KALMA FF - A promise .... Part 5 updated. Read author note pg 17 - Page 6

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Posted: 4 years ago
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Originally posted by: Vermilion

Thanks di for loving it. BTW can you please tell me your name. 

Di I have posted teaser for next chapter. Plz like it. 

Simran 

You can call me simmy no need to call me di

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Posted: 4 years ago
#52

Neera teaser is awesome 

I'm eagerly waiting for your update 

Update soon 

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Posted: 4 years ago
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My God neera ..your teaser is amazing .....👏

Nature is welcoming ...a legend .....  Malharji ..who is fuming in anger to save his ladylove ...

Please Mera cutie beta😆 update KRega na  jldi 🥳

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#54

Wow Neera read everything in one go and must say your story is gripping and the premise is promising ❤😁

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#55

Awesome update🤗

Athu is giving *k..k...k....k... kalyani sirf meri hai* vibes🤣

Tani

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Posted: 4 years ago
#56

Part:::3

                       Arrival of the legend 

Winds are flowing unusually. They (winds) are quiet like white but have some mystery like black .Some noise are speaking to world about arrival of legend. Birds start chirping to each other and bow down to the almighty legend. Rain welcomed the legend with cool water and roaring thunderstorm. This legend is angry for his love.

This legend is malhar rane.😉

He walks from the deep forest to the AN ( IN BETWEEN Journey he takes bath and change clothes at some waterfall. You can imagine him to standing in waterfall like bahubali..👍🏼)

His fury is undefined and much more than the anger of a human...

Malhar calls his friends which are para commandos and comes to Aurangabad on holiday ...

He requested his friends to come there as wearing civilian dresses only..

Till the arrival of Paracommandos he inform sarthak kaka about Maai and ask him to take care of Anupriya. He also enquired about other family members and especially Kalyani....

Sarthak kaka went to the forest...

Atharv is still holding beer in his hand and glaring Kalyani.

Atharv has ordered his goons to take care of his security.

There are about 10 goons in AN. Four are in the verandah ( outside AN). Three in the AN. Two are guarding the AN member and one is standing at the door of atharv room...

Malhar slowly signalled his friends to throw tear gas in AN and verandah....

He also make them sure that they should not threw that tear gas in Kalyani room and where the family members are kept..

Paracommandos throw tear gas in the verandah and AN.

All the seven goons start coughing and loosing their consciousness.

Malhar and his friends beat them ( I am not good in writing action scenes so already sorry) Dishoom Dishoom Dishoom!!!!!

Khachaak Khachaak Khachaak!!!!!!

Boom Boom Boom!!!

Ouch ouch ouch!!!🤣

All goons are arrested by para commandos and Police.

Malhar also protected family members by switching off the lights and by beating goons in dark....

Malhar ordered pawar to take all the family members to hospital...

Malhar then order his friends to go to all atharv illegal places and find evidence against him..

Malhar then hide behind pillar and keep eye on the goon before atharv room door...

He take a rod in his hand and bang it on goon head. He just loose his balance and get unconscious. Malhar then kick on the door and door gets open.

Atharv see malhar and get shocked.

Atharv : Mmmmm.. Malhar tum jinda kaise Ho. Itni uchai se girne ke baad koi nahi Bach sakta. Shayad ye sapna hai ya tum bhoot ban gaye...

Malhar : Are atharv bhau apse nafrat hi Itni ki hai ki agar ise nahi nibhata toh is soul ko shanti nahi milti...

Arz kiya hai

Tumse nafrat ne Marne nahi diya

Kalyani ki chaah ne Marne bhi nahi diya

Maut se lautkar aaya hoo

Sirf do cheezo ke liye

Teri zindagi khatm karne

Aur Kalyani ke saath zindagi jeene

Gaye atharv tum to

( Ha Ha Ha)

Atharv get deeply scared

Atharv : Nahi tum nahi maar sakte Mujhe. Pakiya, champu, nikil kaha Mar gaye...

Malhar : Are mare nahi bas jail me so rahe hai. Come let's fight baby 😂

Malhar step forward and atharv move backwards.Malhar take glass bottle from table and bang it on atharv head.

Atharv get frightened he pushes malhar and run from there...

Atharv ran on roads and get struck by a moving truck ( Bada se bada wala)...

He whirl around and looses his balance and get fall down in the adjacent valley...

All police member witness this but malhar couldn't.

As he remain in the room only and go to Kalyani...

Kalyani was still lying unconsciously on bed. For a normal person she looks like a expression less doll. But Malhar can read the expression less face of his doll.

Her gloomy face was like a thorn piercing in his eyes. He can see the sadness, anxiety, worry, anger on her face. He is critisizing himself. But he control his emotions and went near to Kalyani. He don't want to disturb Kalyani so he just sat beside him.

And keep on looking his part living life in some other body.

After 2-3 hours, Kalyani gain her consciousness. She collect herself and slowly open her eyes. She saw malhar in front of her eyes. Malhar was restlessly looking at her. When he get that Kalyani is awake, he is on cloud nine. But he doesn't want to loose his happiness by screaming or dancing bcoz he want to share his happiness with Kalyani.

Kalyani slowly tries to get up but due to her weakness she can't. Malhar help her to sit .

Kalyani gets super excited emotionally that now she wants to talk endlessly.

But malhar put his hand on her mouth and signalled her to be calm and silent through his eyes only.

Kalyani shut herself and looks at malhar.

Malhar spread his arms and arrest Kalyani in his warmth. They just free themselves with outrage of thoughts. And keep experiencing something divine in their heart which is soothing their aching soul. This is something beyond words which no one can explain.

They do not want to name it. They want just to live in this eternity . And they are living in it currently.

After one hour Kalyani jerk off malhar and suddenly stand. Malhar was so engrossed in that divine that he can't recognise what had happened. He was wandering in the heaven with Kalyani.

Kalyani went towards Kitchen and come back with some water and fruit.

She comes back to the room. She found malhar in a state of lost mind. She goes near to malhar and put her hand on his hands. He comes back to the real world.

Malhar eventually lost about that Mahatma ji and his words about resemblance of kalma to shiv sati due to some spiritual power of Mahatma ji.( He lost this bcoz god wants them to prove themselves to the world as the purest form of divine love)

Malhar in the very first moment scream due to unbearable pain. Kalyani saw him. But she doesn't get such hype. She move towards the closet and bring out first aid kit.

She start opening malhar shirt button and get terribly broken when she saw the deep wounds and scars on his chest. Tears wants to escape but they may make Kalyani more weaker.

Malhar is already crying due to unbearable pain so she can't be weak. She has to be strong so that malhar can feel safe.

She controlled herself. And clean his wounds. He was horribly screaming due to pain. Kalyani kisses over his eyes to make him calm. Then she keep kissing on his chest to soothe his pain. When malhar relax and stop crying bcoz now he is enjoying😆.. Then Kalyani put bandages on his wounds.

She also put bandages on scratches on his forehead.

She is trying so hard to control herself. Anywhere in her soul her little, innocent heart crying very much.

When malhar feels better he ask Kalyani

Malhar : Kalyani tumne khana khaya kya.

Kalyani : Mmmmm Malhar ji aap ne bhi toh khana nahi khaya. Chupchap khana khao. Main Lekar aati hu.

Kalyani bring plate and sit on bed where malhar is resting.

She feeds malhar with her hands.

Malhar keep on looking in her deep eyes.

After some time he ask Kalyani to eat food .

He feeds Kalyani with his hands. After eating some fruits she loose herself in the flood of emotions. She start sobbing. Malhar ask her to say whatever she has in her heart.

Kalyani : Malhar ji I am sorry. Meri vajah se apko itna dard sehna pada. Agar Mai apki jindagi mai aati hi nahi to kitna accha hota. You never have to bear so much pain.

Malhar ji agar pehle pata hota toh kabki apko chodkar chali jati.

Par ab nahi ja sakti kyunki ab mai apse pyaar karne lagi hoo. I know you are my soul mate now. Sorry malhar ji...

Kalyani starts crying again..

Malhar : Kalyani you don't need to be sorry. Kabhi kabhi saccha pyaar baht dard deta hai. Humne Jo dard saha vo ye proof karta that we have something much greater than true love even.

Aur ha agar tum meri zindagi Mai nahi aai hoti toh Mai kabka Mar chuka hota . Agar tum kabhi mujhse door gayi toh mai mar jaaonga.

Kalyani keep her finger on his mouth.

Kalyani : Shut up.

Malhar give a very sweet smile when he see red flared nose of Kalyani.

Then Kalyani kiss on malhar forehead, eyes and his hands.

Malhar lie down his head in Kalyani lap and sleeps like a baby.

Kalyani also sleeps there.

They both sleep in moon lit remarking the most beautiful soul in the world....

On the other hand sarthak kaka wandering in the deep forest to find the temple where Anupriya is.

While Anupriya lying half unconsciously on floor of shrine. She is assuming the moments she is living are the some last moments of her life. She remembers about his daughter, Kalyani. She remembers about his son, malhar.. And Pillu.

She is also missing his beloved ""Sarthak kaka """..

She doesn't know why she is missing him so much . And nor she want to know.

She is just swimming in the world of serene and beautiful love.

With the help of some local guys he reaches to the temple. In mid between he already called ambulance.

When he reaches the temple, the scene in front of his eyes poke his eyes very badly.

Anupriya was lying on the floor restlessly . Her one eye is bleeding very badly. There are some scratches on her hands and legs. Her Saree and blouse are also tattered a bit.

He somehow control his emotions and went near to Anupriya and cover her with a blanket.

Anupriya was not in a state where she is conscious about her surroundings.

Sarthak kaka picks her up in his arms and start walking out of the deep forest to the main road where ambulance is waiting for them.

Anupriya was taken to the city hospital. She has been admitted into the emergency ward.

Sarthak kaka pleaded the doctor to save the Anupriya.

Sarthak : Doctor plz save her.

Doctor : We try our best .

Sarthak kaka wait in the corridor.

Doctor : Nurse, please call senior eye surgeon of the hospital immediately. She needs medication in her eyes only.

Nurse : OK doctor, I will call him immediately.

Nurse goes out.

Senior eye surgeon Dr Sahil Jain comes in the OT

Anupriya shifted into the OT. Doctor examined her.

Sahil :There was not any threat to her life. But she might loose her Both eyes .

Sahil : Nurse, please check her blood group and see if there are any suitable eyes are available for her in the eye bank.

Nurse : Yes sir

Nurse goes out of OT while Sahil start cleaning her wounds.

Sarthak, : Nurse, is everything fine.

Nurse : Please don't disturb us sir. We are trying our best. Now I had to go to the eye bank.

Sarthak : What happened to her eyes .

Nurse : Sahil sir examined her and it seems like she may loss her both eyes.

Sarthak : What!!!!

Nurse goes out of corridor and sarthak follow her with tears in his eyes.

(((Note - Guys all the readers plz comment or atleast like this chap)))))) 

Edited by Vermilion - 4 years ago
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Posted: 4 years ago
#57

Hello all, 

I have posted the part 3 . Thank you Every one for liking. 

Love you a lot. 

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Posted: 4 years ago
#58

Originally posted by: Shona1991

Nice teaser...

Continue soon

Thank you di, plz continue reading my ff with a lot of love. 

Di third part is updated. Plz read and like it. 

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Posted: 4 years ago
#59

Originally posted by: rammehra103

My God neera ..your teaser is amazing .....👏

Nature is welcoming ...a legend .....  Malharji ..who is fuming in anger to save his ladylove ...

Please Mera cutie beta😆 update KRega na  jldi 🥳

Are mera cutie dodo. Update Kar diya re. Read Kar lena re baba. Thanks for liking it re baba. 

Love you a lot 

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Posted: 4 years ago
#60

Thanks shreya di for liking it. 

Next part is updated. Read it plz and like it.