Originally posted by: SummerRain7
So beautifully written!! The rawness of her pain portrayed so well !!
"Did they laugh behind her back?" - This line really got to me. Cheating and deceit always go hand in hand, and while cheating breaks your heart, deceit destroys your sense of self, making even the most confident, self-assured and emotionally secure person question their worth.And I loved how you ended it. A very symbolic way of showing that she may find love again.
Originally posted by: Banjaaran.
Wonderful story A.So beautifully, vividly penned that i was visualizing the whole sequence in stunning colours. (even sounds).It really is beautiful.Mauli's emotions and her reactions was poignantly portrayed.I loved the aura of the man and his entry.you HAVE to continue this one. Warna i will channel tons of K-N Juzzbaats into your consciousness. π
Originally posted by: abhiya_12
It's beautifully written I really really hope they show something like this on show too. More of Mauli's heartbreak than fake guilt of KuNan.
I really felt her pain through your words.It's beautiful!!
Originally posted by: arshi_asya
Oh my God.
It's so well written. I so want this track to unfold like this.
this forum has got really amazing writers..
glad to be a part of this forum.coming to your story..i loved the way you have penned it down ... everything was playing in my mind scene by scene.. the dailogues are awesome.my poor heart goes out to mauli..pls keep writing more..not into ffs but u guys r so damn awesome that i cant help but read and praise..continue soon
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