a book but her thoughts were occupied by just one person...one ruthless chef..friend...when suddenly her fone rang..

"Hello"

"Hello...hmari pyaari..jawan hot sasu maa"

"Parv tume na hum chodenge nhi....zubaan kaat denge..dobara aisi baatei boli to" Guddan knew who would be so ..

"Arey arey gussa mt hoiye..kya pta app idhar hme daant rhi ho..aur udhar apke best frnd..pati parmeshwar ko kuch.."

"Parv...maar dalenge..agar kuch kaha iske aagey.."afraid of parvs statement..she called akshat..

" Jindal saab fone uthayiye"she was calling her continously..but he was not picking up the calls..

(He had finished his work and was returning bavk home...but his fone was dead..so bcoz of tgat he wasnt able to contact her....he reached home)

"Guddan meri chinta kr rhi hogi...muje jldi jana chahiye ghr..aur to aur mai usko inforn bi krna bhul gya ki muje aate aate late ho jaegi..ghr jati hi baras  padegi mujpe" Thought he..

(Jindal mansion..

Guddan  was almost in tears because akshats phone was coming switched off and it was way past 12 .She thought she lost akshat .Suddenly she saw lights on her veranda.)

She came out to see who it was and found Akshat driving the car.Her happiness had no limits.

Akshat could see the tears in guddans eyes and came quickly out of the car.

Guddan was soo happy that she ran and hugged him and planted a kiss on his lips.

Akshat was hell shocked...this was the first time when guddan had kissed him.He knew he should break apart but he had missed her...and her petite body against his.

He started kissing her and they soon forgot that they were kissing in mansions garden.The gentle peck had now turned into a ferocious one. Both their tongues were doing the most passionate dance and both their bodies were very close.Akshat  finally realized that they were in the garden so he carried her to the house all the while kissing her and releshing her soft body against his.Guddan was feeling soo good...she knew she didnt require any bed rest.She wrapped her legs around his waist as soon as Akshat carried her.

Akshat closed the door and took her to the dining table where he set her down and started kissing her with the same passion. Guddan needed more.She wanted Akshats  body against her.She tried to open his shirt which he understood and broke apart just to remove.Akshat started kissing her neck which resulted in guddans loud moans.They both were loving this. Akshats hand on guddans waist and hair...his lips on her neck...Her hands on his bare back...her lips kissing his shoulder.Akshat  was close enough to remove her night dress when Guddan  broke apart from the kiss.Damn it was Guddans phone. She picked up her phone just to find Her dads number on it.She couldnt believe this...they had done it again.Gosh why cant she behave like the usual chirpy guddan infront of akshat . She picked the call and started speaking to her father which was quiet hard because she still hadnt come out from her passion filled zone.

Akshat was cursing himself for again losing control...He couldnt believe this he had done it again..that too this far.He wore his Shirt and thought of waiting when the maid came with his phone inside her house.

"Saab ji woh apke car ka darwaza khula tha aur phone ki ghanti baaj rahi thi toh mein leke aa gayi."Oh no Akshat had forgot that he had kept his was on charge in the car...it wasnt much charged but still it was Dadis  call so he accepted it. Who had called him to ask him to pick them up from the venue as their car got punctured.

Gosh !!Guddan wanted to speak to Akshat but her father wasnt allowing and on the other hand Dadi wanted  Akshat to pick them up.

(Guddan saw him leaving and Akshat  turned towards guddan for one last time and left.)

(In this whole situation...the maid was terribly confused because of their appearances.)

Akshat came to the venue to pick them not before swiping his lips completely and making himself 100%presentable. 

Guddan ate the dinner alone in the dining table which only made her remember about Akshat.

She went to the room...kept on waiting but at last slept...

He reached home...gosh!! he forgot about the homes condition....what would evryone think ....everyone stepped in.. but was shock ..house was totally...cleaned...hmmm!it seemed she had cleared evrything...everyone went to their respective rooms ...so he...only to find her sleeping peacefully

With this left with no option ...he laid beside her with pillow boundary still there..and slept..

How was the chapter??😃 

NEXT:CHAPTER4

Edited by Viditian1 - 4 years ago
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Posted: 4 years ago
#36

Ye bhushan papa v na accha moment bigad kr rakh diya

Continue asap 😛

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Posted: 4 years ago
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Originally posted by: Kammy02

Ye bhushan papa v na accha moment bigad kr rakh diya

Continue asap 😛

will cont soon...bhushan papa ki timing hi kharab h

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Posted: 4 years ago
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Originally posted by: Viditian1

will cont soon...bhushan papa ki timing hi kharab h

Kb milega next update😛

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Posted: 4 years ago
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Originally posted by: Kammy02

Kb milega next update😛

jb aap chaho....apko kb chahiye?? Aur konsi story ka chahiye??😃

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Posted: 4 years ago
#40

Awesome update 

Love it

Continue soon