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Posted: 4 years ago

Originally posted by: Prizi

Lovely update dear 

Thank you so much dear ๐Ÿค—. Hope you will love the next one as well

Love

Sajida

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Posted: 4 years ago

Originally posted by: sonushrivastava

Hi Sajida di. ๐Ÿค—I know I am late to comment but better late than never. I could not comment on the earlier updates but I have read all of them .Each chapter leaves me astonished โคโค. This chapter was also amazingggg. This growing comfort in their relationship is lovely.  Sameer's respect and concern for Naina and her values is what makes him our Sameer ๐Ÿ˜™๐Ÿ˜™. The dance sequence was so beautifully written ๐Ÿ˜ณ. And your shayaris are my favourite part of the story.  They are always apt and describes their feelings beautifully โค. Will love to read further . And waiting for their marriage. 

Lots of love โค๏ธ

Disha

Hi Disha 

Thank you sabse pehle aapki comment ke liye ๐Ÿค—Bade dino baad aapse sunke accha laga. No worries dear you can comment when you have time. Happy to hear you have read and loved them.   Sameer and Naina's character show se zyada alag nahi rakha hai. Chao dane sequence pasand aaya that I was not confident while writing.  Great to hear that shayari's convey the feelings that I want to portray.  Hope you will love the next udpate as well 

Love

Sajida

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Posted: 4 years ago

Originally posted by: aditi0410

Hii Sajida, welcome back dear .Take your time for update cause we know that you gave your best .i know next update is also amazing as every update. Love always ๐Ÿ˜๐Ÿ˜๐Ÿ˜๐Ÿ˜

Thanks dear โค๏ธ

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Posted: 4 years ago

Jaldi hi karoungi ๐Ÿ˜Š

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Hi All

Here is the next update. Please ignore any mistakes as I haven't checked it thoroughly. Hope you love it. Waiting eagerly to hear from you 

Love

Sajida

Suhana Safar

The next day Sameer and Naina were geared up for their long ride. Naina was also very excited about it. As per the instructions, both wore appropriate clothing, shoes along with the protective gear. He lovingly looked at her timid body structure and then handed her the jacket to avoid cold and wind. 

" Itna sab?Bas long ride hi toh hai ?". 

 "Madam long ride woh bhi BMW pe, hawa se baatein karenge jab hum outskirts mein honge highway pe, it will be fun " he then went on explaining the need to take proper safety precautions and also assured that he will keep his speed in check to calm down her fears. 

As per the plan they reached the meeting point at Mehdipatnam roughly around 2 P.M along with a group of 10 other travel freaks. After a quick introduction, all the bikers started their journey. They had packed their bags with lots of water bottles, a pair of comfortable clothes, food & camping requirements.

Riding on NH44 was bliss with Naina holding him, "Naina ab speed zyada hogi , khas ke pakadna " . Naina moved her arms around him and held him by his waist. As she moved closer and held him tight he could feel her body on his back, for a minute he was lost and his breath stopped. Her touch was like an electric shock, forcing his heart to pound. Naina was in no good state either, she could feel the inside of her stomach being tickled, 

Tujhe Maine dhadkano mein basaya hai toh  
Dhadkan bhi bol uthi ab maza aa raha hai dhak dhak karne mein
 he voiced his state to her.

She placed her head on the back of his shoulder and her one hand on his heart giving him the calmness and warmth.  As they set off for their ride, the weather showered its mercy and it started drizzling. Sameer's much waited wish was fulfilled, he was content with his life and felt so peaceful.  

Pucha karte ho na ki kitnapyar hai tumse  
Lo ab gin lo baarish ki yeh bunde 

she whispered near his ear, stumbling a bit he took hold of the bike again. "Yaar aisa na khelo is dil se please " Sameer whined at his helpless, he wanted to hold her in his arms, pamper his love , and the romantic weather was not at all helping him but now he just had to concentrate on his riding.

Hamare shabdoun se behkane ki shikayat na karo janab
In Shabdoun mein Nasha tumahre Ishq ka hi toh hai

she replied passionately making it hard for him to ride further. Her giggles and soft teasings made it unbearable. He slowed his bike until all the other bikers went ahead and then parked it on the roadside. 

He took out both the helmets and looked at her.His hand gently glided through her hair, as he looked at her. The passion welling up in him was palpable. As a small but teasing smile crept upon her face, goosebumps lined her skin, not the kind than one gets in the cold, but the kind one gets when nothing else matters except right here, right now. Sameer placed his arms around her and leaned closer. The softness and gentle touch of his arm against her neck made her back tingle. The soft panic grew as he came closer

Mujhe chu rahi hai teri yeh garm saanse
Mere raat din mehekne lage hai.
Teri narm saasoun ne aisa chuha hai
Ke mere paav behekne lage hai

he quickly gave a peck on her cheeks and hugged her tightly. She yielded to the warm, strong hug, her frame molding against his.

"Ab aur chedogi na mujhe toh khud ko rok na paounga Naina, sach mein, Phir " he said pointing to his lips. She lowered her eyes and then shook her head.  

"Ab chalein ? Nahi toh hum bahut peeche rahe jayenge, aur waise hi khas ke pakadna mujhe " he ordered, which she agreed without looking at him. 

It drizzled for a very short time but the cloudy windy weather made the ride more romantic. The five-hour journey was a thrilling experience for Naina

After taking a small tea break and lots of fun on the highway, they finally reached Koil Sagar Dam. Sameer guided everybody to set up the camp. His learnings of Nainital helped the team. Naina breathed in the fresh air and felt more connected to nature. Around 9 pm all was settled. Dinner was enjoyed amidst the talks of onsite chances, the latest gadgets, manager complaints, and the new trends in the IT industry. The heat from the campfire seemed to be sucked into the frigid air before ever reaching their frozen hands. They added more wood and poked it with long sticks. But after a time it found it's confidence and grew until the heat warmed them, orange flames celebrated with their wild flickering dance.

A lot of games like dumb charades, Antakshri, were planned by the team between boys and girls which finally ended with a request for a romantic number from Sameer. Sameer looked at Naina, she blinked her eyes to go ahead.   

The beautiful, warm air was peculiarly fragrant, as he started to sing, 

Meri duniya hai tujhme kahin
Tere bin main kya kuch bhi nahin
Meri jaan mein teri jaan hai o Saathi mere
Meri duniya hai tujh mein kahin
Tere bin main kya kuch bhi nahin 

His voice was smooth, clear and quiet yet powerful. Soothing her heart that had suffered a lot. It was the promise of tomorrow. It was beautiful, and she wished that he would never stop. His eyes were on her and she returned his gaze with a warm smile. 

Palkon mein tere roop ka sapna saja diya
Pehli nazar mein hi tujhe apna bana liya
Hai yehi aarzu har ghadi
Baithi raho mere saamne

Meri duniya hai tujhme kahin
Tere bin main kya kuch bhi nahin

Once he finished her eyes conveyed the love, a promise to fulfill all his wishes and be there for him. 

After some time everyone headed to their respective camps, Sameer laid a mat near their camp, looking at her with all the love he said ardently

Uff yeh sard raat aur yeh thandi hawa ka aalam 
Hum bhi sotein agar unki baahoun mein hote 

(Aalam - state,condition )

He raised his eyebrows and extended his hand as he lied down. She looked at him shyly and then lied close next to him with her head on his forearm. Pulling her close he placed her head on his upper arm near to his shoulder, his arms holding her close for a moment he then planted a kiss on her forehead.  

"Pata hai Naina jab tum mujhse dur thi toh mai har raat tumhari baatein chand se kiya karta . Tab yeh dil kehta tha "

Ae Chand mujhe bata tum mera kya lagta hai  
Kyun mere saath saari raat jaga karta hai 
Main to ban baitha hu deewana unke pyaar mein
Kya tub hi kisi se Bepanah mohabat karta hai 

" Aur ab kya kehtein ho chand se ? "  she questioned him . "Ab yeh kehta houn ?"

Uske chehare ki chamak ke samne saada laga

aasman pe chand poora tha magar Aadha laga. 

She blushed and covered her face, he smiled at her cute antics. He removed her hands and looked at her innocence that was adding the glow to her face in the moonlight and her eyes that were pouring all the love for him. He was lost in them and without blinking he admired her 

Tumnko dekha toh phir us ko na dekha

Chand kehta raha mai chand hun mai chand hun

and pulled her close to him to feel her presence next to him which he needed more than anything.

As night fell the blue haze of day lifted to reveal the stars. "Even in the velvet dark, there was the light of the stars, perhaps a promise that even when we yearn for the light of the sun there will be those stars to bring the hope of the dawn. It is always the light we crave, for without it what is our world? we seek the light, the chance to stand up and be strong" her thoughts pondered looking at the sky. She looked at Sameer, the star that removed all the darkness and filled her life with his love and warmth. She turned towards him, placed her hand on his heart which was beating furiously matching with her own. She gently kissed his cheek and said: " I love you Sameer" which he responded with a passionate voice " I love you too Naina" and pulled her close seeing her shivering lips and deep breaths

Ghati badti saasoun ke beech larajtein laboun Ki woh jumbish Ishq hai 

( larjtein laoun ki woh Jumbish - Shaking and quivering Movement of the lips)

He smiled without teasing her any further and held her close. He was glad to see that his Naina was taking those baby steps showering love on him and he just wanted to feel the serenity of her love.

She tossed back and started to gaze at the stars again."Dekho woh do taare kitne chamak rahein hai, lagta hai tumhare Nanu aur meri maa hai , jo humein saath dekh kar khush ho rahein hain". the mention of his Nanu brought few tears, his mind raced to the memories he could no longer suppress, thoughts of his Nanu, his unconditional love, the emptiness without him. With a heavy voice he said 

Hai dafan mujh mein kitni raunakein mat puch 

Har baar ujad ke bhi basta raha woh shehar houn mai

(dafan- buried, raunakein- brightness )

The memories of his childhood, the loneliness of the dark nights haunted him. Naina could feel his agony, she gently squeezed his hand to assure him that she will be with him always. Her closeness gave him the comfort that he craved for. At that moment the arms squeezed for a fraction tighter and Sameer breathed more slowly, his body melting into her as every muscle lost its tension to the spring air. She was his life, real life.  Naina knew she had to be his pillar and help him through tough times. Life can be rough ahead as well, strength doesn't just come from winning or getting what you want. The struggles and difficulties develop us and make us more human she explained to him " Jaise heere to tarashna padhta hai nikharne ke liye, yeh dard yeh taklifein ,in sabse guzar karke hi humein pyar ki ayimiyat(importance) pata chalti hai. Aur mai to houn ab tumhare saath har kadam par, har haal mein, toh sab aasan hoga. Hum ek dusre ko kabhi akela mehsoos hone nahi denge , ek dusre ki khushi banege aur rahi baat taklif ki woh bhi saath honge toh koi mushkil mushkil na hogi " then added

Yeh Zindagi hai Sahab 
Uljehnge nahi toh Suljehnge Kaise.
Bhikhrenge nahi to Nikhrenge Kaise

He nodded in agreement now. With her by his side, he was seeing a new hope, a new phase of life. He knew she would be his strength. Then with a slight glint of humor in the voice, she said 

Tere Mushurane ka asar sehat pe hota hai
Log puch letein hai dawa ka naam kya hai

Hearing this a smile crept on his lips. "Aise hi haste raha karo, roti shakal bilkul suit nahi karti tumhe  " she snuggled into him a little more as she said this. In that simple moment, he wrapped his arms around her and let her head rest upon his chest. All her thoughts stopped feeling him so close as if her heart took over from her head. He squeezed as if he needed to check she was really there with him, really there and really real... and she was, body and soul. He pulled her close and then said

Jagna bhikabool hai teri yaadoun mein raat bhar  
Tere ehsaaso mein jo sukoon hai who neend mein

It was 5:30 in the morning when Naina opened her eyes in the arms of Sameer. She looked at the innocent face smiling peacefully next to her. He wasn't the fire, yet he brought the warmth that's was new to her, steady her heart in a way she needed for so long. It was like finding the other half to a broken locket, a feeling of completeness. She gently kissed his forehead and a smile automatically flashed on his lips. He tugged her hand and said mischievously " Mrs. Naina Maheswari ki jhalak dikh rahi hai , aur bas itna hi pyar yahan par ", pointing his lips, she gently pushed him and ran outside the tent.

The spring grass shone like it had its own gentle glow from within. The air felt refrigerated, that same coolness combined with moisture. Sameer joined her and his hand reached hers and interlocked them "Youโ€™re so beautiful.โ€ he whispered she felt his warm breath near her ears, sending shivers down her spine. She blushed as he took her in his embrace. 

Nature was at her peak, blending the wild blooms with various shades of green.  It wasn't the monsoons but the picturesque beauty of greenerythat was so mesmerizing and soothing them. They both enjoyed the warmth of nature. 

Tu iss Qar mujhe apne kareeb lagta hai 
Tujhe alag jo sochu ajeeb lagta hai

Early morning exploration & riding along the highway with the sunrise was quite an experience for both of them. They had hot parathas at Dashmesh Punjabi Dhaba on the highway. 

He dropped her at the hostel for a quick nap before they head to the airport to pick up Chachaji. 

Precap : "Chachaji meri do shartein hai " Sameer replied. Naina looked at him with shock, not able to understand why is he talking about conditions now and what are those? why hasn't he discussed with her before about it?

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Posted: 4 years ago

This was beautiful  Sajida di

kya camping night this

voh ek dusre ki baho main

aur main unke khyalo main

haye

And and precap darwana nhi lekin bhut intriguing hain

sharte hongi sameer wali

usme koi doubt nhi

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Posted: 4 years ago

As usal beautiful and lovely update, dear Sajida . Samaina was long drive on bike i wanted this so long.๐Ÿ˜๐Ÿ˜ Serial m long drive to tha but bike ki baat hi alag h. I imagine poor sameer situation after naina holding him on waist and her hand on his heart to feel his racing heartbeat (this is so beautiful, ๐Ÿ˜๐Ÿ˜i love this) .and most shoking for sameer that his innocent naina teasing him๐Ÿ˜‚๐Ÿ˜‚ with her love filled line ( sajida your sayaris took my heart always they are so beautifuly lined up and so much connected to the situation. You are amazing dear to potriyard every situation and emotion and this quality make you different๐Ÿ‘๐Ÿ‘. When  the campfire and antakshri scence came i remember the beatiful memories of mount abu. And the chery of cake was on it sameer sing a song  for his naina. They took baby step to come closer (actully they are one soul in two bodies alerady) . And you showed naina's  prospective "we seek the light,  the chance to standup and be strong" so beautifuly  in those line fells so connectedโค๏ธ.sameer geting emotional for nanu but there is his naina to light up his darkend way( nanu's place never fulfiled for sameer but nanu send his blessings by  his angel naina to make him complete.the precap looking interesting  sameer and his shart ( i know his shart related to naina's happiness).and personally i loved this line so so much "ullzaine nahi hongi to suljhenge kaise, bhikhrenge nahi to nikhrenge kaise " ๐Ÿ˜๐Ÿ˜loved this update so much soothing and beautifuly. Love heart to heart talk. Love you alwaysโค๏ธ and appreciate your efforts for being this samaina story so beautiful, unique and special for me. ๐Ÿ‘๐Ÿ‘

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Posted: 4 years ago

Awesome update as always dear. Today also the shayaris r mind blowing Dil pe lo Yaar. Superb update Yaar. Will be reading this update again. 

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Posted: 4 years ago

Sajida  my dear friend what an extraordinary n sweet romantic update yaar  . A biggggg huggggg yaar. Long bike ride  so romantic  shayari's  superb.  Eagerly waiting for next update  . Take care lots of love 

Srilatha 

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Posted: 4 years ago

As usual mind blowing update