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Posted: 5 years ago
Lovely update! superbly written 
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Cute update I am so loving this story so masn mom knowing more about geet as per advice from her sister geet is from hoshyarpur poor girl lost her mom and dad it seems maan mom has some connections with geet mom maan being sarcastic self as usual 
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Posted: 5 years ago

nahhhi..usko Geet ka bachpan ka saathi hi rehno do..

Geet ko toh achchhe log mil gaye who will help her, but uska kya..kahan hoga woh shehar ki bheed bhaad mein. He was the one who helped Geet to run away from her Uncle's place..who does such things. πŸ€”  bas woh safe rahen.


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Posted: 5 years ago

Originally posted by: khwaishfan

Lovely update! superbly written 

glad u liked it😊
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Posted: 5 years ago

Originally posted by: nakh5683

Cute update I am so loving this story so masn mom knowing more about geet as per advice from her sister geet is from hoshyarpur poor girl lost her mom and dad it seems maan mom has some connections with geet mom maan being sarcastic self as usual 

maan ki maa jhot bolrahi thiπŸ˜†
glad u liked it so far
thanks for reading!😊
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Posted: 5 years ago




Awesome, lovely n wonderful update
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Posted: 5 years ago

Originally posted by: priyasree





Awesome, lovely n wonderful update

glad u liked it
thanks for reading!😊
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Posted: 5 years ago
lovely update
continue soon 
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Posted: 5 years ago
 Geet is too naive Maan's mother very easily tricked hr fr getting hr info
She even told what anirudh said to hr
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Posted: 5 years ago
I liked how you described the whole neighborhood and houses...
It feels nice to imagine all the surroundings along with the characters...
Maan's mom is a sweet heart...I love her kindness...
liked her thoughts on having Geet at her house...though she is kind and cares for Geet but she is kinda worried about her and their safety...nice that she decided to take her sister's advice to deal with the situation at hand
Geet is so naive...and innocent...she though tries to follow the rules of not trusting or revealing anything to strangers but she is so innocent that she cannot hide her real self for longer...
I look so good was so awww...
Geet is such a cutie...told her the real name yet with warnings hehe
and Maan's sarcastic thoughts were too funny
So Maan's mother kinda lied to know her background...but I guess that can be counted under white lies and is worth of forgiveness...
Oh Geet shared everything
Maan...liking her name and everything...
This is one is interesting
kinda curious about her uncle and Anirudh too...
Thanks for the update
continue soon pls