Yeh Rishtey Hai Pyaar Ke

MishBir SS : Tu Mere Saath Rehna (Part 10 : Pg 25)

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PART 1

A beautiful day with lots of hope , sunshine is making way from the window to the room where two gorgeous girls are sleeping , one with a dreamy smile on her face and one with calmness on her face .

The girl sleeping with dreamy smile suddenly frowned feeling glares of sun on her face and woke up from her sleep with an irritated face  , she turned to her left side and again frowned looking at the other girl who’s still sleeping peacefully.

She got up from her bed and went to the other bed and said

“Ye mishti ki bacchi , abhi tak so rahi hai . Ise meri koi fikar hai ya nahi , ek to mujhe dekhne aaj vo sports car aa raha hai , hashtag charming , mujhe itni tayyari karni hai and ye sapno ki duniya mein khoi hui hai , hashtag kumbhkaran , abhi dress choose karna baaki hai ,hairstyle……”.And she start pacing in her room to and fro.

The girl sleeping on bed frowned listening non-stop chattering of her sister and woke up from her sleep with an irritated face and then glared at her sister who is still unaware the she disturbed her sleep

“Kuhu yaar , subah subah room mein kyu morning walk kar rahi hai wo bhi bad-bad karte hue , bahar jaa na ,mujhe abhi bhi bahut neend aa rahi hai  ”

Kuhu turned towards her and glared at her with both hands on her hips and said

K- neend aa rahi hai ki bacchi , ghar waalo ke saamne tobahut dikhati hai ki tujhe meri kitni care hai and ab jab main yaha itni preshaan hu to tujhe sona hai ,hashtag drama queen .

M(frowned)- lekin tu pareshaan kyu hai , vo bhi itni subah subah

K-oho mishti   , aaj vo sports car I mean Kunal and usk ifamily aa rahi hai na mujhe dekhne and I want to look best in front of him and his family , to sanskaari look with modern touch soch rahi , but tujhse koi help ki ummeed nahi hai mujhe tu so jaa

Suddenly a big mischievous grin appeared on mishti’s face and she jumped from her bed and came in front of kuhu

M-one second , one second , you’re saying ki tujhe apne look  ki tension ho rahi hai and tu mujhse yani mishti se yaani hashtag old fashioned ladki se help maang rahi hai , now that’s something new , hashtag unbelievable(she said with a wink)

Kuhu made a nonchalant face and said

K-nothing of that sort , bus uski family ke saamne first impression thoda accha banana chahti hu , teri help nahi maang rahi , bus agar thodi advise de degi to tera kuch bura nahi ho jaayega .

Mishti smiled and pulled her cheeks

M-aww , kyu nahi meri behna , tension mat le , tu aaj bahut khubsurat lagegi

Kuhu made a whatever face and went inside washroom , and mishti smiled seeing her excitement for this rishta . She decided to visit temple today to pray for her sister well being.

 

Rajvansh House

“Nanko , nanko” A man voice was echoing in whole house

‘’Ye Nanko bhi na pata nahi kaha chala gaya , mujhe mandir jaana hai , ngo ki ladies mera wait kar rahi hongi and main already bahut late hu” He was talking to himself while screaming “Nanko”

A man came out of his room with a frown and said “Kya hua bhai ,aap itna kyu chilla rahe hai , yehi hu main , ek client ke saath video conference thi , bas vahi khatam kar raha tha ”

The man who was screaming till now made a “WHAAAT” face and said

“Nanko , aaj tujhe ek ladki se milne jaana hai , teri rishtey ki baat chal rahi hai , and tu client ke saath video conference pe laga hua hai , arey thodi to excitement dikha”

The other man smiled and shook his head

“ Abir Bhai ismein excited hone waali kya baat hai , mujhe kaunsa sajna sawarna hai ,I am prepared for every thing , don’t worry , by the way aap kaha jaa rahe ho ye sab leke” , he said looking towards lots of plates having different kind of sweets on them.

Abir looked towards his small brother with “not again” look.

A-Kunal tu fir bhul gaya , aaj hamari NGO ki ladies Kutch jaa rahi hai ye mithaaiyan bechne , usse pehle Devi maiya ko chadava chadanahai , isliye main mandir ja raha hu , chadava chadake unhe bus mein bithaakar direct tujhe Maheshwari house mein milta hu

K-ok bhai and sorry vo dhyaan se ye baat nikal gayi (he said sheepishly)

Abir smiled and said

A-its ok yaar and ha nanu bhi mere saath jaa rahe hai , vo bhi direct maheshwari house hi aayenge , tu big ben ko inform kar dena , bye ,main chalta hu , nanu car mein mera wait kar rahe hai

And he started walking hurriedly towards door with jugnu and other workers following him with plates in their hands

Kunal smiled at his excited brother and went away from there to get ready.

At Temple

A-Nanu aap chalo , main abhi aaya

Abir said to nanu with a glint in his eyes , nanu went away from there and Abir started walking towards tree where many ladies were tying chunri.

He stopped behind a girl and said in  mischievous tone

A-Angry chorni

The girl frowned and turned around , and she got shocked seeing him there

“TUM”

A(grinning)-ha main , vaise bhi mere alawa tumhe angry chorni aur kaun bula sakta hai , tumhare dono roop maine hi to dekhe hai ,chorni wo bhi violent types

Mishti glared at him and said – tum English vinglish waali Sridevi ke pati ho

Abir frowned and shook his head

M-opposition mein khade rehne waale neta ho

He again shook his head

M-meri behen ho

His eyes got big and he again shook his head

M-to fir itne judgmental kyu ho ,bade jaldi raay banadi mere bare mein aur agar bana bhi li to use apne tak rakho , mujhe batane yaha kyu aaye ho

Abir smiled genuinely and said

A-tumhre baare mein raay tab bana paaunga , jab tumhe jaan paaunga , and jaan tab paaunga jab tumse mil paunga , tumse baat kar paaunga

M(with frown)-but tumhe mujhe jaan ne mein itna interest kyu hai

A(smiled again)-shayad isliye kyuki …..

M-kyuki?

A-kyuki aaj tak maine kisi ladki ko chori karte hue nahi dekha

He winked and started laughing , mishti glared at him

Abir stopped his laugh seeing her angry face

A-ok ok ab tum mujhe maarna mat shuru kar dena , main sirf mazaak kar raha tha , chalta hu.

And he started going towards temple when Mishti’s voice stopped him

M-Suno

Abir turned towards her and said

A-Abir

M(frowned)-kya

A-Abir naam hai mera

M(smiled)-Thanku Abir

A(frowned)-thanku kisliye

M-jo bhi tumne holi ke din kiya uske liye

A-tumpe rang daalne ke liye , lekin wo to sab karte hai (he said with mischievous smile)

Mishti gave him no non sense look and said

M-I am serious

A-tumhe mujhe thanks bolne ki zarurat nahi hai , tum ek strong ladki ho jo apne papa ke bhi against khadi ho gayi kyuki wo galat the ,itni himmat sabme nahi hoti , I really appreciate it and respect you for that

Mishti smiled and they shared a cute eyelock

Abir in mind:

Aakhir dil ko itna lagaav kaise

Jab dimaak ko naam bhi na pata ho

Kahaani ye aage kya mod legi

Na jaane kismat mein kya likha ho

They both felt little fluttering in their heart ,but still unknown about it.

Pair of eyes were watching them from staircase of temple and smiled to himself

“Meenu shayad meri baat sach hogi , dono bhai ki shaadi ek hi mandap mein hogi ”.

 

To Be Continued…..

Ok , any kind of comment is acceptable

I am writing after 2 years so really don’t know it was good or not

No rishta swapping , light heart love story 

Please tell if I should continue it or not

And do comment

 INDEX

Part 1             : Page 1

Part 2             : Page 3

Part 3             : Page 5

Part 4             : Page 7

Part 5             : Page 12

Part 6             : Page 16

Part 7             : Page 18

Part 8             : Page 21

Part 9             : Page 23

Part 10           : Page 25

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Posted: 4 years ago

its so beautiful..eagerly waiting for the next part👍🏼

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‘Tum english vingkish ki srdevi ho?’😆

Loved it. Post nxt part soon.Mishbir wedding 

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its so beautiful..eagerly waiting for the next part👍🏼

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Glad you liked it dear, will update tonight 👍🏼

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‘Tum english vingkish ki srdevi ho?’😆

Loved it. Post nxt part soon.Mishbir wedding 

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Glad you loved it 

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Mindblowings its awesome..specially mishti dialogues 😃and abeer shayari👍🏼

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Very sweet, very nice,

review kal dena tha but then vahi post limit aa gayi beech me🥱

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Originally posted by: Yrhpk.2126

Mindblowings its awesome..specially mishti dialogues 😃and abeer shayari👍🏼

Thanks dear 

I was not sure about abir's shayari coz I suck in that, 😆

Glad you liked it 😳

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Very sweet, very nice,

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😆I understand 

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🤗haaye agar sach me meenu ne ladki swap na khela hota to

sabki stories padh ke I'm tempted to write. fir sochti hun jo chal raha hai vo zyada better hai