🤗haaye agar sach me meenu ne ladki swap na khela hota to
sabki stories padh ke I'm tempted to write. fir sochti hun jo chal raha hai vo zyada better hai
Yup, according to me agar rishta swap nahi hua hota to Shayad courtship importance itne acche se nahi bata paate CVS, coz mishbir ki friendship and abir ka character is now becoming stable, at least they don't have understanding issues
I will wait for your stories if you write someday, I think you should try 😃
If the swap wouldn't have happened then this would have been the story. I really loved reading it and I could totally imagine Shaheer and Rhea in the scenes. Well written!
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Will update tonight dear
Originally posted by: socioboss9797
If the swap wouldn't have happened then this would have been the story. I really loved reading it and I could totally imagine Shaheer and Rhea in the scenes. Well written!
Thanku so much 🤗
Very nice. Pls update soon.
Oh yes....You must continue with this.👍🏼
Abir's shayari..
What a nice story.Am eagerly waiting for the next part.
Originally posted by: Jayati321
Oh yes....You must continue with this.👍🏼
Abir's shayari..
What a nice story.Am eagerly waiting for the next part.
Glad you liked it 😃
Updating soon
Part 2
They broke the eye-lock
M-vaise tumhe kaise pata vo mere papa the
A(smiled)- bas pata hai
Mishti frowned and then shrugged it off
A-vaise tum yaha kya kar rahi ho
M-mandir mein log I think pray karne hi aate hai
A-hmm right , pray karne to aate hai , apne liye ya fir apno ke liye , vaise tum kiske liye pray karne aayi ho
M(smiled)-dono ke liye ,apne liye unhe thanks kehna tha and apno ke liye request karni thi
Abir smiled at her innocent confession
A-hmm not bad
M-vaise tum yaha kiske liye pray karne aaye the
A-apne baccho ke liye
Mishti's eyes came out of socket
M-tumhare bacche hai , oh ya fir hone waale hai , oh matlab tumhari shaadi ho gayi hai
Abir got shocked listening mishti's questions and then understood she got it all wrong
A-arey nahi nahi , apne baccho se mera matlab tha , actually main ek ngo chlata hu , to uske zariye anaath and handicapped baccho ki help karta hu , to unhi ki bat kar raha tha
M-wow , to matlab tum exactly kaise help karte ho , I mean paise and all ye sab kaise arrange hota hai
A-hamare ngo mein bahut si ladies kaam karti hai jo apni skills like cooking , stitching ,etc,etc ka use karke bahut saare products banati hai , jise hum market mein bechte hai and usse jo bhi paise milte hai usse hum kids ki help karte hai
M-wow Abir , its awesome ,kitna accha lagta hoga na ye sab karke
A-ha bahut sukoon milta hai
Mishti smiled looking at him and said
M-tum bahut acche ho Abir
Abir also smiled
A-tum bhi
Abir started walking towrds temple and mishti also started walking beside him talking with him , they were going towards temple when they met Nanu on staircase
A-Nanu aap yaha kya kr rahe ho
N-arey car se apna phone lena tha isliye niche aa raha tha
A-oho nanu , kuch der phone se dur rahoge to india ka nuksaan nahi ho jaayega , chill , chalo pehle mandir mein puja karke aate hai
N-arey Abir , main tumhari tarah puraane zamaane ka nhi hu , mujhe duniya ke saath jude rehna pasand hai ,bina phone ke meenu ko inform kaise karenge ki kab tak aayenge
Mishti who was also standing there hearing their talks said
M-to aap Abir ka phone kyu nahi use kar lete
Nanu and Abir looked at her and she got embarrassed
M- sorry vo mujhe bich mein nahi bolna chahiye tha
N-arey nahi nahi beta its ok, and jaha tak rahi Abir ke phone ki baat to ye paagal chokro phone use karta hi nahi hai
Mishti got shocked hearing this
M-kyaaa,tum phone nahi use karte , aaj ke zamaane mein kaun aisa karta hai
N-arey mat pucho beta ,kitni baar kaha hai isse ki ek phone le le , kamse kam tujhse baat karne mein aasani hogi par nahi , sunta kaha hai ye kisi ki
Abir was listening their talk with open mouth
A-arey phone use nahi karta, aap log to aise react kar rahe ho jaise main 1 hafte mein ek baar khaana khaata hu , ya din mein ek baar paani peeta hu , jis cheez ki mujhe zarurat nahi use agar main na bhi use karu to ismein badi baat kya hai , aur vaise bhi mujhe itni jaldi kisi ke hanth nahi aana(he said with a wink)
Nanu smiled teasingly and said
N-tu bahut jald kisi ke haanth bhi aayega , har kaam karne se pehle uske baare mein bhi sochega ,aur ha uske liye apne paas phone bhi rakhega
Abir looked suspiciously at Nanu while Nanu averted his gaze from him and turned towards Mishti
N-vaise beta tumhara naam kya hai
M-ji Mishti
N(smiled)-Mishti , bahut pyaara naam hai
A(teasingly whispered to her)-itni violent ladki ka itna meetha naam
Mishti turned towards him and glared at him but then a smile started appearing on her face and she shook her head slowly. She actually started liking the way Abir talks with her , tease her, it gives her a warm feeling inside her heart
N-Abir jaldi chal , hume puja karke , un ladies ko bus mein bithaake Maheshwari House bhi jaana hai
Mishti frowned hearing this
M-Maheshwari house ! , aap dono ko waha kyu jaana hai
N-beta waha mere naati Kunal ke rishtey ki baat chal rahi hai , tum jaanti ho un logo ko?
M-oh to aap Rajvansh family se hai , ji Mr Vishamabar Maheshwari mere bade papa hai , main unki beti hu
N(thought in mind)-arey waah ek hi ghar mein dono ladkiyaan , kya baat hai(and smiled widely)
Abir who was silent till now said
A-Nanu ab aapko late nahi ho raha , chale (and then turning towards mishti),mishti tum bhi hamare saath hi chalo , hum sab ek saath chalte hai
M-nahi abir ab mujhe chalna chahiye,maine pray kar liya hai , main already late hu , ghar pe sab mera wait kar rahe honge (then turning towrds nanu),accha uncle ab main chalti hu , aapse ab ghar pe milungi ,namastey(with joint hands)
N-thik hai beta
M(turning towards Abir)-bye Abir
A(smilingly)-bye
Mishti went and Abir was still looking in her direction , nanu smiled seeing this and said
N-vo ddlj ki simran nahi hai, jo tujhe palat ke dekhegi , chal ab
Abir loked at his nanu with big eyes
A-kya nanu aap bhi , chaliye
After Sometime
Maheshwari House
Kunal and the Maheshwari family were bonding very well , Meenakshi was silent all the while , she don’t have any idea how to get out of this alliance(she had not seen any pics of kuhu).
Nanu and Abir enters inside , all family greets them .
Abir smiles looking at Mishti , Mishti smiled back and Nanu smiled seeing both of them . A plan has started cooking inside nanu’s brain.
Mishti chuckled when Abir flaunts about his brother’s singing and dancing skill , she rolled her eyes when he flirts with Jasmeet chachi , she smiled at his easy going nature , how can he make everyone smile so easily . Mishti could sense the change in atmosphere,her family was tensed with Meenakshiji’s not interested nature , but when Abir came , her whole family got relaxed , she got relaxed.
N-mujhe lagta hai ab Kunal aur Kuhu ko akele thoda time diya jaaye , taki vo log bhi ek dusre se khul kar baat kar sake
The family nodded and Kuhu and Kunal went upstairs to talk privately
Maheshwari family now started interacting with Nanu and Abir as meenakshi still doesn’t seem interested(😆😉)
Vishambar asked Abir
V-to beta , aap kya karte hai
A-ji uncle main ek NGO chalata hu , Aasha Kiran naam hai uska , besahara aurton aur baccho ko sahaara mil jaata hai and mujhe unka pyaar aur aashirwaad
V-arey waah ye to bahut hi nek kaam karte hai aap
Jasmeet interrupted in between
J-ha ha ji ye to bahut hi accha kaam hai ,lekin Ngo chalane se money thodi na banti hai ji
Maheshwaris glared at her for talking like this , Meenakshi also shook her head showing that she didn’t took it very nicely while Abir smiled
A-vo kya hai na Kat ki dusroke liye kuch accha karke jo khushi milti hai na , use main apna job satisfaction maanta hu aur itna kama hi leta hu ki kisi ke saame haanth failaane ki zarurat na pade,(then teasingly) aur vaise bhi ngo chalane ke apne faayde hai , ek do mahine mein celebrities se milne ka mauka mil jaata hai , as vo log bahut interest lete hai na donation and all mein
J(excitedly)- haaye haaye sacchi , to mujhe bhi kabhi milvaaiyega na kisi bade hero shero se
A(flirting)-oho bhala aapko kisi celebrity se milne ki kya zarurat , aap khud kisi heroine se kam hai kya
Jasmeet blushed and all smiled and got relaxed that he didn’t got offended
Mishti was looking at him proudly , he does not have any male ego , but a very sensible and good attitude towards life.
Nanu noticed her expression and thought to execute his plan now
N-vaise Vishambar ji , abir aur main abhi mandir se hi aa rahe hai , mandir mein hamari Mishti se mulakaat hui , tab pata chala ki ye aapki beti hai
V-ji Yashpal ji , mishti meri aur Rajshri ki beti hai , kuhu se bas kuch mahine badi hai , abhi abhi kuhu ke saath iski bhi padhai khatam hui hai
N-to aapne iski shaadi ke baaremein kya socha hai
Maheshwaris got surprised with this sudden question, Mishti got shocked, Abir and Meenakshi were looking suspiciously at nanu as they sensed that something is cooking up in his mind
V(hesitantly)-um Yashpal ji, beti jab badi ho jaati hai to har maa baap ke man mein sabse pehli bat uski shadi ki hi aati hai , humare bhi man mein yehi aayi , bas agar koi accha rishta mil jaata to
N-ek accha rishta hai mere paas
Vishamabar and Rajshri looked at each other with confused face and then Rajshri said
R-ji agar aapke nazar mein koi hai to hum zaroor jaan na chahenge
N-main apne bade naati Abir ki baat kar raha hu
All in the house got shocked including Kunal and Kuhu who just came downstairs.
To be continued.................
Precap :
Abir and Mishti’s decision on courtship
Lots of mishbir scene
I am not concentrating on KUKU so sorry if anyone expected KUKU’s scenes
Will update next night
Hope you all liked it , do comment
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