My Angel BeHir FF <IF_NC_ENTRY> Ch 13 on Pg 44 - Page 2

Originally posted by: sonie32

ash awesome start👏👏👏

this role reversal thing is mind blowing😉

i can imagine bala(SJ) as brat look and for maahirji mo ka bb wala sree look(with glasses😆 ) came in my mind😳

update soon...waiting...

Awesome intro 

Wow yaar what a character u gave to bella 

ahahaha🤣🤣ash🤣

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This is a strong first chapter. But the word limit is going to work against you. I think the strongest part of your stories is all the details you write. Even with the limit you have written so well!

Does Mr. Thick Glasses have any friends? I can perfectly imagine Bela with this role reversal. Every character does not seem out of place so far. You have written their dialogues and roles perfectly.

Thank you for including Bultu 😆

Excellent update Ash! Looking forward to the rest of the story.

wow
waiting for next update

Originally posted by: Varsha001

Nice update 👏😃

Originally posted by: Vrishthi04

Awesome intro 

The role swap is awesome 

Looking forward to look SJ in such a stud role and never seen role before

U r just awesome Ash 

Firstly u showed MAHIR in such an awesome friendship character then in such a spoilt brat character then too a lovely but shy husband character n now in such a positive momma's boy character,  every girl yearns for..

Oh just can't get enough of ur reading,  it's such a lovely introduction so how will be d story it would be mind blowing... 

How will this story progress,  can't wait 2 read.. .

Imagining from now only SJ in the character

Originally posted by: Vrishthi04

Wow yaar what a character u gave to bella 

The first meet n a kiss it's cherry on cake 4 Behir fans,  hope 2 see something like this more often 

The character u described in intro it seems like it's going to be a blast to watch her portray this character on screen.    

An amazing Behir story is going to unfold