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This is Sumi 😃.
My first attempt on Radha Krishna and Balram😆😳.
I tried my best to stay true to the characters😳.
It's your opinion which matters the most⭐️😃.
Radha Krishna Balram OS : Exchange of Unsaid Emotions :)
"You are so caring and protective Dau, please save me this time as well", Krishna murmured with a broad grin on his face.
Dau is sure in trouble for now 😆.
"AHHH", cried Balram in pain when Rohini Maiyya pulled his ear.
Balram woke up suddenly from his peaceful sleep and found Yashoda and Rohini glaring at him.
"What happened, why both of you are looking at me?", asked Balram confused.
Yashoda and Rohini pointed at 4 empty pots which was filled with makkhan.
"I have not done anything,Maiyya😲", said Balram with a frightened look.
He suddenly felt that his mouth was covered with makkhan and he wipe it off from his face.
"KANHAAA", shouted Balram after realising what actually happened with him.
"Kanha is busy grazing the cows and you are getting punishment, Bal", Rohini glaring at him.
"Maiyya..I..I..didn't..", replied Balram.
"You will not get any of the meals tomorrow as is your punishment", stated Rohini.
"WHAT?!Maiyyaaa", exclaimed Balram.
Both Yashoda and Rohini left the room and Balram was angry with Krishna.
"You have done extremely wrong with me Kanha , I will not forgive you this time", said annoyed Balram slapping his forehead.
On the other hand, Krishna giggles, "Let's see for how long you can stay angry with me, Dau".
After performing his duties of a cowherd, Krishna plays his flute sitting in the shade of the banyan tree and all cows besides bow down to him and becomes mesmerized in the melodious tunes of his flute.
Radha hearing the flute runs towards the melodious tone while she finished preparing 4 pots of butter.
A golden glow on her face, her dark kohled eyes representing compassion, her bow-curved lips forming into a beautiful smile, her neck decorated by the floral jewellery, a beautiful maangtika, wearing a colorful and silken lehenga, flowers blossoms, Yamuna river shimmers when she runs towards a person whom she loves but unable to express her feelings and heart is in a turmoil of emotions.
"Krishna", exclaimed Radha glowing with happiness.
"Come Radha", Krishna extends his hands towards her and she shyly accept and sits besides him gracefully.
Krishna notices a change in Radha's look, he notices a peacock feather settled in her hair.
She looks towards his flute and feels the good luck of it as Krishna fills life in it by blows his breathe into it with his soft lips. Nevertheless she felt jealous of flute itself. She decorated her hair with a peacock feather to please Krishna.
Krishna understoods her thoughts and smiles , he pluck a rose flower from a plant and settled it nicely on Radha's hair.
Krishna teasingly play with her lath, Radha blushes bubbling with happiness.
Krishna picks 5-6 pebble into his hand throws it one by one towards the pots of approaching gopis.
Gopis looks towards Krishna while he enjoy and laughs at the sight of pots falling down.
"Kanhaiyya", runs gopis behind him with a stem of plant to beat him.
Radha looks on slightly irritated.
Krishna then turns around and flashes his beautiful smile melting gopis once again for good.
Gopis were once again mesmerised with the beauty of his large eyes and his divinely beautiful smile.
Radha claps her hand when the gopis come out of their trance.
"Oh Kanha, you again make a fool out of us, it feels that we should complain about you to Yashoda, you are very naughty, first you breaks our pots and then mesmerises us with your smile, it's unfair",said Lalita with a innocent glee.
She looks towards his flute and feels the good luck of it as Krishna fills life in it by blows his breathe into it with his soft lips. Nevertheless she felt jealous of flute itself. She decorated her hair with a peacock feather to please Krishna.
Krishna understoods her thoughts and smiles , he pluck a rose flower from a plant and settled it nicely on Radha's hair.
Krishna teasingly play with her lath, Radha blushes bubbling with happiness.
Krishna picks 5-6 pebble into his hand throws it one by one towards the pots of approaching gopis.
Gopis looks towards Krishna while he enjoy and laughs at the sight of pots falling down.
"Kanhaiyya", runs gopis behind him with a stem of plant to beat him.
Radha looks on slightly irritated.
Krishna then turns around and flashes his beautiful smile melting gopis once again for good.
Gopis were once again mesmerised with the beauty of his large eyes and his divinely beautiful smile.
Radha claps her hand when the gopis come out of their trance.
"Oh Kanha, you again make a fool out of us, it feels that we should complain about you to Yashoda, you are very naughty, first you breaks our pots and then mesmerises us with your smile, it's unfair",said Lalita with a innocent glee.
"Acchaaa", Krishna twisted her wrist with a naughty grin on his face.
"Oh, Kanha, not again", blushes Lalita escaping his touch.
Krishna then moves towards Vishakha and makes her blush as well by winking at her.
Krishna then plays with all other gopis by spinning in circles and teases them.
Radha feels jealous and steals the flute of Krishna.
"I am not going to return your flute back", said Radha angrily and she left from the place.
Krishna smiles seeing her jealousy. Radha expects him to stop her but all in vain which makes her upset.
Radha goes on the terrace in her home located at Barsana.She sees pigeons moving here and there, birds chirping which makes her heart at peace.
"Why do I feel jealous everytime when I notice Krishna with gopis? It has never happened with me before? Why my heart feels restless when I don't see him? Why my heart is washed with overwhelming relief when I see him playing his flute?", wondered Radha to herself looking at the flute of Krishna.
Krishna reaches his home at Vrindavan and found Balram doing exercise as usual.
"Dauuu",Krishna hugged him from behind. Balram moves away from him angrily.
"Don't come near me Kanha", said Balram with a slight stern voice, keeps his exercising tool back into place and leaves the room.
Krishna knew that his Dau was seriously mad at him this time and is not going to forgive him easily.
"Dauuu, forgive me please ", Krishna moves infront of him and do sit-ups holding his ears.
Balram melts but appear to be strict from outside.
Krishna smiles seeing her jealousy. Radha expects him to stop her but all in vain which makes her upset.
Radha goes on the terrace in her home located at Barsana.She sees pigeons moving here and there, birds chirping which makes her heart at peace.
"Why do I feel jealous everytime when I notice Krishna with gopis? It has never happened with me before? Why my heart feels restless when I don't see him? Why my heart is washed with overwhelming relief when I see him playing his flute?", wondered Radha to herself looking at the flute of Krishna.
Krishna reaches his home at Vrindavan and found Balram doing exercise as usual.
"Dauuu",Krishna hugged him from behind. Balram moves away from him angrily.
"Don't come near me Kanha", said Balram with a slight stern voice, keeps his exercising tool back into place and leaves the room.
Krishna knew that his Dau was seriously mad at him this time and is not going to forgive him easily.
"Dauuu, forgive me please ", Krishna moves infront of him and do sit-ups holding his ears.
Balram melts but appear to be strict from outside.
"Stop your drama, Kanha", said Balram making his voice sound stern.
Balram was upset of getting the end of the stick from Yashoda or Rohini due to Kanha's deeds everyday. He tries to avoid him to teach him a small lesson. Krishna becomes sad after failed attempts.
"Now if you will also get angry with me, then with whom I will share my pain, laugh out loud, share my secrets? There is no certainty of future so I want to spend my time enjoying with you as much as possible!", said Krishna with a sad smile.
Balram finally let go of his sterness and a single tear role down his cheek.
He hugged Krishna with warmth and Krishna smiled with joy.
"You are my soul Kanha, see I can't even stay angry with you."
Balram wipes his tears and hit Krishna softly on his shoulder - Natkhat😆!
"Owww Dau, don't worry about meals, your brother is here!", said Krishna thumping his chest.
Balram smiles seeing his naughty brother.
Krishna and Balram moves out to greet the nature. Krishna meets up with Radha at Barsana playfully while Balram uses his ploughing skills to impress everyone around including Kirtida.
"My Dau is amazing, isn't it Kaki?", asked Krishna.
"Yes, absolutely", said Kirtida with a happy smile.
"Why don't you call Yashoda maiyya and Rohini Kaki today?", asked Krishna.
"That's a great idea, Kanha", said Kirtida caressing his cheek.
"Radha, are you angry with me ?", asked Krishna raising his eyebrows.
Radha tried to avoid his eyes. "You are hiding something, isn't it Radha?", asked Krishna.
No was the answer he received.
"Accha, so what is this?", he pointed at her eyes which were red and puffy.
Krishna smiled and raises her chin when her eyes meet his dark , deep and large eyes.
Krishna smiled and raises her chin when her eyes meet his dark , deep and large eyes.
"You were crying,weren't you?",asked Krishna with a gentle voice.
Radha was stunned.
"You were jealous of my flute, weren't you?", asked Krishna.
Radha looks at him, her eyes becoming moist.
"You were jealous of the gopis, weren't you?", asked Krishna.
"How did you know Krishna?", Radha asks back with hesitation in her voice.
Krishna laughs at her innocent question.
"I know you more than you know yourself Radha", said Krishna in a voice reflecting mix feelings of sadness and happiness."
"You were restless, wasn't able to sleep properly from few days, waited for me to play the flute so that you can have the chance to see me, the happiness on your face after having a glimpse of me into your eyes, the feather of peacock you decorated to please me, the sweet jealousy and anger for gopis when you noticed me teasing them, what are these emotions?", continued Krishna.
Radha introspected herself by closing her beautiful eyes and she got her answer.
"LOVE", replied Radha with her eyes still closed.
Krishna smiles, eyes brimming with happy tears.
"I am in love with you Krishna", said Radha with a beautiful smile on her face.
"No!", replied Krishna.Radha was taken aback.
"What do you mean to say Krishna?", asked Radha.
Krishna makes her sit on a spring and bending on his knees looks at her eyes which was searching for an answer.
"There is no jealousy in love, Radha", said Krishna holding her soft hands.
Radha looks at him with curiousness.
"The flute which you took from me is the symbol of love itself, Radha."
"Do you know that I love playing flute because it makes me feel connected to you? The tunes of this flute gives me happiness as I get a chance to see you dancing without a care for the world, you are music to this flute, Radha."
Radha's face softens with a beautiful smile hearing his words.
"It gives me immense joy to see you mesmerised with the tunes of my flute. Without you, this flute will be useless for me!", said Krishna whole-heartedly.
"You were jealous of gopis because you were unable to settle your emotions which were creating a storm inside your heart, you were unaware of your own emotions", smiled Krishna.
"Love is a feeling where you wish for other person's happiness, it's only emotion that connects two people in the difficult times", said Krishna.
Radha looks towards Krishna when realisation of her possessivess and jealousy for Krishna hits her hard , she hold his hand back and tears rolls down her cheeks.
Radha nods her head and bow down to him.
Krishna immediately make her stand, wipes her tears and Radha looks at him with a sweet smile and tearful eyes.
"Here is your flute, Krishna", said Radha while returning the flute.
Krishna looks at it and then at her. They both sit on a spring smiling at each other.
"Blow air into it Radha and I will play the flute for you", said Krishna smiling gently at her.
Radha is filled with happiness and admiration for Krishna.
She does the same as instructed by Krishna and he holds and moves her fingers across the flute.
That was the most sweetest melody for Krishna coming from his flute after years.
After a while Radha falls asleep and rest her head on Krishna's shoulders.
"Blow air into it Radha and I will play the flute for you", said Krishna smiling gently at her.
Radha is filled with happiness and admiration for Krishna.
She does the same as instructed by Krishna and he holds and moves her fingers across the flute.
That was the most sweetest melody for Krishna coming from his flute after years.
After a while Radha falls asleep and rest her head on Krishna's shoulders.
Krishna gives a broad grin with joy seeing Radha sleeping comfortably.
Meanwhile, Balram steals the 4 pots of butter prepared by Radha, blushes seeing the premleela of his younger brother and runs away from the spot saying "Radhey Radhey". Krishna giggles seeing his elder brother's antics.
Both Yashoda and Rohini gives their visit at night as planned by Kirtida when Radha takes blessings of them. Kirtida praises Balram for his power and skills.
Yashoda and Rohini catches hold of Balram for dinner [Mother can't see his son hungry 😆].
Telepathy communication-
Balram: Kanha save me.
Krishna: Eat food Dau, you were very hungry, huh?
Balram: I was but not now, I have already eaten 4 pots of butter prepared by Radha.
Krishna laughs while Radha joins him.
Radha:What happened Krishna?
Krishna pointed at 4 pots which were empty and then points at Balram.
Radha understoods everything and gives a sweet and naughty smile and nods at Balram.
Balram looks at them with a helpless look but deep inside, he was enjoying all attention being poured upon him.
Both Radha and Krishna have a hearty laugh seeing Yashoda and Rohini feeding Balram who was already full.
Vrishbaan and Nand becomes happy seeing the bond of their families.
Radha dances to the tunes of Krishna's flute making everyone in the hall mesmerised ❤️.
THE END!
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