YOU ARE MINE.....AKSHAN FF (CHAPTER 32 updated pg 69)

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Hlo everyone.....was getting bored due to no akshan on the weekends....thought of writing something and ended up writing this.....so without further this and thats....here we go...

Akshat was trying to do something on his laptop..sitting on sofa kept in their room....but all his thoughts were acquired by just one person....he lifted his head only to find her still unconsciuos.....and again his mind occupied the thoughts....

Akshat's pov...

Thank god....guddan thik h...mai darr hi gya tha.......kya zarurat thi....muje bachane k liye apni jaan jokhim mei dalne ki....agar use kuch ho jata to....kya zarurat thi aagey aane ki jb rocky ne muje marne k liye goli chalayi thi...wo to shukr h goli sirf ise chu kr nikli thi....agar aaj guddan ko kuch ho jata to mai apne aap ko kbi maaf nhi kr pata.......sb kuch hua hi meri wajah se h....na hi mai guddan ki zid maanta angad ko ghr pr rkhne ki ....na hi wo muje kidnap krta...na guddan ko koi takleef hoti.....aur jb thik ho hi gya tha to kyo rocky bhaga jail se .....kyo meri guddan ko jhutha fone call krke bulaya khandar k pass....vo to sahi samay pr mai uth gya nhi go aaj ....nhi....ab uske bina rhna akshat jindal se na ho paega......pta nhi konsa rishta h hmara.....ladte jhagadte.....pta hi nhi chla ki kb vo mere liye sirf ek bojh se...meri patni ban gai...aur aaj jb maine usko sbke saamne mangalsutra pehnaya to aisa lga ki....pta nhi kya  h ye ...pr jb mangalsutra pehnane k baad lga ki sb thik h  to.............

Flashback........

Everything got settled....they rescued angad from rocky.....given angad and saru bahu one chance more......and the most important....he accepted her wholeheartedly as his wife.....they both were on the cloud nine after hearing the true promises made by each other ........... Everyone went to their respective rooms......he gifted her data pack....but the first call she recieved after recharging her fone ....non of them knew would be soo dangerous....she pickwd up the call....and just ran outside the house....getting afraid he also followed her car in his car....only to see her car getting stopped in front of an old khander....she get off the car ...so he...only to see rocky coming out of the khander.. He escaped from the jail so.he called her ........he knew why....after a fiasco.....getting fed up rocky fired the bullet to shoot akshat...but she was she...she came in front and bullet shot her...she was quickly takent to hospital whereas police arrived and caught him again...but the tjing which was bothering him now was his wife....doctors did their job..and told him the bullet just went touchnig her and hv dressed her small wound.....she was perfevtly fine ...thing was that she just got an anxiety attack...so she got fainted.........she was brought back home.....but she was still unconcious.....he made her sleep on the bed..and settled himself on sofa to work..but ended up.....by (akshats pov 😃)

Flashback over....

Pov continued...

Har baar khatre mei meri guddan ka ana hi myo jaruri hota h...kyo problems uski life se khatam nhi ho jati...agar problems uski life se khatam nhi ho skti to bhagwan uske hissa ka har dukh ..har takleef   muje de do....pta nhi kyo nhi dwkh pata hu guddan ko toot te hue..rote hue..kyo ..kya ho  rha h muje.......kuch smajh nhi aa  rha........

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How was that.....well this was not ghe first chapter this was just a pov......which i thouvht would be necessary for  the story line.....chapter 1 would be updated tonight......

Plz share ur precious views.....and igonre the typos😃...luv ...................viditian aka shaina❤️

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INDEX :

PROLOGUE...PG 1

CHAPTER1...PG 2

CHAPTER2...PG 4

CHAPTER3...PG5

CHAPTER4...PG7

CHAPTER5...PG8

CHAPTER6...PG10

CHAPTER7...PG12

CHAPTER8...PG15

CHAPTER9...PG17

CHAPTER10...PG19

CHAPTER11...PG21

CHAPTER12...PG 23

CHAPTER13...PG 25

CHAPTER14...PG 27

CHAPTER15...PG 29

CHAPTER16...PG 31

CHAPTER17...PG 33

CHAPTER 18...PG 35

CHAPTER19...PG37

CHAPTER 20...PG39

CHAPTER 21...PG42

CHAPTER 22...PG44

CHAPTER23...PG46

CHAPTER24...PG47

CHAPTER25...PG 50

CHAPTER26...PG 52

CHAPTER 27...PG 55

CHAPTER 28...PG 57

CHAPTER 29...PG 60

CHAPTER 30...PG 64

CHAPTER 31...PG 66

CHAPTER32... PG69

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