Tere Sath Sath Chal Diya Mn [KriBir SS] [Chapter 15 Page 20] - Page 5

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Posted: 5 years ago
#41
Superb update hayuπŸ‘
Kribir fighting scene is beautifulπŸ˜‰
Ranbir teasing to kritika is mind blowingπŸ˜‰
Waiting for next update
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Posted: 5 years ago
#42
yes u are ota late update kon deta hai.Kitna intazzar karti hai tu .
as usuall another super update.
A good husband for u.πŸ˜† Plz next update jaldi dena na ek tere ff hi tu hai jisse hum tanshi ko wapis aapne pass feel karte hai .plz jaldi
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Posted: 5 years ago
#43
Awesome haya...n babes to babes hai Mr smirk ki πŸ˜†... Precap hhh can't wait update sooner
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Posted: 5 years ago
#44
[Chapter 4]
[I M FALLING FOR U]

He picked her up in his arms and took her to the his house...
Or we can say so called house...
But all we can see is webs not home... πŸ˜‰
He layed her down on the sofa...
Which was not dusted from years...

He shook her...

"Oye wake up...!!!"

But of no use...

"Oyeee!!!!"

He shouted but again of no use...

"Wait...u wont get up easily..."

He said...
And went to kitchen and bought a bucket of water...

And...

SPLASH!!!!!!!!

He spilled all the water on her...
And she woke up with a jerk...

"Oh my God!!!!!"

She shouted...

She was all wet...

"Heee...see i m smart..."

He said setting his collar...
And his goons praised him...

"What the hack??? Have u gone mad...is this way to wake up a person..."

She yelled at her level best ...

"Ya its my way...do u have any problem???"

He said with an attitude...

"Prob..."
And she paused...
Because her sight fell on the place where she was...

"M i in the hell with u jerks???"

She said looking here and there examining the place...

"First of all we are not jerks mind ur language...and second of all u r not in hell its my home..."

He explained her...

"Is this home??? Its not looking like home its looking like a cow's barn..."

She said...

"Oh madam...mind ur language...its my beloved home...and u r at my place so i can do anything to u...be afraid of me..."

He said showing his bossy attitude...

"I m not afraid of u...u boys are jerk...u dont even clean ur house...its looking like yukhhh!!!"

She said...

"Acha...itni problem hai...come on stand up and clean this place..."

He said sitting on chair...

"What rubbish??? I m not ur made..."

She said...
He pulled out his gun from pocket...
And pointed on her head...

"If u r miss world then i m mr. Ranbir Kapoor...i m very stubborn...u have a lot of problem na...now u will clean this place...if u dont then i will shoot u..."

He explained...

"What the he..."

And he cut her in between...

"No ifs and no buts...stand up..."

He said...

"U cant do anything to me..."

She said and he shot...
But the bullet passed from the side of her neck...

"Dont think i missed...i never miss my target...it was a demo..."

He said in attitude...

"Come on stand up..."

He ordered...

"See i m not afraid of u but this place is so dirty so i will clean it...dont ever think that i m afraid of u..."

She said frightened...

"Hahhahahahhahahaha...ya ya u r not afraid..."

He laughed at his level best and again sat on chair holding his stomach and laughing out loud...

And she became embarassed and stood up stomping her feet..
and went in kitchen...

She started cleaning the kitchen and cursing him...

He also came in kitchen...

"Oh my God...u r sooo cute...this cute sad pout..."

He said touching her pouty lips with his hands...

On which she suddenly backed off...

"Hey..."

She said pointing her finger towards him...
Which he entangled with his finger...

"This is the reason i m falling for u..."

He said in flirting style...

"Just shut up..."
And she pulled her finger back...

*--------*--------*---------*

Precap: the safai mission...πŸ˜‰

Hope u like it...
Do comment and hit like...😳
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Posted: 5 years ago
#45
Guys i m going out of city on vacations with my family...
So wont give update in 10 to 12 days...
If i will get time then i will give...
But if i dont then sorry...
With lots of love...❀️
See u soon guys...😳
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Posted: 5 years ago
#46

Originally posted by: Smita_rawat

Superb update hayu πŸ‘

Kribir fighting scene is beautifulπŸ˜‰
Ranbir teasing to kritika is mind blowingπŸ˜‰
Waiting for next update

wo word lemon...😳
Heee...always fighting...πŸ˜‰
He loves to tease her...πŸ˜ƒ
Its updated...😳
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Posted: 5 years ago
#47

Originally posted by: arya1210

yes u are ota late update kon deta hai.Kitna intazzar karti hai tu .

as usuall another super update.
A good husband for u. πŸ˜† Plz next update jaldi dena na ek tere ff hi tu hai jisse hum tanshi ko wapis aapne pass feel karte hai .plz jaldi

sorryyy...😳
Yr bus busy hoti hon ...jese hi time milta hai de deti hon...😳
Wo word babes...😳
Heee...πŸ˜†
Its updated...😳
Awww...i m happy that my ffs are that helpful to u...😳
Love u...❀️
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Posted: 5 years ago
#48

Originally posted by: vinushi

Awesome haya...n babes to babes hai Mr smirk ki πŸ˜†... Precap hhh can't wait update sooner

wo word gilehri...😳
Ya babes is babes...πŸ˜†
Or jab mr. Smirk ki ho to baat hi alag hai...πŸ˜‰πŸ˜›
Its updated...😳
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Posted: 5 years ago
#49
Wow.! Superb updateπŸ‘πŸ‘πŸ‘
precep sounds interesting πŸ˜‰
very very excited for nxt update 😳

Haya dear vacation pe khub khub enjoy karna,
sahi salamat jaldise vapas aajana aur jaldi se pyaarasa update kar dena😊

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Posted: 5 years ago
#50
Part 3
Awesome update FoxiπŸ‘!!! KriBir cute fightπŸ˜‰πŸ˜³...
Mr Cabbage face n Ms BlindπŸ˜†πŸ˜‰...
Oh she fainted seeing the person on blood...
Loved it to the core Hayu... Woh word dear for late... N u r just awesome in making this story humourous...
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