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Posted: 4 years ago

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Nice CS ☺ 

Continue soon 

Thank you so much...i will update first part soon..😊

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HEY GUYS...

THANK YOU SO MUCH FOR LIKES AND COMMENTS.

SPECIAL THANKS TO @ARAKSHI234 FOR POSTING PICTURES OF CHARACTERS.

I WANT CLARIFY THAT I AM NEW ON INDIA FORUMS SO FORUM NOT ALLOW ME TO POST ANY HYPERLINKS SO STORY RELATED FURTHERS LINKS AND IMAGES WILL POST BY @ARAKSHI234.

TODAY I AM GOING TO POST VERY FIRST PART OF THIS STORY.HOPE YOU PEOPLE LIKE IT.

PLEASE SHARE YOUR FEEDBACK IN COMMENTS.ANY TYPE OF SUGGESTIONS ARE MOST WELCOME.

 CHAPTER 1

“Zindagi kaisi hai paheli haaye,

Kabhi yeh hasaaye kabhi yeh rulaaye”

(room main CD pe song chal raha hai)

GIRL: Mumbai city. ”SAPNO KI NAGRI”. Har Kisi ka koi na koi sapna, har kisi ki apni kahani, har kisi ki apni alag duniya. Raat main to city ki ronak hi kuch aur hai. Vehicles ka shor, pattharo se takrati sumndar ki leherein aur lights jaise jameen pe taare utar aaye ho.Yaha sab kuch hai lakin shaanti ki umeed kam hi hai. Raat me bhi zindagiyan karwatein leti rehti hai. 12 years ho gaye hai Mumbai me lakin abhi bhi Kashmir ki vo shanti, apke saath bitaye vo moments, vo daal lake ki ser, tulips se bhara vo garden aur end me star cafe ki special coffee sab aankho ke samne rehta hai. Papa-mumma aapki princess aaj bhi wahi un dino me khoyi hui hai.

          Tabhi door knock hota hai and girl apne khayalo se bahar aati hai and door ki aur deakhti hai.ek ladka uske room me aata hai. usko deakhkar girl k face pe big wali smile aa jaati hai.

GIRL: aa gaye aap?

BOY: nahi raaste me hoon bas 2 min me pohch jaaunga.

GIRL: aap kabhi bhi sidhe answer nahi kar sakte na

BOY:ab tu sawal hi aise karti hai. Tere ankho k samne hoon aur puch rahi ho aa gaye..

Tabhi ek girl waha aati hai and un dono ki baat me interfere karti hai.

SECOND GIRL: ohho bhai aap to aate hi sidhe apni chiki ke pass pohch jaate ho. dusri behen ke to jaise value hi nahi hai. sara pyaar apni chiki ko, diyu bhi hai yaha.

CHIKI: diyu tu bhi na..chal ab jealous mat ho aaja ek group hug to banta hai

   Aisa kehkar tino sath me group hug krte hai.

DIYA: accha ab chalo warna agar mumma ka dimag garam ho gaya na kisi ko khana nahi milega. Phele hi 2 baar dinner ki notice mil chuki hai..

CHIKI: waise abhas bhai aap vo saree to laaye ho na jo badi maa ne wash ke liye di thi aur apko aaj lane ko kaha tha..

ABHAS: he bhagwan aaj to pakka daant milne wali hai. dimag se hi nikal gaya. Mummy pakka aaj kaan khichkar red kar degi.

    Chiki and diya laughs.

BOTH GIRLS: best of luck bhai.

 

[AT DINING TABLE]

    Sab dinner table pe bethte hai and dinner start karte hai. Abhas bohat tense hai because he knows usko daant to padegi hi aur uski yeh condition dekh kar chiki and diya ko maja aa raha hai.

ABHAS: mummy aaj dinner bohat accha bana hai. Sach apke hatho me to jaadu hai. maja aa gaya aaj to.

ABHAS’S MOM: khana to waisa hi bana hai jaise roj banati hoon. Kya baat hai aaj badi tariff ho rahi hai. (kuch sochker) butter laga rahe ho matlab pakka koi Galati ki hogi tumne.

           Abhas like bolkar apne per pe kulhadi maar di. both girls laugh silently.

ABHAS’S MOM: meri saree..meri saree laaye ho?

ABHAS: a..vo..vo..baat yeh hai ki..main laane hi wala tha lakin..me bhula nahi tha bas vo main..

(cut by his mom..vo Abhas ka kaan khichti hai)

ABHAS’S MOM: bahane mat bana sab janti hoon me..ek kaam yaad nahi rakh sakte.

ABHAS: oouch mummy maaf bhi kar do... aage se aisa nahi hoga..mera kaan khich kar nikalna hai kya..chodo bhi..

          (abhas’s papa, chiki and diya laugh on Abhas)

ABHAS: Hasna bandh kro.. help me yaar.

CHIKI: don’t worry badi maa. Me kal le aungi. aap bhai ko jaane do.

          (vo Abhas ko chod deti hai.)

ABHAS’S MOM: sakshi teri hi wajah se yeh mujhse bach jaata hai. Tu hi uska sara kaam apne hath me le leti hai. Bada bhai yeh hai aur saare kaam ka dhayan tu rakhti hai.

ABHAS’S DAD: sakshi beta kal to apki college ka first day he na..so kaisi preparation hai..all set?

SAKSHI: yes bade papa. all set. Lizu hai na saath me so tension ki to baat hi nahi hai. Hum dono sath me sab handle kar lenge.

DIYA: aur phir me hoon na..aap meri help le sakte ho.you know mujhe sab idea le lena. Main apko samjaungi college life ke bare me.

SAKSHI: diyu tu abhi 10th me hai. Bol to aise rahi hai jaise college ka sara experience kar rakha hai.

DIYA: ohho di aap to jante ho na diya kuch bhi kar sakti hai.

BADI MAA: chalo ab dinner karlo.. baatein baad me karte rehna.

 

[SAKSHI’S ROOM]

        Sakshi phone pe baat kar rahi hoti hai.

SAKSHI: so lizu kal milte hai. 

LIZA: yes. Me tujhe pick kr lungi.

SAKSHI: no lizu me aungi. Actually kal first day he na so abhas bhai khud mujhe college drop karne aana chahte hai so main tere ghar aa jaungi subah. Tu ready rehna.

LIZA: ok then see you tomorrow. Goodnight

SAKSHI: good night.

        Both disconnect the call. Sakshi apne study table ke pass jaati hai and drawer me se  pink colour ki dairy nikalti hai. And table pe bethkar likhna start karti hai.

“ papa mumma kal apki princess ka college me  first day hai. Apki princess ko apke love support and blessings ki zaroorat hai..haan apko kaise bhul sakti hoon kanha.. aap to mere best se bhi best wale friend hai. So ab apko hi mujhe help karni hai. excited for tomorrow“

        Vo dairy bandh karke wapas rakhti hai. fresh up hone k baad vo sone ke liye bed pe let jaati hai. uske haatho me ek cream colour ka cute teddy bear hai vo usko hug karti hai and so jaati hai. Vo sone ki try kar hi rahi hoti hai ki use mouthorgan ki awaj aati hai. Vo sunker vo uth jaati hai and window ke pass jakar bahar road ki aur deakhti hai. Pass ke park me vo ek ladke ko apni car ke sath khada hua deakhti hai. Ladke ko vo sirf piche se deakh paati hai because usne apni back car pe tikayi thi and vo mouthorgan baja raha tha. Sakshi wahi window pe bethti hai..apni ankhe bandh karti hai and window ki side ki diwar pe head rest karti hai and vo dhun suune lagti hai. Usse pata hi nahi chalta aur vo wahi so jaati hai.

        Kuch waqut baad vo ladka bhi apni car leaker waha se chala jaata hai and kuch waqut baad ek bade aalishan ghar ke bahar car rokta hai.Security gaurds waha aate hai and boy ko deakhker jaldi se gate open karte hai. Vo car leaker under jata hai. garden ke starting me ek bada sa well decorated board laga hua hai “RAWTE MANSION”.vo car parking area me car park karta hai and phir ghar me enter hota hai. Waha couch par ek person men betha hua hota hai. Vo boy unko ignore karke jaa raha hota hai tabhi vo men usko rokta hai.

MEN: itni raat ko kaha se aa rahe ho..raat k 1:30 hone wale hai. Kuch to khayal rakho. India k leading tycoon k bete ho media ko pata chala to sari reputation mitti me mil jayegi.

BOY: mujhe apke yeh so cold business and reputation me koi interest nahi hai. So aap mujhe yeh image and reputation wala gyaan mat diya kijiye.

MEN: behave Arjun. I am your father.

ARJUN: really..apko yaad hai that you are my father. I thought aap sirf mr.Suryakant Rawte hai the rawte..india k leading tycoon.

MR. RAWTE: raat k 1:30 baje yaha betha hoon taaki tumhari chinta ho rahi thi lakin tum mujhe kabhi nahi samj sakte.

ARJUN: wrong dad. Apko yeh tension tha ki kahi maine koi naya scene to create nahi kiya jisse apki image bigad jaaye.  Anyways don’t worry aaj aisa kuch nahi hua hai. Ab aap so sakte hai.

 

        Aisa kehker vo apne room main chale jaate hai. mr.rawte bhi waha se unke room ki aur chale jaate hai.

 

[NEXT MORNING]

[AT RATHOD MANSION]

        Men breakfast kar rahe hote hai. Tabhi waha boy ata hai.

BOY: good morning Dad.

MR. RATHOD: good morning sam. Aaj jaldi ready ho gaye?

SAMEER: yup. Aaj se college jo start hone wala hai.

        Tabhi mrs.rathod waha aate hai and breakfast sam ko serve karte hai. And khud bhi breakfast ke liye bethti hai.

SAMEER: hey mom good morning.

MRS. RATHOD: good morning. sam Arjun ko bhi le aate.. sath breakfast karte.

SAMEER: mom apka ladla aaj nahi aya  tha..pakka kal wapas der raat tak gumta raha hoga..uska kuch nahi ho sakta..abhi call karunga aur uthaunga warna vo college bhi miss kar dega.

 

[RAWTE MANSION]

[ARJUN’S  ROOM]

        Vo apne bed pe so rahe hote hai tabhi unke phone ki ring bajti hai. Phone pe sam name flash ho raha tha.

ARJUN: Sam..ab yeh roj ki tarah pakka mujhe lecture dega..

        Then vo  phone pick karte hai.

ARJUN: good morning Sam.

SAMEER: (sarcastically) kuch zyada jaldi good morning nahi hui apki..8:30 ho rahe hai..

ARJUN: sam chill maar.. chillana sehat keliye accha nahi hota. kyun roj morning me apni energy weast karta rehta hai

SAMEER: agar itni hi care hai meri health ki to uth kyun nahi jaate.. roj mujhe uthana padta hai.. tu ek kaam kar shaadi kar le.. meri alarm duty to khatam hogi..

ARJUN: kya sam..shaadi waadi mere liye  nahi hai..aur tu hai na khyal rakhne ke liye..roj uthata hai..college me mere liye nasta bhi laata hai..

SAMEER: accha chod yeh sab.. aaj se college hai...kab nikal raha hai?

ARJUN: tujhe aaj direct college me hi milta hoon. Vo Ayu ka college ka first day hai so usko saath leaker aunga.

SAMEER: theek hai..milte hai

                After sometime mr.rawte and  Arjun breakfast kar rahe hote hai.

MR. RAWTE: Aaj Aisha ka first day hai college me. Dhyan rakhna uska. Tumhare bharose maine uska tumhari hi college me hai  admission karwaya hai.

ARJUN: Ayu ko waha koi trouble nahi hogi

        (Both’s conversation cut by Aisha..)

AISHA: Trouble aur vo bhi mujhe.. apko lagta hai kisi ki itni himmat ho sakti hai ki vo Aisha Rawte ko trouble de..

MR.RAWTE: Good morning Ayu

AISHA: good morning

ARJUN: So my princess is ready right?

AISHA: Yes. Excited for first day. Kab niklna hai

ARJUN: after breakfast.

(Scene cut)

[KAULHOUSE]   

        Sakshi apne  Abhasbhai ke saath college ke liye nikalti hai. Raste main liza ka ghar aata hai. Waha se liza usko join karti hai.

SAKSHI: Abhas bhai phele mandir jaate hai.

LIZA: Late ho gaya to

SAKSHI: nahi hoga. Trust me. Aur mere best friend se baat kiye bina me college kaise jaa sakti hoon.

LIZA: accha baba theek hai. Tere aur ter ebest friend ke bich me nahi aa sakti but aaj jaldi baat khatam kar lena. Me first day late nahi hona chahti.

                After sometime vo log temple pochte hai. Tino under jaate hai And pray karte hai.

LIZA: chal sakshi apne dost se jaldi baat kar le.

(sakshi smiles and Krishna ki murat ko dekhti hai)

SAKSHI: hello kanha. Waise to aap jante hai ki mera aaj college me first day hai aur mujhe naa thoda dar bhi lag raha hai. Aaj se new life start hogi meri please help me. Sab theek se karna.. galityan kar dena meri adat hai but please aaj koi galti mat karwa dena warna pehele hi din sab par kya impression padega mera. Samaj rahe ho naa aap..

        (cut by liza)

LIZA: aree vo sab samaj gaye agar tumne aur time weast kiya to pakka impression ki band baj jayegi. Ab chal.

                Phir vo college ke liye nikal jaate hai.

[AT COLLEGE]

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OKAY GUYS THAT’S IT FOR TODAY.

I WILL UPDATE NEXT CHAPTER SOON.

DO COMMENTS TELL HOW IT IS?

GOOD BYE FRIENDS.KEEP SMILING😊






Edited by Butterfly09 - 3 years ago


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Posted: 4 years ago

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Posted: 4 years ago

Again awesome update dear.... Keep it up dear... 😍😍😘😘

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Again awesome update dear.... Keep it up dear... 😍😍😘😘

Thank you so much 😳

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Posted: 4 years ago

Nice story dear.plz continue and pm me

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Posted: 4 years ago

Hey..Thank you so much for new Arakshi story. love story in college sounds very intersting

U said u are new to writing.. it doesn't seem like that dear..

The way you portrait every character,it's mind blowing.. well written

Nice CS.. it's going very well

Thanks😊

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Posted: 4 years ago

First part was awesome..

Sakshi missing her hometown..She is sharing her thoughts with her dairy.. lovely

Abbas,Sakshi,Diya convo was super they all are sharing strong bond

Sakshi ne Abbas ko bachaya..

Arjun playing mouthorgan.. connection already started

Arjun relation is not good with His dad.. felt bad

Loved Sameer - Arjun convo 

Sameer suggesting to marry..

Everyone is exciting to go college

Waiting for Arakshi Ka aamana saamana and others also

Please continue soon.. 

Thanks for awesome update and PM

😃

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God God what start I'm speechless 

I have no words I'm  eagerly waiting for arakshi first meet  please give update  soon very soon 

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Originally posted by: Khushikeepsmile

Hey..Thank you so much for new Arakshi story. love story in college sounds very intersting

U said u are new to writing.. it doesn't seem like that dear..

The way you portrait every character,it's mind blowing.. well written

Nice CS.. it's going very well

Thanks😊

Thank you so much @khushikeepsmile... I am glad that you like it❤️😊