Tere Sath Sath Chal Diya Mn [KriBir SS] [Chapter 15 Page 20] - Page 4

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Posted: 5 years ago
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[Chapter 2]
[ITS NOT HER DAY]

Those clashes of egos and that one meeting left its effect on both..
Both cant forget each other...
He was mesmerized by her beauty ...
But her stupidity was coming in between...
Bcz his work was left half...
And he was angry on that...
As it was necessary to catch that guy...
He would have caught him today...
But she came in between and ruined all...

And there she cant forget his smile...
A sweet decent pleasant and a handsome smile...
One cant forget easily...
But he behaved so rudely with her...
Her mind was shouting he is a bad guy...
But her heart was on opposite site...
It was screaming that he isnt that bad...
She was confused...
But then she thought he is a good guy as he was catching a drug dealer...
But she didnt knew the fact...

Sleep took both of them in its embrace...
And they went into a deep slumber...

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Sunshine enlighten the room full of mess...
May be we cant call it a room...
It was an old and devastated mansion...
It seemed that no one cleaned it from years...
Spider webs on the wall...dust spreaded all around...and all mess...
A normal human can't live there...
But he was living with his goons...
Yes Ranbir Kapoor...
A big goon...
He woke up...

"Ahhh!!!!!! Again a beautiful morning..."

He said while stretching his arms...
And then his phone rang...

"Ya Ranbir Kapoor here..."

"What ok i m coming...you stay there with him..."

Putting his phone in his pocket he ran towards his jeep...
Jumped in it and wore his sun glasses...
There he drove to his destination...

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He stopped his jeep after reaching the desired location...
A man was standing on road holding another man...
There was silence...
Because it was early morning and that road always remained calm...
Because it was away from city...
And a jungle was on that side...
He jumped out...
It was his habbit...
He uses his jeep's gates rarely...
Jumping in and out like a monkey was his habbit... 😉
Pulling out the gun from his pocket he went to them...

He pointed the gun at the man...

"Morning...morning..."
He smirked and said to that man...

"Please leave me i wont do that again..."
That man said all trembling bcz of Ranbir's fear...

He bent a little and said...

"Na na baby...no more leaving games...come on be ready to go to God..."
And again smirked...

"Please forgive me Ranbir sir...please..."
The man said...

"Nhi nhi...God ko itna intezaar nhi karwate..."

He said and then moved back...
Pointed his gun on him...
And started counting...

"One..."
Pulled the trigger little...

"Two...Threee..."

He pulled the trigger and on the same time someone raised his hand upward...
And he misses his shot...
On the sudden reaction he also closed his eyes...

"What rubbish!!!!!!"

He yelled...
And turned to see none other than Kritika...

In anger he held her hand tightly rolled her in opposite direction...
Turning her hand on her back he placed his gun on her forehead...

"What the hell do you think you are??? "
He said in anger...

"Leave me its hurting..."
She said...
And he left her with a jerk...

Now she faced him and said...

"What the hell do you think u r??? U can kill anyone u want??? "
She repeated his words...

"Who ever i kill its not ur concern...now take a side..."

He said pushing her a lil bit...
But she was stubborn she came in front again...when he pointed his gun on the man...

"Now what???"
He said controlling his anger...

"U cant kill him..."
She said...

"Why??? Is he ur boyfriend??? "
He said smirking...

"What the hack??? "
She yelled...

"I will not let u kill him..."

She said...
And then his anger raised...
he turned her on that man's direction...
Hugging her from back he slided his arm in her neck..
And wraped his arm around her neck...

"Now u will see him dying in front of ur eyes darling..."
He said smirking...

"What???? No...leave me..."
She tried to escape from his grip but of no use...

He tighten his grip and from one hand pointed the gun at the man...

"Please no"
She insisted but of no use...

And shoottt...

He shot that man...
And on the sight she turned and held his shirt tightly dugging her face in his chest...
And there his smirking lost...

And he became statue...
That feeling...her touch...
It made shivers in his spine...

And the atmosphere remain calm...
Wind was blowing their hairs...
She was crying badly...
And unknowingly he hugged her back...

Precap: what a goon???...

Thats it for now...
Hope u guys like it...
Will update soon...
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Posted: 5 years ago
#32
ye Jaldi update hai tera 😡 itne dino sae wait kar rahi ho koi update nhi.
comming to story i just love it krabir bond .And the hug .Ye sub mujhe deewana kar raha hai plz jaldi update kar na.Itna gap na kar 
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Posted: 5 years ago
#33
Wonderful update foxi👏
Ranbir n kritika thinks about each other 😳
Their second tashanbaaz meeting is mind blowing😉
N last part where ranbir is lost superb yaar❤️
Hatts off
Eagerly waiting for next
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Posted: 5 years ago
#34
Woah ! Rbk  ...that hug scene ...grt foxi loved it agn ...ham Tere writing k jhabre fan ho Gaye 😆... update soon bahut wait karwati hai sare ff update Kar ..jaldiii
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Posted: 5 years ago
#35
Superb updates Foxi👏!!! Wo word dear for late... Kya starting h!!! KriBir first meeting... Ranbir tashan!!! At first meet itself KriBir fight😉... World's mother!!! Aww KriBir thinking about each other😳... Kritika trying to make her mind to believe Ranbir is good... Ranbir was about to shoot someone...again Kritika stopped him... This time making her shock he shoot that guy infront of her eyes... Oh frightened Kritika... Ranbir got affected by Kritika... Loved the updates so much Hayu❤️... Really wo word dear for late... Eagerly waiting for next parts... Update soon❤️...
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Posted: 5 years ago
#36

Originally posted by: arya1210

ye Jaldi update hai tera  😡 itne dino sae wait kar rahi ho koi update nhi.

comming to story i just love it krabir bond .And the hug .Ye sub mujhe deewana kar raha hai plz jaldi update kar na.Itna gap na kar 

sorry...😃
Yr busy thi bs jese hi time mila update kr diya...
Wo word aru...
Heee...soon we will call u deewani aru...😆
I will try my best...😳
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Posted: 5 years ago
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Originally posted by: Smita_rawat

Wonderful update foxi 👏

Ranbir n kritika thinks about each other 😳
Their second tashanbaaz meeting is mind blowing😉
N last part where ranbir is lost superb yaar❤️
Hatts off
Eagerly waiting for next

wo word lemon...😳
Hee glad that u liked it ...😃
Awww thank u soo much...😳
Will try to update soon...😳
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Posted: 5 years ago
#38

Originally posted by: vinushi

Woah ! Rbk   ...that hug scene ...grt foxi loved it agn ...ham Tere writing k jhabre fan ho Gaye 😆... update soon bahut wait karwati hai sare ff update Kar ..jaldiii

wo word gilehri.. 😳
Happy that u liked it...😳
Hahahha...😆😆
Yr i will try k wait nhi karwaon ...😳
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Posted: 5 years ago
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Originally posted by: gopsss

Superb updates Foxi 👏!!! Wo word dear for late... Kya starting h!!! KriBir first meeting... Ranbir tashan!!! At first meet itself KriBir fight😉... World's mother!!! Aww KriBir thinking about each other😳... Kritika trying to make her mind to believe Ranbir is good... Ranbir was about to shoot someone...again Kritika stopped him... This time making her shock he shoot that guy infront of her eyes... Oh frightened Kritika... Ranbir got affected by Kritika... Loved the updates so much Hayu❤️... Really wo word dear for late... Eagerly waiting for next parts... Update soon❤️...

wo word cotton candy...😳
Its ok...😳
Happy that u loved it...😃
I will try to update soon...😳
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Posted: 5 years ago
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[Chapter 3]
[WHAT...A GOON???]

After gaining some strength...
She lifted her face up...
Tears were in her eyes...
She was holding his hoody...

He looked at her with slowly blinking his eyes...

"What???"

She said...
He got a punch on his chest...

"Ahhh!!!!"

He shouted...

"Oye world's mother why are u hitting me???"

He said caressing his chest...

"Why m i hitting you???"
She said wiping her tears...

"I want to kill you..."
She said holding his hoody...

"Ayeee...you dont know me...i m..."

And she cut him in between...

"I dont even care what the hell u r...insan to ho na...aise kese kisi ko maar skte ho..."

She said getting angry on him ...

"Kya mtlb aise kese...i m goon i can do anything..."
He said making her shock...

And she just looked at him with opened eyes..
She didnt even blinked her eyes...

He smirked on her reaction...
And clicked his fingers in front of her eyes...

"Oye come in this world...i know i m handsome...but dont stare me like this...i will get sick..."
He said smirking...

And she came to this world...

"Wait a sec...u r a goon??"
She said...

And got a reply ...

"Ya babes...i m a goon.."

He said giving her a flying kiss...

"Eeyyy yukh!!!! Keep ur kiss to urself...u r a  bad guy...a goon..."
She said loudly...
And then whispered...

"And i thought u r good guy...Kittu u r stupid..."

But he heard it...
And laughed out loud...

"Ya ya i m good guy...i m handsome...i m stylish...i will be very good husband for u..."

He said wearing his glasses...

"Oh mr. Over smart...dont live in dreamland...
Come in the world of reality...i dont need any husband like u...u cabbage face..."

And there his smirk vanished...

"What i m cabbage face???"
He said shocked...

As all the girls are flat on him and she is calling him cabbage face...

"Ya u heard right..."
She said folding her arms on her chest...

"OMG...Raju she is blind...i thought she can see...but i feel sorry for her that she cant see anything...lets take her to the doctor...she needs an eye surgery..."

He said to his goon making fun of her...

"Just shut up...u r blind...i m not..."

She said irritated...

"No no lets go to the doctor..."

He said smirking...

"Just get lost..."

She said and turned to go...

On turning she saw the man lying on the ground...
with the blood all around him...
And there she vomit...
And became unconcious...

Before she hit the he held her...
Staring at her with big eyes...

"She fainted.."

He said looking at Raju..
Making an irritated face
he hit his forehead with his palm...


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Precap: i m falling for u...

hope u guys like it...
Sorry for late...
If i m lacking something then plzzz tell me..
Bcz i want to make this story little bit humerous as i wrote many serious stories...
With lots of love...