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Originally posted by: KrishnaSourav
hey update kya comment
btw kya iye sab uss sr ke liye bawari mein duba do atul ko sara phasad iske liye 🤣
Sach mein duba bohut ho gaya nautanki
So happy u like it rakhi❤️
Originally posted by: KrishnaSourav
hey update kya comment
btw kya iye sab uss sr ke liye bawari mein duba do atul ko sara phasad iske liye 🤣
Sach mein duba bohut ho gaya nautanki
So happy u like it rakhi❤️
Loved this version on the story without any misunderstandings. It is awesome. ❤️
Waiting for the new part.
Simi🤗
Thanks yaar
Originally posted by: rammehra103
Sorry for late reply
Interesting plot without mu ..loved it 🥳
Both part are awesome 🥳
Update soon
Jyoti🤗
How r u feeling now.
Take care choti
I don't take sorry , icecreams, hugs, kissys only leti hoon🤣
part- 3
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malhar stood shocked as he heard a gun shot. he rushed to find his wife...ex wife plunging into the river below from the cliff.
he ran with all his might but could only watch as the water rippled below.
this was it, his life perhaps had only this much happiness left, he thought as he stared in the water below.
the woman he loved just fell to her death. he didn't know which was more painful, the dead of the woman he loved or the wound of her betrayal.
"sampada..." he shouted as he fell on his knees not able to take the pain anymore.
the darkness was closing on him. it was as if his will for living has suddenly vanished. he just wanted to be numb.
"malhar..." he was pulled out of his thoughts by a shivering mayi.
"maine goli nahi maari malhar..." she pleaded with her eyes.
malhar just kept staring at her, his mind miles away not comprehending what she was saying.
"malhar mein.."
"bas..pawar inhe le jawo aur statement leke chodu dho...." he said as he snapped out of his thoughts and walked to his jeep without looking back.
they reached the police station without any further exchange of words.
malhar now numb from all the events and anupriya in shock.
"sir yeh wahan se mila hai.." pawar said as he extended mangalsutra which once adored his wife's neck.
malhar closed his palms around it , squishing it with all his might and reliving the pain of her betrayal.
blood started flowing from his hand as the mangalsutra broke his skin with the force of his hold.
"malhar ...yeh kya kar rahe ho..." anupriya cried as he ran to him.
"hatiye!" he said rudely as he took back his hand.
"malhar .... sunona meri baat. kya tumhe lagtha hai meine goli maari unhe?"
"aap bas shukir manayiye ki aap jail ke bahar kadi hai, ander nahi.."
"malhar maine nahi maara unhe.."
"accha...kaise vishwas karroom aapka maine..huh mayi kaise? aap jaanti thi jab atharv sampada ko le gaya par aap ne ek sabd nahi bola mujhse. mayi samjtha tha na aapko mein...pphir bhi aapne mujhe kuch nahi bataya..woh kal ki ayi huyi ladki mujpe aapse zyada vishwas karthi hai...agar kalyani ne nahi bola hota toh yeh sab mere ankhon ke saamne hote huye bhi bhuddhu ki tarah kada rahtha...."
he wanted to continue but his phone rang and he looked to see that the call was from the hospital.
he answered to find that pillu was again crying for his aayi.
malhar took a deep breath and walked to his jeep with mayi trailing behind.
he stopped his jeep in front of Ahaliya nivas to hear shouting from inside.
he rushed inside only to catch a falling kalyani who was being pushed out of the house by aao saheb
"yeh kya hora hai"
"malhar accha huwa tum aagaye...yeh sab iski galti hai...dekho hume yeh chitti milli anupriya ke kamre se."
malhar took the letter and was astonished to see sampada putting all the blame on kalyani.
that is when he realised that sampada never knew that kalyani had told the truth to malhar.
malhar for the n th time that day realised how cunning his ex wife actually was.
she knew very well malhar would be angry and she wrote the letter to direct his anger towards kalyani and in the meantime she could escape easily.
malhar sat in the chair with an audible thud thinking about how deep his ex wife's betrayal went.
"aao saheb aap aise kaise kah sakthi hai...kalyani ne aisa kuch nahi kiya." anupriya said hugging a crying kalyani.
"tum chup raho anupriya..iss ladki ne hi sampada ko uksaya..usse jaane par mazboor kiya."
"aao saheb bas kijiye..inn sabke liye kalyani nahi hai zimedarr. agar aap ugli utana chathe hai toh aap par bhi utt sakthi hai..sampada ne mujhe batha diya ki woh aapke paas aayi thi rothe gidgidathe ki woh atharv se shaadi karna chahthi hai..par aapne uski ek nahi suni.."
malhar stood up at once hearing this.
"aao saheb...."
"hume maaf kar dena malhar par hum humare naathi ka vivaah uss nalayak se kaise hone dethe."
malhar had enough. he realised that the entire deshmukh clan was perhaps responsible for the whole mess in his life. he was so lost in his hatred that that he missed all the heated arguments that followed between anupriya and the rest of deshmukhs.
aao saheb having had enough , finally took a stick and was about to hit kalyani.
"aao saheb!" cried anupriya but the stick never touched kalyani as malhar blocked it with his hands.
"malhar..."
malhar had enough of deshmukh clan. his anger getting better of him. now he just wanted to make their lives miserable.
"aao saheb ...patha hai kal yeh kahan thi?" he asked
"malhar.."
"jawab dijiye...aap kya jawab degi..aapke naak ke neeche sampada atharv ke saath bhaag gayi aur aapko khano khan khabar nahi....tu suniye yeh mere saath aspthaal mein thi...apni neeedh aur aaram chodukar taaki mera ek din ke baccha zinda rah sake jabki uski khud ki aayi apne aashiq kw saath ishq lada rahi thi..."
"malhar...yeh kya kah rahe ho? mera naathu zinda hai.." aparna asked as she stood up from the chair where she was crying for her dead daughter.
malhar just ignored her and continued.
"aap issse najayaz kahke insult karthe hai jab iski usme koyi galathi hi nahi thi par aap ko sampada ka naajayaz rista nahi dikh raha huh?woh atharv ke saath rista rakh rahi thi mere peet peeche usse aap kya kahegi?"
"malhar....par woh...sampada ne iske hi aane se kiya yeh sab. warna woh kabhi aisa nahi karthi..dekho isne tumhe bhi apne bas mein kar rakha hai. hai toh yeh madhuri ki beti..dusro ke pati ko hadpana iske khhoon mein hai.." aao saheb smiled , her mind calculating her next move carefully.
"aao saheb!" malhar thundered, he was so lost in his anger that reality was slipping away.
"malhar..aawaz unchi karne se sach nahi badaltha....tumne hi toh kaha tha yeh tumhare saath thi, ab hum kya jaane yeh aspathal mein thi ya kahin aur thi.."
"aao saheb aap kya kah rahi hai.." anupriya pleaded.
"ahalya yeh kya aanab shanab bol rahi ho.." rao saheb scolded.
"aap sab chup rahiye.. mein malhar se pooch rahi hoon. yeh najayaz ladki aadhi raath ko ek anya purush ke saath jaathi hai, yeh toh hume atharv ke kamre mein bhi mili thi na....aaj shaadi ke din yeh apne madap mein akeli kadi hai toh log iske charitra par sawal utayenge na..ab kon karega isse shaadi..yeh shehar nahi hai jo sab iski manmani ko bhool jaaye.jiski pehchaan hi kalank se bara ho usse aur kya ummed kar sakthe hai hum."
" bas aao saheb ...aap ithni gir jayegi..maine socha bhi nahi....uske kaaran mera baccha aaj zinda hai ..agar woh nahi aathi toh pata nahi kya ho jaatha, u know what kalyani mein kami hai woh yeh hai ki uske surname aap se juda hai..." malhar thundered in anger.
"hume koyi shok nahi hai isse apna naam dene ki...tum ithne bade bade bashan kar rahe ho..kya tum karoge isse shaadi.." aao saheb asked as she knew malhar was too lost in anger to think logically.
everyone gasped .
"aao saheb.. aap kya.." aparna started but stopped by aao saheb.
"maine malhar se poocha hai....tumhara baccha maa mantha hai isse na.."
"ahilya..tum yeh sab apne maaan ko bachane keliye kar rahe ho na.." rao saheb aasked.
"maan tho hume bada pyaara hai, usse bhi pyaar hai humara baccha par yeh iske khaand ke baad hum kya hi bole..ab malhar ithne bade bade bashan dhe raha hai iske charitra ke baarein mein tho woh khud zindagi kyun nahi de deta isse."
"nahi malhar...' anupriya pleaded.
"haan malhar naa hi tho karega kyunki usse bhi patha hai kaisi ladki hai yeh..yeh tho..." aao saheb taunted knowing very well malhar was gonna snap at any moment. she knew that malhar was forever grateful to kalyani for saving his son's life and he would do anything to keep her safe because of that very reason.
"bas!" malhar shouted making every one scared of his anger.
malhar pulled kalyani towards him with such force that she almost fell on him. he looked in her tear filled eyes and took the decision that would change their lives forever.
he pulled her towards bapp'a idol and took the sindoor placed on the taal.
he started reciting mantras as he filled her partition with sindhoor mixed with blood from his wound while kalyani and others stood too shocked to react.
"malharji.."
"shh.. he said as he continued chanting the mantra, making a make shift havankhund.
anupriya tried to rush to them but was restrained by a smirking aao saheb. after all this was what she actually wanted. ek teer se dho nishan- to save her lost respect in the community and also get rid of kalyani from their house.
she mentally patted herself for success of her plan
"nahi malhar nahi.." anupriya pleaded.
"malharji..please.." kalyani started but his look stopped her from continuing.
he continued his chant as he took pheres around the holy fire sealing their fate together forever.
next he took the thread tied on bappa and tied around her neck signifying her marital status.
"vivaham samapanam asthuu.." he ended the mantra and turned her towards the shocked desh mukhs.
"ab yeh deshmukh nahi hai..maine iske uss kalank ko mita diya hai..yeh ab se meri patni kalyani malhar rane hai...kisiki naazayaz aulad nahi ab yeh ,balki meri jaayaz patni hai aur rahegi...ab phirse ek baar meine iske baarein mein kuch sunna toh dhyan mein rakiye ki mera revolver sirf dikane ke liye nahi bana hai...uda doonga sabko.."
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hope u like this one
pls comment to let me know
yep am more filmy than kallu
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this is beautiful
Malhar felt hurt cause anu didn't say its like son hurt from his mother but eventually , he will understand
Its much better than any mu like the show
I really feel for kalyani ,how easily as all time hurt n blame her...n how easily she is planning again
is she woman or some machine
poor malhar ..but this pain will give both KalMa a new destination n new ray of hope...
I am really waiting for next part
Originally posted by: KrishnaSourav
this is beautiful
Malhar felt hurt cause anu didn't say its like son hurt from his mother but eventually , he will understand
Its much better than any mu like the show
I really feel for kalyani ,how easily as all time hurt n blame her...n how easily she is planning again
is she woman or some machine
poor malhar ..but this pain will give both KalMa a new destination n new ray of hope...
I am really waiting for next part
rakhi🤗
i always wondered y in the show everythg ghoom phirke kaalu ke sirr hi aatha hai
and i hate this word nnajayaz i mean it s not even her fault tbh atul ko najayaz bulawo after all its him mistake.
thank u rakhi means a lot
wah fullmoon badiya hai
awesome update dear
loved it
this AS nah uff
finally malharji neh kallu ko apna biwi banaya
chatpat shaadi
ab uss deshmukhs ko unki jagah dikhavo malharji
please do continue soon
Originally posted by: bluemoon255
rakhi🤗
i always wondered y in the show everythg ghoom phirke kaalu ke sirr hi aatha hai
and i hate this word nnajayaz i mean it s not even her fault tbh atul ko najayaz bulawo after all its him mistake.
thank u rakhi means a lot
Nishu 🤗
ITV lead so gum phir ke kallu pe hi aayega
are As ka khoon hain atul n oh bhi bete kaise bhi ho dosh toh madhuri ka tha as per as ...n if its kalyan means boy than girl then as had taken him back, just its grand daughter...dimag mein ...
Welcome Nishu..ur story is really good n m loving this
Loved third part also! This version of story is best! Malhar ne AS ko bahut acche se sunaya. He took stand for Kalyani👏👏. Shaadi part is amazing ❤️, Malhar ne Kalyani ka haath thama. Thanks for writing. Please keep writing 👍🏼
No matter what i am just uncomfortable with the idea of a forced marraige. He could have just asked her to marry him for his child and she probably would
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