My Angel BeHir FF <IF_NC_ENTRY> Ch 13 on Pg 44 - Page 4

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Posted: 5 years ago
U have started a very new story quite opposite to previous one... 
Bold Bela and innocent mahir was something quite interesting.. 
Haha Bela due to dare kissed mahir and mahir feeling cry 
OMG all the best ash 
Waiting for their combined studies and wanna know how love blossoms between two opposite poles 
Do update soon 
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Posted: 5 years ago

Originally posted by: The.Wanderer


Thanks Maria!! ๐Ÿ˜ณ


I guess I can give an intro to each character informally in a comment and not as a part of the story. 

Janvi Sharma is Bella's mother. A single mom and a yesteryear star. 

Omkar Kapoor is a filthy rich rich producer who courted and then impregnated Janvi when she was just starting her career. 

Bultu, Rehan, Anu, Adi, Kuhu all are Bella's friends. 

Yuvi is her boyfriend. 

Sumitra and Andy were explained in the into itself. 

I hope the characters are clear. ๐Ÿ˜ƒ



Might I ask the question. 

So Bella does not have any relations with her father too? 
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Posted: 5 years ago

Originally posted by: nuomi.riceball



Might I ask the question. 

So Bella does not have any relations with her father too? 



Nope. Why she doesn't have any relationship with her father will get cleared in the next few chapters. 
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Posted: 5 years ago

Originally posted by: The.Wanderer


Thanks Maria!! ๐Ÿ˜ณ


I guess I can give an intro to each character informally in a comment and not as a part of the story. 

Janvi Sharma is Bella's mother. A single mom and a yesteryear star. 

Omkar Kapoor is a filthy rich rich producer who courted and then impregnated Janvi when she was just starting her career. 

Bultu, Rehan, Anu, Adi, Kuhu all are Bella's friends. 

Yuvi is her boyfriend. 

Sumitra and Andy were explained in the into itself. 

I hope the characters are clear. ๐Ÿ˜ƒ



Thanks๐Ÿ˜†
Also what about Mahir? Can we have someone for him like Kuhu was there for Vibha?๐Ÿ˜ณObviously its your story and you can do whatever you want but like just saying i shipped Kuhu-Vibha more than Bevish๐Ÿ˜ณ
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Posted: 5 years ago

Originally posted by: Maria.Jewel



Thanks ๐Ÿ˜†
Also what about Mahir? Can we have someone for him like Kuhu was there for Vibha?๐Ÿ˜ณObviously its your story and you can do whatever you want but like just saying i shipped Kuhu-Vibha more than Bevish๐Ÿ˜ณ



Nope Mahir will be all alone. He will only have his mother in his corner.๐Ÿ˜ณ
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Posted: 5 years ago
Does he pay child support or something like that?


Or Bella is treated like any illegitimate daughter?

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Posted: 5 years ago

Originally posted by: The.Wanderer



Nope Mahir will be all alone. He will only have his mother in his corner.๐Ÿ˜ณ



aww poor baby <3
But i trust you with your character building and story and oh god mujhse wait nahi ho raha
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Posted: 5 years ago
TALIYAN BAJNI CHAHIYE ๐Ÿ‘ 
I love it Ash.. Seeing Bela as the new baddie.. ๐Ÿ˜†

Have to say.. I just love the way your characters have a backstory that gives us a hint about why the characters are like that.. ๐Ÿ‘๐Ÿ‘ 

You have to continue this... And loving the way you also bring humor in your story.. Lovely.. 

๐Ÿ‘๐Ÿ‘ 

Edit - Mujhe ab cute negative wali bela chahiye.. ๐Ÿคฃ ๐Ÿคฃ
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Posted: 5 years ago

Originally posted by: _nakshi_

U have started a very new story quite opposite to previous one... 

Bold Bela and innocent mahir was something quite interesting.. 
Haha Bela due to dare kissed mahir and mahir feeling cry 
OMG all the best ash 
Waiting for their combined studies and wanna know how love blossoms between two opposite poles 
Do update soon 



Thanks Pranu!! And yes I thought this would be unique prompt to write about so i chose it. ๐Ÿ˜ƒ
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Posted: 5 years ago

Originally posted by: nuomi.riceball

Does he pay child support or something like that?


Or Bella is treated like any illegitimate daughter?


Have some patience Nuomi. I will reveal everything at the right time. I will post chapter 2 in a few minutes. ๐Ÿ˜†