Originally posted by: shanyaarora3
An Awsm one...loved how you portrayed all the emotions and how Sameer self realised his folly...how the love between them made more strengthen and no misunderstanding erupted between them...I do think similarly will happen in show...but not sure of sameer's self realisation part...all in all it was very heart whelming reading this work...And the best part was when Sameer seeked Naina's permjssion before kissing her...And how poonawala teased sansina at end...
Dil le lo yaar...
Oh I loved it. So beautiful.
I really wish in our show also something similar to this should happen. The self realization part was awesome. But I am really worried about the response of Mama and Devang if Sameer starts showing interest in business. Will they accept him wholeheartedly or not.
Cherry on the cake was the way how Sameer looked at Naina before giving kiss and the way how Naina gave permission for that with that blink.
Keep writing more.
Awesome...you conveyed the whole scene beautifully, nice. Thanks for the pm.
Originally posted by: sumathiaishu
Very nice. Hope in the show they portray like this. Well done
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