TS: Kindling Hope (Part 2 updated- Page 10) - Page 3

Originally posted by: mehraan

Wats rong wit u SURRR??!! How cme ur not happy n satisfied wit tis...I very welll connected to the plot n their emotions n loved tis new take ...hurdle in their married life...!!Im sure together they will pass tis test  tooo!! VERY beautifully written...

Originally posted by: anjalijain0804

I loved it!!! It was perfect nd ur words are awsowaw I can feel there emotions... Plz update next part soon 

Originally posted by: Princesswarrior

This is one of the best pieces I have read so far..⭐️...  Absolutely lovely, fabulous 👏and a bit touching 😭piece of writing.  The story wasn't a fairy tale but something which many couples (unfortunately)  face in this real world. I could easily connect and understand thier situation.👏  Their conversation was sweet yet simple,  something what you expect from a normal ' real world ' couple.  You did a great job here👏. Keep it up .👍🏼 You described their emotions really well...  Bravo.👏  Eagerly waiting for the next part.😉😆 Update soon...  

Regards

Inayat 

Originally posted by: SixteenAgain

Sur, this is so beautifully written! Why the questions in your mind?? The emotions, dialogue and behaviour of characters is just spot on.
Hey May! Thank you so much yaar! I don't know...I felt I hadn't done as good a job with the writing But am glad you and many of the other readers feel quite the opposite! 
Life is like this... just when we think we have found our paradise, life tosses a challenge our way with the potential to shatter our idea of paradise.
Exactly! And what matters is what we do to the people we love in moments like these, which shapes our future with them! 
Most women grow up with the idea that they do not fulfill their life's purpose till they become mothers. It is so closely tied in with our sense of identity. Probably is similar for men too.. maybe a few degrees less.
Yup yup true! And for Sameer and Naina...they had perhaps taken it for granted...like many of the couples in love or in marital bliss that they could have a child whenever they wanted to- just wait till when things are settled down and all- while that seems a perfect idea, life is under no obligation to give us what we want (borrowed from Margaret Mitchell)! A tragedy seems alien until it strikes one! 
Sameer wanting to protect her form being disillusioned with herself is so endearing and also the true mark of deep love. Naina is a smart cookie and might probably realise that the issue lies with her once the treatment starts but just knowing how much he wants to protect her from all the pain will make all the difference.
Yes...Sameer just wanted to do anything to protect Naina from the pain! He blurted out the lie without even thinking about it! And yes Naina would figure out soon probably, but his actions would mean a lot more to her than they did now! 😊
Kudos for taking on such a sensitive but important topic! 🤗

Originally posted by: Samaina_1990

I agree with you completely! Life isn't all rosy as predicted! Everyone faces challenges in their lives and at points like these, the woman does need the support of her husband the most. I have seen cases around me and the most important thing is to have faith that it can happen..coz if one loses hope, then it takes a toll on the reproductive health as well and they feel resigned to fate. And along with the woman, the man has to double up- hide his own pain so that his wife remains positive and cared for. Whether it is the man or the woman with the issues- the support has to be mutual. 

Samaina could've had a happy ending, but one never does know right. This is God's way of testing their love and togetherness- the promises they made to be besides each other no matter what! 

I'm glad you understood the turmoil of the couple here! Let's see what happens in the next update! :)

Sur