Hope your exams went well! Thank you for taking the time to give updates in between everything. Btw what is your name?
Chapter 7: I liked how you gave detailed description of Sameer and Naina's thoughts. This was needed more than a direct interaction. Both are totally smitten by each other. Awesome to hear Vicky got his due and apologized to Naina; so satisfied Sameer's punch 😆
Since you said Prem is a mystery will leave it at that but I am afraid if there is a revenge angle there with respect to Sameer's past with one of the girls. Anyway I am going to let the story unfold and wait without making any other guesses.
Arjun is so weird and annoying. All he cares about is fake family honor and not his sister whereas all Sameer cares about is Naina's hurt. Samaina really need each other's love
Chapter 8: Ahh finally the much awaited interaction! Looks like Naina has become popular owing to her beauty and Sameer's protegee. Arjun is the most nagging brother ever. The parallel's between little Naina and the elder one while apologizing were cute so were Sameer's attempts to impress her. Guess being friends is a good way to start their love story without being awkward. Finally both got some lone time away from the preying eyes. Su is best ignored but I liked how Sameer has taken note of Prem's interest in Naina and his possessive/jealous side has already kicked in! Looks like the hand holds are a customary thing now😉
With the fresher's party and elections coming up next chapters are going to be interesting.
Awesome work!
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