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Posted: 5 years ago
CVs gotta follow this track... so well written.. I had tears for Mauli n rage for those two betrayer while reading this..
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Posted: 5 years ago
Beautifully written๐Ÿ‘
Wish and Hope --Mauli's part proceed  the way you mentioned it
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Posted: 5 years ago
Originally posted by: Ruhi122

CVs gotta follow this track... so well written.. I had tears for Mauli n rage for those two betrayer while reading this..

Aah thank you dear ๐Ÿ˜ณ
I kind of was tearing up when I was writing this...
And thank god again did not watch the episode
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Posted: 5 years ago
I like it. I hope cvs take this route and show us mouli's journey henceforth
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Posted: 5 years ago
So beautifully written!! The rawness of her pain portrayed so well !!  
"Did they laugh behind her back?" - This line really got to me. Cheating and deceit always go hand in hand, and while cheating breaks your heart, deceit destroys your sense of self, making even the most confident, self-assured and emotionally secure person question their worth.

And I loved how you ended it. A very symbolic way of showing that she may find love again. 
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Posted: 5 years ago
Originally posted by: Sabyata

Beautifully written ๐Ÿ‘
Wish and Hope --Mauli's part proceed  the way you mentioned it

Thank you dear! I just hope she is freed from this bond which has become a shackle now...ugh!!
And may she never have to talk or meet Nandini ever again...such a big blotch on the name of friendship
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Posted: 5 years ago
Originally posted by: ..silverlotus..

I like it. I hope cvs take this route and show us mouli's journey henceforth

Yes me too... It will only be Mauli's jouney from here for me...
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Posted: 5 years ago
Wonderful story A.
So beautifully, vividly penned that i was visualizing the whole sequence in stunning colours. (even sounds).
It really is beautiful.

Mauli's emotions and her reactions was poignantly portrayed.
I loved the aura of the man and his entry.

you HAVE to continue this one. Warna i will channel tons of K-N Juzzbaats into your consciousness.๐Ÿ˜ˆ
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Posted: 5 years ago
Yipee.. CVs should give a dignified ending to Mauli after removing the snakes Kunal and Nandini..