Pyaar ki nayi paribhasha....akshanFF (chapter 3) pg 4 - Page 3

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Posted: 5 years ago

Originally posted by: 123ni

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Wow...superb update...I think would Rahul he hoga...
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Chapter 3

 Guddan goes to a restaurant & wait for someone

A guy come & tab guddan's shoulder Guddan turn and saw him and says hi rahul kese ho tum. 

Rahul - me theek hu guddan ma. Aap kesi ho. 

Guddan - I m good. Or kaam kesa chal raha hai tumhara. 

Rahul - kaam to achha chal raha hai. Or London me v sb theek hai . Bahut khush hu mai vaha. 

Guddan- tum khush ho vaha. Pr tumhein dekh kr to nai lag raha ki. Rahul tum ghar walo ko miss ni karte. 

Rahul - nahi.... 

Guddan - pr ghar me sb tumhein bahut miss karte hai. Dadi, kishore, durga bahu, laxmi bahu, or vardaan ....vo to tumhein bahut miss karta hai .kafi batein karta hai tumhare bare me.... 

Rahul - ha vardaan bahi vo  or mai hum bahut masti karte the sara din. Vese mr. Jindal mere bare me baatein karne dete hai. 

Guddan- vo.... (Guddan think something)..... 

Rahul - nahi karne dete hongein.... Mai janta hu unhein....... Vo nafrat karte hai mujhse.... 

Esa kuch nai hai Rahul Mr. Jindal tumse nafrat ni karte bas thoda gussa hai. Or ye v sach hai ki vo v tumhein Bahut miss karte hai bas kisi se kahte nai hai..... 

Rahul- kya baat hai aap ko kuch hi din huye hai us ghar me or aap mr. Jindal ko itne aache se janne lagi. 

Guddan- esa kuch ni hai vo to bas.... Accha ye ab chodo or ye batao ki tum ghar kb aa rahe ho. 

Rahul- mai uss ghar me kabhi ni aaunga or nahi mr. Jindal ko kabhi maaf karunga. Jo kuch v inhonein mere saath kiya..... 

Guddan- Rahul hum iss bare me pahle v baat kar chuke hai..... Agar Mr. Jindal k place pr koi or v hota to vo v vohi karta.....vo sb ek misunderstanding thi. 

Rahul- jo v ho pr unhein meri baat v to samjhni chahiye thi. Mere hone ya na hone se unhein koi fark nahi padta...  Kher jane do...... 

agar aapne mujhe uss din nahi bachta hota to me sayad..... 

kuch galat nahi hota  guddan interrupt... 

Accha abhi iss bare me baat nahi karte. Ok

Rahul- hmmm

Guddan- chalo ab mujhe jana hoga. Tum v ghar jao or agar koi kaam ho to mujhe call karna.

Rahul- ok bye and take care  . 

Guddan- byee. 

Both leave 

Guddan return home. 

Dadi - kaha gyi thi beta or itna pareshan kyo lag rahi hai... 

Guddan- pareshaan nahi dadi hum pareshaan nahi hai bas thoda thak gye hai abhi thoda aaram karenge to theek ho jayenge.

Dadi - theek hai ru jake aram kar. 

Guddan leave. 

In room 

Guddan- hume kuch to karna hoga or vo v Rahul k London jane se pahle. Varna bahut der ho jayegi & baat or v jyada bigad jayegi

Kya  bigad jayega... Akshat interrupt

Guddan- kya   .....guddan is shocked & think kahi Mr. Jindal ne Rahul ke bare m sun to nahi liya.... 

Aj- abhi time kuch kah rahi thi  ki baat bigad jayegi

Guddan is relax aacha hai puri baat nahi suni

Kya nahi suna  akshat asked. 

Kya ha kya kuch v to nahi.... Guddan says and bite her nails.... 

Aj - jhooth tum jab v kuch jhooth bolti ho ya kuch secret rakhti ho to ese hi apne nails bite karti ho... 

Guddan - esa kuch nahi hai.or hum koi jhooth nahi bol rahe hai....or haan apko bada pata hai hamare baare me. 

Aj- to tum nahi bataogi.

Guddan - jb kuch hai hi nahi to kya bataye...

Aj - tumhaari marji and he fose to washroom. 

Guddan think abhi hum aapko kuch nahi bata sakte kyoki aap Rahul ka naam sunte hi gussa karenge. Or misunderstanding or v bad jaayegi. 

Sahi time aane pr hum khud aapko sb bata dengein. 

Abhi to humein Rahul ko innocent prove karna hai or ghar vapas lana hai. 

In evening. 

Dadi -  holi aane  wali hai to iss baar Jindal house me bahut dhoom dhaaam se holi manayenge.... Aakhir meri guddan ki shaadi k baad pahli holi hai. 

Guddan - are wah!  Phir to bada maja aayega dadi or humein to vese v holi bahut pasand hai.. 

 tumhein kya pasand nahi hai aj murmur... 

Kuch kaha aapne -guddan ask. 

Kuch to nahi -aj reply. 


Precap- some scane of ma & betas & holi parti  me kuch to hone wala hai...... Any idea 💭

Sorry for typing error or grammatical mistake.. 



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Posted: 4 years ago

Thanks for posting this story after a long gap.

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Posted: 4 years ago

Originally posted by: naaheean

Thanks for posting this story after a long gap.

Sorry for delay......their are some reason ki me story continue nahi kar payi iss baar pura try krungi time to time update karne ka.... 🙂🙂

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Posted: 4 years ago

Originally posted by: 123ni

 iss baar pura try krungi time to time update karne ka.... 🙂🙂

Will be waiting eagerly for your next update.

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Posted: 4 years ago

Nice update

Love it

Continue soon