AlaSmine FF: Shahi Talwaar.. Part 11 updated on page 21

Ani09

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Goldie

Posted: 5 years ago

Hi, sorry for being late, I thought this as an OS at start but then when I started writing it became pretty long. But no way I am going to remove AlaSmine scenes ...so here is its first Part.

Part 1

Few days before baadshah Shehnawaaz brought a Shahi Talwaar which he was wanting to have from yeras... He got this Sword in the owner of defeating 50 strong nations...

Baadshah Shehnawaaz made an announcement in the local darbaar- Aaj se saat din baad Baghdad me manaya jayega Jashn-e-fateh...

Everyone was happy in the mahal...

Yasmine - aaj abba huzoor kitne kush hai... Allah unki khushi barkaraar rakhna...

Yasmine was enjoying the dinner with the family he started thinking of aladdin and the lovely moments that they have shared

Yasmine (to herself) - alladin utna bura bhi nahi hai...

Suddenly her mother called her...

Yasmine slipped the spoon from her hand...

Yasmine - maaf chahenge hamara dhyaan kahi aur tha..

Begum-kya baat hai shezaadi aap itni khush lag rahi hai aaj...

Yasmine blushed a little and replied - aisa toh kuch bhi nahi hai ammijaan..

Begum-ammi hai aapki sab jaanti hai... Koi shezaada pasnad aa gaya hai...

Yasmine - nahi.. Nhai..

(inside shecwas like- shehzaada toh hai par choro ka ...lagta iss liye mere dil churaane par tula hai.. Par yasmine nahi tujhe apne sultana banane ke khwaab ke beech isse nahi aane dena chaahiye.. .)

At aladdin 's house

Aladdin - Tumne suna ginu mere bhai... Kuch hi dino me Jashn-e-fateh hai aur meri pyari shehzaadi.. Y.. Yasmine ki paalki bhi niklegi... Masha Allah!!

Ginu pinched Aladdin to bring him to the real world...

Ginu- Aka Aladdin naam toh suna hi hoga... Agar aap iss tarah khayalo me khoye rahoge toh... Shezaadi se milna toh door unhe dekh bhi nahi paaoge... Isliye jaldi se jo chaachi ne kaam diya hai use khatam kare...

Alladin looked at all the utensils that they were supposed to wash...

Alladin (to himself) - kaash Nachidii hoti toh susse bolkar saare bartan dhulwa deta... Par kuch bhi kaho Nachidii... Matlab Sana utni bur

INDEX

AlaSmine FF :Part 2

AlaSmine FF: Part 3

AlaSmine FF:Part 4

AlaSmine FF :Part 5

AlaSmine FF :Part 6

AlaSmine FF: Part 7

AlaSmine FF:Part 8

AlaSmine FF: Part 9

Edited by 1973deepak - 5 years ago

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Sanchita

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Posted: 5 years ago

Very beautiful update. Was imagining each and every scene. Do continue soon👏

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Ani09

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Goldie

Posted: 5 years ago

Originally posted by: sanchita1410
Very beautiful update. Was imagining each and every scene. Do continue soon 👏

Thanks sanchita, I am glad that you like the update...

Will try to update next part by tomorrow... 😊

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Sanchita

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Posted: 5 years ago

Oh really by tomorrow. I am eagerly waiting

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Anonymous8

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Posted: 5 years ago

Nice one Ananya <3 !! Will be waiting for your next update :)

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Monica

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Posted: 5 years ago

Thanks for ur pm dear 😃

Amazing Update 👏⭐️. Could imagine every single scene in front of my eyes 👏

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Ani09

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Posted: 5 years ago

Originally posted by: Anonymous8
Nice one Ananya <3 !! Will be waiting for your next update :)

Thanks for your appreciation ...

Will update soon...

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Ani09

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Goldie

Posted: 5 years ago

Originally posted by: moniluvskinshuk
Thanks for ur pm dear 😃
Amazing Update 👏⭐️. Could imagine every single scene in front of my eyes 👏

I am glad that you were able to imagine the scenes.. That is One Of

the thing For Which We write For. . . . 😊

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Ani09

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Goldie

Posted: 5 years ago

Originally posted by: sanchita1410
Oh really by tomorrow. I am eagerly waiting

Yes Sanchita, I have updated second part of the OS

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Ani09

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Goldie

Posted: 5 years ago

Part 2

In yasmine's Room

Piddi - shant ho jaye shezaadi..

Yasmine cooled down after piddi's pleadings..

Yasmine - piddi!!! Hume uss chor ko pakda hoga...

Piddi-par kaise!!!

Yasmine - humare paas ek tarkeeb hai par uske liye hume mahal ki iss char deewari se bahaar nikalna hoga...

Piddi- par... Shezaadi

Yasmine - par... Var... Kuch nahi..yeh humara aakhiri faisla hai... Aur iss kaam me apko humaara saath dena hoga

Piddi- hume par kaise...

Yasmine - tumhaari basti me koi kiraye ke liye ghar khaali hai kya...

Piddi quickly thought of Aladdin's house

Piddi- hai toh... Par... Waha ki maalkin bohot buri laalchi aur matlabi kisam ki hai...

Yasmine - koi baat nahi... Hum apne abbahuzoor ke liye kuch bhi kar sakte hai... Unki jholli asharfiyo se bhar do... Par yaad rahe hum waha Shezaadi Yasmine nahi Sana bankar jayenge...

Piddi- Sana!!

Yasmine - Vo.. Vo.. Hume yeh naam pasand hai..

Yasmine remembered her fight with aladdin in mines...

Piddi- kaha kho gayi Shezaadi...

Yasmine - kahi bhi nahi...

Piddi - accha hua aapka gussa shant ho gaya varna iss kamre me ek bhi kaach ya mitti ki bani vastu bachti nahi..

Yasmine stared at piddi with eyes pretending to be angry

Yasmine - piddi!! Hum tumhe chodenge nahi...

Yasmine and piddi started playing and soon the day comes to end...

A fresh bright morning in Baghdad...

Alladin as usual tried with his night job of Kalachor was sleeping till afternoon...

Suddenly a splash of water came on his face...

Alladin - Baad aagayi baad!!!

He soon realizes Yasmine standing in front of him wearing a red royal dress with mild jewelry amd holding a glass of water in his hand...

Yasmine - uth gaye Kalechor, varna hume laga tha ki pura samudra ka paani lagega tum jaise shaitaan ko jagaane ke liye...

Alladin - Nachidii!!! Tum.. Tum yaha kya kar rahi ho... Kisi ne dekh liya toh gazab ho jyaega

Aladdin panicked and pulled her in the corner before she could say anything...

Yasmine - chodo hume... Kalechor... Tumhe is gustakhi ki saaza milegi...

Yasmine was about to go back... Suddenly she felt a jerk on her left hand..

Alladin pulled her and trapped her between him and the wall... For a moment they both get lost in each other's eyes...

Yasmine soon try to distract herself... Alladin understood that she was feeling little uncomfortable so he took his hands off...

Alladin - Maaf karna... Par tum harkate hi aisi karti ho... Tum yaha kyo aayi ho... Mera peecha karte karte yaha tak aa gayi... Mujhse door nahi raha jaata... Sahi kaha na...

Yasmine - (slowly said) haan...

Alladin - kya??

Yasmine realized that she said something that she should not...

Yasmine - mera kehne ka matlab hai... Ki mujhe tumhaari izaazat ki zaroorat nahi iss ghar mein rehne ke liye...

Alladin - accha... Tumhe toh main nahi chodunga...

Alladin ran to catch her... When they suddenly banged with Ruksaar...

Ruksaar - yaah allah!!! Is ghar ko jang ka maidan bana rakha hai tum logo ne...

Alladin feared that mom will bang thousands of questions seeing yasmine in his room...

Alladin - ammi!! Yeh... Yeh meri... Dooor ki dost hai...

Ruksaar - par yeh...

Alladin - haan maa yeh yaha se chale jayegi... Haina...

Alladin saw yasmine with compelling eyes... Yasmine came near to Ruksaar

Yasmine - Ammi apne pyaar.. Jigar ke tukde.. Ko bataya nahi ki ab se hum yahi rahenge...

Ruksaar hugged her tightly - meri pyaari bacchi chalo tumhaare liye... Sheer korma banaya hai..

Alladin was confused at this sight...

Alladin - ammi!! Yeh...

Ruksaar - haan yeh ab humare saath hi rahegi... Jab tak iske abbu ka vyapaar ka kaam khatam nahi ho jaata...

Alladin - sach!!!( changing the excited tone to dull) accha theek hai... Par ise bol do ki yeh mere kamre main iss tarah nahi aa sakti...

Ruksaar - par aladdin!!

Yasmine - ammi sahi toh keh raha hai... Mujhe iss tarah iske kamre main nahi aana chahiye...

Alladin - waah pehli baar samajhdaari ki baat ki tumne...

Yasmine - ek kaam karte hai... Ab se aladdin ka kamra mera kamra...

Ruksaar - kya???

Yasmine - mera matlab ammi... Ab se aladdin mehmaan kaksh me so jaayega aur main yaha..

Alladin - aise khwaab nahi dekhte Nachidii... Meri ammi mera kamra kisi ko nahi degi... Haina ammi

Yasmine - ammi!!!

Yasmine's puppy face melt Ruksaar's heart

Ruksaar- aladdin tu har roz toh yaha sota hai... Kuch din bahar so jaa...

Aladdin - ammi!!!

Ruksaar- aladdin!!!

Alladin starts his melodrama - nahi!!! Nahi!!! Ammi yeh tune kya kiya... Ammi yeh tune kya kiya... Apne jigere ko iss ladki ke liye... Ghar se nikal diya...

Yasmine make a disgusting face...

Yasmine - ammi aap iski shayari sunkar behosh nahi hoti... Iski shayari toh sher ki hawa nikal de.. Hum toh phir bhi insaan hai...

Ruksaar- Sana!!! Mere aladin ko kyu chidha rahi ho...

Alladin making teasing - Aakhir ammi kiski hai...

Ruksaar- accha ab agar tum dono ki nok jhok khatam ho gayi ho toh sheer korma tum logo ka intazaar kar raha hai...jaldi se kha lo varna jeenu kha jayega...

As Ruksaar exits from room... Aladin hold Yasmine's hand and asked - tum yaha chori karne toh nahi aati ho na... Main pehle keh de raha hoon ki...

Yasmine- ki... Kya...???

Aladdin - ki.. Ki.. Tum aisa nahi kar sakti

Yasmine - kyo nahi kar sakti???

Aladdin - kyoki Kalechor ek hi ghar main do baar chori nahi karte...

Yasmine - maine kab chori ki yaha par

Aladdin - tumne yaha se sabse badi cheez churayi hai

Yasmine - kya???

Aladdin - mera dil...

Hope you will this part... I tried to bring AlaSmine scene to it.. Please like, comment and review... All sort of comments are welcomed... 😃😳

Edited by 1973deepak - 5 years ago

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