Beautiful OS. Pain of being away from each other is evident in Naina's behavior. Do write more.
Really fabulous. I think you are inspiration to those who are interested in writing. The os is nice. The pain is evident in naina. She was not able to control her tears. The way Sam comforted her was nice. Great job dear. Plz do write more.
Originally posted by: Anjali33
The OS was very good for a first attempt
Distances hv made Sameer n Naina grow fonder of each other
Originally posted by: Princesswarrior
That was fantastic. 👏. Loved it. It really did not seem like it's your first OS. Would love if you write more.. It was adorable.
RegardsInayat
Originally posted by: sunnydeo
It was short yet we'll expressed.
The emotions were vividly described.Very well written.Keep writing
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