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Posted: 4 years ago

Originally posted by: Dee12340

Sorry to say but I'm not understanding Naina character in this ff

Sameer ki hopes de Rahi hai

Kuanwar se relationship ka abhi pata nahi

Chacha chachi ki baat manker engagement ks Rahi hai

Sare decision khud leti hai

So much suspense

Kam se Kam suspense layers open karna sh r u to karo so much confusion

Hola.. 

Naina's character...hmm..so..I have not yet showed her perspective.. There was no scene related to that.. because all is connected to the past. 

Those are the questions I wanted to raise in sameer's as well as reader's minds. Yehi to question hai na sabke man mein  ki shadi ke liye haa kyu kiya agar nhi karni hai to..aur kunwar se related.. 

The story will unfold soon. Suspense kuch jyada hi hogaya hai I know.. It's because when you imagine a story its not that intense but when you write it, everything changes..When I had first imagined it, it didn't took so much of time..but when I'm writing it..it takes me a lot of parts to write that particular episode i have in mind. 

Trust me, everything will be sorted once the past is disclosed. 

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Posted: 4 years ago

No dear, i didn't want to hurt you in my comment. Thank you for understanding me. I never try to demorlised anyone please don't take it negative.i know how much effort and hard work behind a story ( even a update too), always appreciated this hard work . Please don't be sad dear, if you fell sad i apologized you. I want to tell you what i fell as a reader. i am not a judge so judge anyone( even iam  not able to write a line so how I  judge anyone )  .  And dear i clarify  one thing i am not commenting any personal prospective of your ,i  am talking about story only.  If you hurt with my comment sorry one again. 

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Posted: 4 years ago

πŸ₯±πŸ˜²πŸ€ͺπŸ€”πŸ§πŸ˜¬πŸ€―πŸ˜–πŸ˜«.....

Bada hi shocking udate tha Chutaki....

And thank you very much for that one Samina moment.....you need not to dedicate any update to me dear...maine  kabhi kisiko koi update likhane mai koi help nahi ki to ....

Again thanks a lot for Samina moment,usse padhake sans mai sans aayi thodi, baki pure update mai Ekta Kapoor ki serial ka wo 3times wala bg music hi baj raha tha πŸ€•, 

Aur tune suspense pe suspense itana rakhaa hai na ki hum readers ki dimag ki baati gul ho jayegi agar tune suspense clear nahi kiya toπŸ˜„πŸ˜„

Rahi baat sabake reply aur wo padhake kyun udas hoti hai, sab teri story padathe hai tabhi to shock mai hai aur tujse javab mang rahe hai ki aakhir kya hua tha ye to bata abπŸ€”πŸ€”,aur ye achhi baat hai ...soch tune sabko shock diya aur gussa bhi dila diya...sab teri story mai kitane involve ho gaye hai..

Aur na suprna di ne sirf naak todne ka socha,par mai na jab update pad rahi thi na pure time gusse mai thi sunny Deol ki jaisi ki iss Kunwar ko na to mai wo handpump ukhad ke maruπŸ˜ πŸ˜ πŸ˜ πŸ˜‘πŸ˜‘πŸ˜‘πŸ˜€πŸ˜€πŸ˜€πŸ˜€πŸ‘ŠπŸ‘ŠπŸ‘ŠπŸ‘ŠπŸ‘ŠπŸ‘Š

Aur iss sonali ko na pakad ke chipakali aur cockroach bhare kamare mai bandh kar du😑...bas aab na kuch nahi likhana baki mann to kar raha ki pit dalu main hi in sabako jo Samaina ke bich mai aate hai...😑

Please meri suspense ki super nani aab na ye sare parade hatao...

Waiting for next update...

And we trust you dear Chutaki πŸ˜ŠπŸ˜πŸ€—

Lots of love πŸ˜πŸ€—

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Posted: 4 years ago

Nd yes loved the way Naina's thoughts about Sameer,she is not sure about his love but still she has a special place for him...may be due to their past she is confused or changed her self but i m sure his love for  her will heal all the wounds....

Aur in aunty o ko aur koi kam nahi hai kya....🧐🧐🀨🀨kuch bhi matalab kuch bhi bake jaati hai....aur baki thi to Kunwar ki mausi😑....haad ho gayi yaar....aag mai ghee dalne ka kam yahi karati hai....wo bhi na bade bade chammach bhr bhar keπŸ₯„πŸ₯„πŸ₯„πŸ₯„πŸ₯«πŸ₯«

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Posted: 4 years ago

Originally posted by: Prizi

Awesome update dear

Bas aisa hi hal hai sugu teri update ke baad🀣

Every body needs a cold shower just like Mr.Bajaj🀣🚿🚿🚿🚿🚿

by the way amazing image uploded dear Prizi🀣🀣

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Posted: 4 years ago

Originally posted by: Sugu1201

Hola suma.

Trust me you will enjoy the next parts..

Yes naina is different and nothing is clear about her.. give me time to present her point of view..

Everyone wanted kunwar's entry..so I could not describe her state of mind..

Once you will get to know about the past everything will be sorted..

I'm not feeling bad..but I realized it now that I have not shown anything related to it..I mean I should have written about what naina thinks of sameer..

I just wanted to keep my readers confused..but all the past will be revealed in the next parts..

Trust me.

And thankyou for always reading

Hi happy friendship day to u

Dear ty for your reply. 

I trust u. I love this ff so much always eagerly waiting for update .  I know u will do justice to the characters. 


Lots of love dear

Suma  πŸ’•

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Posted: 4 years ago

Originally posted by: sumathiaishu

Hi happy friendship day to u

Dear ty for your reply. 

I trust u. I love this ff so much always eagerly waiting for update .  I know u will do justice to the characters. 


Lots of love dear

Suma  πŸ’•

Aww..thankyou..

Will update soon..thankyou for trusting me..

It means a lottttttt.

Happy friendship day suma..πŸ€—

Lots of love,

Sugu

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Posted: 4 years ago

Originally posted by: Darshitrajal

Bas aisa hi hal hai sugu teri update ke baad🀣

Every body needs a cold shower just like Mr.Bajaj🀣🚿🚿🚿🚿🚿

by the way amazing image uploded dear Prizi🀣🀣

Sabka dimag aur garam hone wala hai...ice bucket se bhi kaam nhi chalega

🀣🀣

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Posted: 4 years ago

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Posted: 4 years ago

Originally posted by: Darshitrajal

πŸ₯±πŸ˜²πŸ€ͺπŸ€”πŸ§πŸ˜¬πŸ€―πŸ˜–πŸ˜«.....

Bada hi shocking udate tha Chutaki....mante ho ki nhi..

And thank you very much for that one Samina moment.....you need not to dedicate any update to me dear...maine  kabhi kisiko koi update likhane mai koi help nahi ki to ....iska jawab pehle hi de chuki hun main aapko

Again thanks a lot for Samina moment,usse padhake sans mai sans aayi thodi, baki pure update mai Ekta Kapoor ki serial ka wo 3times wala bg music hi baj raha tha πŸ€•, mujhe to lagtta hi tha ki main ekta kapoor ko takkar de sakti hun..

Aur tune suspense pe suspense itana rakhaa hai na ki hum readers ki dimag ki baati gul ho jayegi agar tune suspense clear nahi kiya toπŸ˜„πŸ˜„jaldi karlungi..sacchi..

Rahi baat sabake reply aur wo padhake kyun udas hoti hai, sab teri story padathe hai tabhi to shock mai hai aur tujse javab mang rahe hai ki aakhir kya hua tha ye to bata abπŸ€”πŸ€”,aur ye achhi baat hai ...soch tune sabko shock diya aur gussa bhi dila diya...sab teri story mai kitane involve ho gaye hai..haa main to yehi soch rahi thi ki sabke dimag mein main ghus gayi houngi..sab sugu kunwar aur samaina ka soch rahe honge..

Aur na suprna di ne sirf naak todne ka socha,par mai na jab update pad rahi thi na pure time gusse mai thi sunny Deol ki jaisi ki iss Kunwar ko na to mai wo handpump ukhad ke maruπŸ˜ πŸ˜ πŸ˜ πŸ˜‘πŸ˜‘πŸ˜‘πŸ˜€πŸ˜€πŸ˜€πŸ˜€πŸ‘ŠπŸ‘ŠπŸ‘ŠπŸ‘ŠπŸ‘ŠπŸ‘Šhe bhagwan..bichara kunwar..

Aur iss sonali ko na pakad ke chipakali aur cockroach bhare kamare mai bandh kar du😑...bas aab na kuch nahi likhana baki mann to kar raha ki pit dalu main hi in sabako jo Samaina ke bich mai aate hai...😑hayyeee hayeee

Please meri suspense ki super nani aab na ye sare parade hatao...ab aap keh hi rahe ho to kar hi deti hun..

Waiting for next update...

And we trust you dear Chutaki πŸ˜ŠπŸ˜πŸ€—

Lots of love πŸ˜πŸ€—

Thankyou didu..

My replies in blue..

Love,

Sugu

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