Pyaar ki nayi paribhasha....akshanFF (chapter 3) pg 4

Posted: 5 years ago
Short update of my FF 
Akshat - same as show 

Guddan - same as show

Dadi, durga, laxmi, kishore, vardaan,  bhusan ji , revti - all are same as show

Saru & parv - main villan 😡😡


Vikram - he is positive but angry with akshat bcoz he think akshat is responsible for antra's death  

Rahul -  he is  positive  but not close with akshat (due to some reason akshat  & rahul have a huge fight so rahul leave the house.) 

Here in my story a big twist in guddan's character(Reveal after vkram's entry) 

Vikram, guddan, rahul share a special bond & some secrets

In my FF some changes like

Good bond between guddan & sons(reveal
later) 

Some sequences are same as show  .  

Story continue... so stay connect 
Till than happy holi  
 
Please ignor gremitcal error & spelling mistakes.



Edited by 123ni - 5 years ago
Posted: 5 years ago
Nice concept
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Nice concept
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Interesting 
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Chapter 1
In my introduction I forget two things 

1- kaushalya charter - she is not evil as in show .she is not involved in akshan marriage. But she only loves revti. 

2- vikram never blackmailed guddan (here some other twist) 

Here story start...(story same as show akshan ka milna ,unki fights & their marriage.  

After some days akshan's marriage. 
( asusal drama between guddan and her dil & some sweet fight between akshan) 

One morning akshat & his sons goes to restorent and dil are busy in their work 
Guddan and dadi chit chat. 

In evening vardaan return home early &  he is very upset and goes to his room. Laxmi try to talk but not work. 

After some time akshat & kishore return home & here akshat is very angry . 

Akshat - vardaan ..vardaan kaha ho tum idhar aao.  Vardaan come from his room .all are shocked and ask akshat what happened why are you so angry but akshat not listen anyone he just goes to vardaan and shout why u do this why.  

Vardaan - papa there is not my mistake. I never done my work carefully. 

Akshat- than how this blunder happen its all your mistake so accept and apologize to Mr. Sharma .
Chapter 1
In my introduction I forget two things 

1- kaushalya charter - she is not evil as in show .she is not involved in akshan marriage. But she only loves revti. 

2- vikram never blackmailed guddan (here some other twist) 

Here story start...(story same as show akshan ka milna ,unki fights & their marriage.  

After some days akshan's marriage. 
( asusal drama between guddan and her dil & some sweet fight between akshan) 

One morning akshat & his sons goes to restorent and dil are busy in their work 
Guddan and dadi chit chat. 

In evening vardaan return home early &  he is very upset and goes to his room. Laxmi try to talk but not work. 

After some time akshat & kishore return home & here akshat is very angry . 

Akshat - vardaan ..vardaan kaha ho tum idhar aao.  Vardaan come from his room .all are shocked and ask akshat what happened why are you so angry but akshat not listen anyone he just goes to vardaan and shout why u do this why.  

Vardaan - papa there is not my mistake. I have done my work carefully. 

Akshat- than how this blunder happen its all your mistake so accept and apologize to Mr. Sharma .

Vardaan - no papa i can't apologize I told you there is not my mistake .So why I apologize .

Kishore - papa vardaan never did a big mistake I know that. 

Vardaan - no papa i can't apologize I told you there is not my mistake than why I apologize .

Kishore - papa vardaan never did a big mistake I know that.

Dadi - lalla what happened kya kiya vardaan ne bata to sahi .

Akshat - ma  mene vardaan ko 10 lakh case diye the  mr. Sharma ko dene ke liye per jb Mr. Sharma ko isne diye to unme se 50 thousands kam the or isi karan hamari deal cancel ho gayi .vardaan ki ek mistake k karan aaj is restorent ka naam kharab hua hai or iske liye mai ise kabhi maaf nahi karuga . 

Vardaan - dadi mene esa kuch nahi kiya hai or jb mene Mr .  Sharma ko pure 10 lakh diye the. Mughe nahi pata usme se 50 thousands kaha gaye. 

Akshat - pr Mr. Sharma ne mere samne hi count kiye the usme se 50 thousands kam the or tum kah rahe ho tumahri koi mistake nahi hai. It's all your mistake. 
 
Vardaan - if u think there is my mistake & don't trust me to mai kuch nahi kar sakta .pr mei apologize nahi karunga. & he leave  

But before he leave akshat stop him and said ya to tum apologize karoge ya kal se restorent aane ki koi jarurat nahi hai & he leave. 

Vardaan - theek hai mai v  kal se restorent nahi jaunga pe kyoki Meri koi mistake nahi hai . & he also leave. 

All are upset and goer to their respective rooms . 

Next morning in dinning table all are present but there is pin drop silence. After breakfast akshat & kishor leave for work but vardaan is at home. 

Whole day vardaan is very upset all notice that  laxmi try to cheer up vardaan but not work he still upset because his father does not believe him. 

In evening all are present in Hall and akshat and kishor come .after some min.  4 workers are also come in Jindal Bhavan. 

Akshat - tum log yaha kya kar rahe ho. 
 
Humne inhein yaha bulaya hai  a voice come from behind and guddan come  & said  hum apko kuch batana chahte hai or in logo ka yaha hona Compelsary tha to humne inhein v bula liya .

Guddan - vo jo aapke 50 thousands gayab huye hai uske bare me bol rahi hu. 

Akshat - guddan tumse kitni baar kaha hai mere kaam se door raha karo or esa tum kya janti ho jo mai nahi janta. Tum to  yaha ghar pr thi na phir tumhe kese pata ki restorent mai kya hua .Ab bologi v kya janti ho tum jo mai nahi janta. 

Guddan - sach ha jindal shab hum sach jante hai or vo hi apko batana chahte hai To ab hamari baat suniye. Jb vardaan ne vo 10lakh Mr. Sharma ko dene k liye rakhe the to same place pr vardaan Or ye 4 worker v the. Or hum jante hai ki inme se kisne vo 50 thousands liya hai  

Akshat take guddan a side and said tum apni bakwaas band karo ye sb vardaan ki laparvahi ke karan hua hai. 

Guddan  - isme vardaan ki koi mistake nahi hai. Hamare paas is baar ka saboot hai or aap log ab sach bolege ya nahi  Hum pko ek last chance de rahe hai otherwise hum ye recording sbko dihka denge she shows her mobile.  Vese aapko bata de ki jb vo rupye chori hue or jisne kiye vo sb isme saaf saaf dikh rahe hai kya hai na us time yha Mr.  Gupta apni wife hi pic le rahe the or vedio v le rahe the to usme sb record ho gya hai. To ab aap me se jisne ye kiya hai vo khud sach bolega ya hum ye recording police ke de to phir vohi sach pata karti Or phir jisne v ye kiya hai vo job se to jayega hi saath me police ki maar Or phir kahi or job v nahi milegi. 

After few min.  When noone is said nothing 

Guddan - apki jesi marzi ab hum police ko phone karte hai vo hi asli chor ko arrest kregi or before she should complete 

One of them worker come forward and apologize to akshat and said  sir mughe galti ho gyi please maaf kr dijiye .Mai lalach mai aaa gaya tha. Isiliye mane ye sb kiya please mujhe maaf kar dijiye pr police ko mat boliye. 

Akshat & everyone are shocked & akshat is very angery .

Akshat - kisKe kehne pr kiya tumne ye sb bolo otherwise I will not leave u Bolo kiske khane pr kiya bolo

Worker - sir i dont know muhje bus ek call aya tha or usne mujhe  paiso ka laalach diya or mai uski baato mai aa gya please mughe maaf kr dijiye. Pr mujhe police e hawale mat kijiye mere wife or bacchon ka kya hoga .

Akshat  fired  the worker  And give warning stay away from my family. 

Workers leave from there. 

kishor -  apko  kaha se mili vo recording mene v check kiya tha pr mujhe koi proof nahi mila. 

Guddan - kon si recording. 

All looked confused especially akshat

Akshat - looked at guddan and ask vo bali recording jisme vo worker chori karte huye dikh raha hai. Ab drama band karo or jaldi batao. Or ha tum restorent kb gyi. 

Guddan - ek minute hamare pass koi recording nahi hai or ha hum abhi koi drama nahi kr rahe hai drama to vo tha jo humne phale kiya . 
 
Akshat and everyone are shocked.  

Durga - tum kya kahna chahti ho saaf saaf bolo. 

Guddan - durga ji hum na  aap logo ko starting se batate hai  kal jb akshat ji Or vardaan ka jagda hua uske baad humne socha ki agar vardaan ki koi mistake nahi hai to kisi or ki hogi .

Phir hum kishor ji k paas gaye or unse pucha ki jb ye incident hua tb uha vardaan k alava or kon kon tha.  Tb kishor ji ne bataya ki vardaan or vo 4 workers the .
Phir kya humne  un sb ko yaha bulaya or bus aage jo hua vo to aap sbne dekha 

Dadi - guddan beta jb tere paas koi saboot nahi tha phir tumhe ye sb kese kiya. 

Guddan - dadi bus hame vardaan ji ki baat pr bharosa tha ki unki koi mistake nahi hai to bus hume jo sahi laga humne kar diya. 

Dadi appreciate guddan . 

Akshat - vardaan tum kal se restorent join kr sakte ho or apna kaam phir se acche se 
start karo. 

Vardaan -  Come to guddan  and thanks her for trusting him. 

Guddan - vardaan tum kuch baat karna chahte ho akshat ji se  Abhi sahi moka hai aPne dil ki baat bata do. 

Vardaan is Confused  and ask aap kya kahna chahti hai  Mai kuch samjha nahi . 
 
Akshat - guddan tum kya bol rahi ho saaf saaf bologi. 
 
Kya hoga guddan ka jabaab. 

Or ab dekhne ko milegi Guddan Or vardaan ki bonding  with more Masti 

Preview- akshat & guddan  ki Sweet conversation and akshat apologize to vardaan .

 I know this chapter is Boring no akshan scan but here after some time milegi dekhne ko bonding between akshan  magar usse pahle bonding between guddan & sons so enjoy. 

This is my first time  to Boring ho sakta hai pr i will make sure jyada Boring na ho interesting karne ka try karugi ..    















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