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Posted: 2018-09-10T13:20:11Z


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Posted: 2018-09-10T13:26:57Z
CVs gotta follow this track... so well written.. I had tears for Mauli n rage for those two betrayer while reading this..
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Posted: 2018-09-10T13:33:38Z
Beautifully writtenClap
Wish and Hope --Mauli's part proceed  the way you mentioned it
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Posted: 2018-09-10T13:56:37Z
Originally posted by Ruhi122


CVs gotta follow this track... so well written.. I had tears for Mauli n rage for those two betrayer while reading this..
Aah thank you dear Embarrassed
I kind of was tearing up when I was writing this...
And thank god again did not watch the episode
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Posted: 2018-09-10T22:15:30Z
I like it. I hope cvs take this route and show us mouli's journey henceforth
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Posted: 2018-09-10T23:13:46Z
So beautifully written!! The rawness of her pain portrayed so well !!  
"Did they laugh behind her back?" - This line really got to me. Cheating and deceit always go hand in hand, and while cheating breaks your heart, deceit destroys your sense of self, making even the most confident, self-assured and emotionally secure person question their worth.

And I loved how you ended it. A very symbolic way of showing that she may find love again. 
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Posted: 2018-09-10T23:30:33Z
nice one
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Posted: 2018-09-11T01:18:22Z
Originally posted by Sabyata


Beautifully written Clap
Wish and Hope --Mauli's part proceed  the way you mentioned it
Thank you dear! I just hope she is freed from this bond which has become a shackle now...ugh!!
And may she never have to talk or meet Nandini ever again...such a big blotch on the name of friendship
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