Pyaar ki nayi paribhasha....akshanFF (chapter 3) pg 4 - Page 2

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Posted: 5 years ago
Nice chapter
Plz add Akshan scene in next chapter
Update soon
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Posted: 5 years ago
Nice chapter dear
It's really nice to see guddan bond with kishor vardaan 

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Posted: 5 years ago

chapter 2

Akshat  at vardaan for his careless & missing money and ask him not to come restorent guddan prove vardaan innocent. Vardaan thanks guddan for trusting him. Guddan ask vardaan share his dil ki baat to akshat ji .
 Let's continue. ..  
Akshat  to guddan  tum kya kahna chahti ho 

Guddan - ek minute  & she goes to her room & come with some papers and gives to akshat .

Akshat look papers and shocked .

Kishor , vardaan come forward & look these papers they also shocked .

Kishor - vardaan this is so beautiful ye tumne design kiya hai to bataya kyo nahi.

( in  papers there are some decorated design of restorent) 

Vardaan - Bhaiya mene to bas ase hi design kiya tha nothing spcl. 
Vardaan to guddan apko ye papers kaha  se mile ye to mene... 

 Dustbin me fek diye the bas uahi se hame mile Guddan said.  

Fb  (when guddan goes to Laxmi's room for some work she saw vardaan is upset & throw some papers in dustbin & leave guddan dustbin se papers uthaati hai or dekhkar kahti hai accha to ye baat his. ) 
Fb end.

kishor to  vardaan pr  tumne esa kyo kiya. Vardaan is quite.

Akshat  to Vardaan ab kuch bolo v (In  very angry tone) 

Guddan - akshat ji calm down aap ese gussa karege to vo kese kuch kahega Or sayad aapke isi gusse k karan vardaan apse kuch share nahi kar paya hoga. Kyoki use dar hoga ki agar usse koi galti hui to aap use phir se punish karege . Sahi kah rahe hai na hum vardaan .

Vardaan say nothing & akshat feel bad & he leave.
no one say nothing &all leave to their respective room. 

Guddan goes to her room but akshat is not there so she goes to poolside & saw akshat is sit there guddan goes near him and sit beside him.

Akshat - tum yaha kya kar ho. Jao yaha se main kuch der akele rahna chata hu.
Guddan - nahi hum yahi rahege  
Akshat said nothing &  try to leave but guddan hold his hand  and said jb koi baat dil ko pareshan kar to use kisi se share kar leni chahiye.Or aap dadi se kuch kahegein nahi Or bahuo(DIL) se to bilkul nahi oor na hi kishorji se to bacha kon sirf guddan yani hum to bol dijiye jo aap bolna chahte hai .

Akshat look at guddan  with mixed emotions. But he said nothing .

Guddan -apko pata hai apki problem kya hai jb aap kisi se naraz hote hai to uspar gussa kar dete hai pr jb aap kisi ki care karte  hai to vo nahi bol pate. 

Akshat - tumhe pata hai guddan aaj tk mai yahi sochta raha ki main unhein unki galtiyaano ki saja dekar unko discipline me rakh raha hu pr is sb me mujhe pata hi nahi chala ki kb vo sb mujhse itna darne lage ki vo  apne dil ki baat v ni kah pa rahee.
 
Guddan look akshat and said to abhi v sb theek ho sakta hai. Kya karna hai or kese ye sb aap bahut acche se jante hai

Guddan's Phone ring she cut the call & get tense .she leave from there &  call someone & shout kitni baat kaha hai Ki tum mujhe call nahi karoge agar koi or pick kar let to kya hota ...sorry sorry he interrup ab se nahi Karuga or ha  important baat karni hai is liye  iss time call kiya .
Guddan  smile & said ha bolo
(Conversation is muted)
Guddan - ok I understand.main kuch Sochi hu phir call karti hu .bye good night

Preview - guddan  goes some where secretly & meet someone. 

Edited by 123ni - 5 years ago
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Posted: 5 years ago
Nice chapter
Guddan phone pr kis se baat kr rhi thi qa vo rawat tha??
plz update soon
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Posted: 5 years ago

Originally posted by: Kammy02

Nice chapter

Guddan phone pr kis se baat kr rhi thi qa vo rawat tha??
plz update soon

No.. .. he is not Rawat but someone else
Wait for next update  there are some twist.  ... .
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Posted: 5 years ago
Please help me
Main apne FF me chapter no. Or page no. Kese add karu ki vo show kare ki chapter 1,2,3... Update hua hai. 
Edited by 123ni - 5 years ago
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Posted: 5 years ago

Originally posted by: 123ni

Please help me

Main apne FF me chapter no. Or page no. Kese add karu ki vo show kare ki chapter 1,2,3... Update hua hai. 

Sbse pehla post me jakar usme edit button me click krke title me jakar usme edit ho skta hai
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Posted: 5 years ago
Nice update dear
Really like akshan conversation

Is the secret caller rahul

Update soon 
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Posted: 5 years ago

Originally posted by: Kammy02

Sbse pehla post me jakar usme edit button me click krke title me jakar usme edit ho skta hai

Thank you so much for help๐Ÿ˜Š๐Ÿ˜Š
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Posted: 5 years ago
Awesome updates 
Love it
Continue soon