Originally posted by: NikiAries
Anshika you pleasantly surprise me each time with your mature writing! I think you are still very young and it is commendable how you write so well already 😊
Thank u so much. It's very encouraging for young writers like me to get such good response for their very first piece of writing.Refreshing to see the leads actually talk about the things that matter👏. Loved the subtle hug and caring forehead kiss (was actually hoping for one)! Sameer and Naina have kept the lines yet know they are more than friends. I like Sameer sharing his precious secrets with her, chai time bonding was awesome. So after Nanu chai wala chacha is the new Cupid😆Yeah, I really wanted a new cupid for them, seeing that they desperately needed it. 😆 Well people were curious about Sam character after the playboy thing in the story, so his redemption has started long back and he is slowly changing, to the influence of the innocent yet strong minded Naina.Naina nailed it, she confronted Sameer head on; I wish they brought up the girl Sameer dumped first for revenge. U know u re a very loyal reader😆You still remember her! But her chapter was closed then and there, For good.Sameer has earned my liking for being as frank as it gets and also taking full responsibility. 110% marks for this conversation, no buried secrets and forced misunderstandings! I wanted a frank and genuine convo, and not Ekta serials one, where there is scary bg music and buried secrets...Ohh the dance was cute with music in chai hut. We all have heard songs at chai and panwala shops...such feels😛Now Sameer finally knows what love should feel like, the gradual build up at both ends Is perfect. Sameer has smartly figured Naina might love someone and Naina can't stop her happy dance after knowing he is very much available. Come on, he is very sad because Naina loves someone *sighs*. Let's see how he figures out who the person is😉As a reader I am so pleased with the progress, you never disappoint with the story and regular updates. Cheers to you! Thank u so much.. sorry I couldn't reply earlier. But I want a nice reply to the recent ch I posted. I am getting really nice reviews for that one
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