Originally posted by: adventure_gurl
😃 loved this!
Originally posted by: adventure_gurl
😃 loved this!
Beautifully written
Thanks for pm as always
It's a beautiful osI loved the confession. Very emotionally written couldn't help but shead tears.Plz write more. Always post even if you think it's not good I'm sure it will be always as all your work has and is.
Originally posted by: hriti713
After reading this I'm getting more and more excited!!
Geez.. This was such a neat piece of work on AdiYa 😃 Zoya running to catch up in Aditya, leaving everything else behind is what I love & you've just written an OS around that plot & that nade me feel really good while reading 😆 I liked how he wished her at the mandap & left from there, withouta word. Realization must truly strike upon her about what kind of feelings she has for him. We might nit get something similar in the show but your OS covered it up for me.
Now.. I'm waiting to read more from you & yeah, keep sending the pm's at a row 😉😆
Originally posted by: Aquabutterfly
This was simply and flawlessly a BEAUTIFUL OS 👏You always manage to surprise me with your writings and this was one of those pleasant surprises. I already loved your work but this had made me fall in love with it. ❤️Well, I'm a much bigger fan of yours than the last time.This was written so beautifully. Every emotion was so detailed that it touched my heart. I smiled and cried at the same time reading Aditya's pain, Zoya's realization of love and the confession in the end. It took Zoya the very last minute and the thought of never seeing Aditya again, to understand her feelings. Great job on this piece ⭐️Now you have raised a hope in me. I wish the show progress in a similar manner.Thanks a lot for the pmPlease keep these coming...and I will keep waiting.
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