MehRya OS : Kahi Unkahi...

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Wrote this really long ago (precisely during MehRya's first (read half) marriage.) I wanted to post it but somehow I couldn't. Was filtering my wordpad and found this. Your honest feedbacks are welcomed.


Kahi Unkahi...




Sitting on his king size bed, holding the supposed 'stolen' Mehek's Mom's recipe book Shaurya was thinking of all the beautiful moments he spent in Sharma House with people who trusted him blindly with their precious daughter. Blinking away the tears that welled in his dark orbs partially blurring the sight of the book, Shaurya tossed the book on the side table and sat empty handed, contemplating. Life was never fair with him, never! All the past events took a toll on him. Deciding not to give get week, he took his medicines and got into a deep slumber.



Feeling restless in his glittering beige and maroon sherwaani, Shaurya paced up and down. Thinking it was just the normal anxiety before marriage, Shaurya tried to cheer him up imaging how beautiful Mehek would be looking in his chosen lengha. Before his Mom came to call him for the garland exchanging ceremony, his phone rang, 'Doctor' the caller ID read. His heartbeat rose. Picking up the call anxiously, he ferociously wished for his reports to be good, if not great. "See me as soon as possible in my clinic Mr. Khanna. I need to talk Something urgently." Doctor told in a way not wanting to scare his patient. "What it is Doctor?" Shaurya didn't want to wait to know what was serious. "We'll talk it face to face Mr. Khanna. See me as soon as possible." Doctor didn't want to disclose things on phone. "I'm getting married today." Shaurya told the Doctor. "I suggest you not to." Doctor was sad to say that but he needed to be practical. "What has happened to me?" Shaurya just wanted to know serious things were. "Sorry to say Mr. Khanna, there cancerous cells in your liver which are now malignant. Your reports also show many spots of such cells in other organs also, in short, you're detected with liver cancer in its third stage." Trying to keep the medical terms in use to lower the effect of the meaning, 'you got very less time," Doctor explained on the phone and everything was blur. (Note: not a medical expert, just wrote fictional things)



Shaurya woke up wirh a jerk. Everything happened that day is an everyday nightmare for him. He sat resting his head on the head rest, he took the file that had his reports. Flipping through the reports, he got all the more strength to get with his plan of making Mehek hate him and move on in her life. He felt helpless and it tore him that Mehek hated him but he just smiled through his tears thinking that's best for his Mehek. Of course, they gave her tears but she'll be spared from tears for rest of her life. She'll be happy, at least that's what he thought! Zindagi kahan kisike ke mutaabik chalti hai!
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Posted: 7 years ago
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Such an emotional and heart wrenchinh OS orion 💔
Shaurya hide his illness so that mehek hatehim more... .Poor mehrya Sacrificing their love 😭
It would be really good if you continue this further ...would like to see what happen next in their lives. ..do continue if time permits 😛
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Originally posted by: AD04

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Such an emotional and heart wrenchinh OS orion💔
Shaurya hide his illness so that mehek hatehim more... .Poor mehrya Sacrificing their love😭
It would be really good if you continue this further ...would like to see what happen next in their lives. ..do continue if time permits😛



@bold...why am I facing this identity crisis out here? Every time I post something I'm called someone else. Is it not easy to be here without actually having a name (real or made up) without facing identity crisis? I'm highly disappointed in you guys. People have been welcomed warmly and I'm here called by what I'm not!!

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Originally posted by: SweetChilliGirl



@bold...why am I facing this identity crisis out here? Every time I post something I'm called someone else. Is it not easy to be here without actually having a name (real or made up) without facing identity crisis? I'm highly disappointed in you guys. People have been welcomed warmly and I'm here called by what I'm not!!

Guess it's genuine mistake girl ...so chill..
The people who are not comfortable in sharing Thier real identity ...come up with some other name to be called in virtual world... But in ur case u told everyone to call u anything ...may be tats wat is causing confusion ...

Tumara naamkaran Karna padega ...if u want to avoid this situation in future 😆...
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Coming to os , such an emotional one this was ...would have made sense if it was shown on the show ...but they made him cunning recipe Chor ...
Well written...
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Originally posted by: SweetChilliGirl



@bold...why am I facing this identity crisis out here? Every time I post something I'm called someone else. Is it not easy to be here without actually having a name (real or made up) without facing identity crisis? I'm highly disappointed in you guys. People have been welcomed warmly and I'm here called by what I'm not!!


Dear its totally my fault ...i apologize for the same... I got confused between two people. ..so sorry for that .. My intentions are not to hurt you... Sorry if you feel. Bad. . .I apolozise.
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Originally posted by: Thabassum19


Guess it's genuine mistake girl ...so chill..
The people who are not comfortable in sharing Thier real identity ...come up with some other name to be called in virtual world... But in ur case u told everyone to call u anything ...may be tats wat is causing confusion ...

Tumara naamkaran Karna padega ...if u want to avoid this situation in future 😆...




Insaan benaam bhi toh reh sakta hai na 😆
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Dear its totally my fault ...i apologize for the same... I got confused between two people. ..so sorry for that .. My intentions are not to hurt you... Sorry if you feel. Bad. . .I apolozise.



Even I'm sorry. I was too rude but I hope you understand how it feels to be always confused with other people. I'm sorry 🤗
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Originally posted by: Thabassum19

Coming to os , such an emotional one this was ...would have made sense if it was shown on the show ...but they made him cunning recipe Chor ...

Well written...



That was so not Mr. Shaurya Khanna 😆. CVs could have given some concrete reason for Shaurya running away but alas! Anyway, thanks for reading 😃
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Even I'm sorry. I was too rude but I hope you understand how it feels to be always confused with other people. I'm sorry 🤗


Sorry sorry cancel😉

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