Ek Nayi Subah -Samaina Three Shot ( chapter 3 updated on page 3 )

Prologue

It was mid September and the weather had was humid today ...But the mind of the  18 year old Naina was full of spring  as she was excited to go to college...Excited could be a small word what she was feeling right now...Yesterday her loving Chachaji had given her the gift of her life ...Yes she loved Sameer more then anything but she loved her Chachaji more and for him she had given up on love or hope in her case just to keep his trust he always had on Naina ...But now Chachaji agreeing to their love was like  a huge burden lifted from her mind..She was free ...Free of feeling betrayals to Sameer or to her family...Although as Chachaji predicted everything will not be smooth even after his approval but she now completely trusts Sameer and him to make anything possible...

 

The breakup and it's aftermath had been hard enough for both of them as she now knew how much her actions and her words had affected Sameer ..As told by Munna  she realized how much she had hurt Sameer in her attempt to simply prevent him ...Even she had lived in hell and everything now seems to her as a bad Nightmare... But after everything she was back to her love ,and with gangg also it seemed everything was good now ... Today she was elated to go to college in her former self and meet Sameer with new hopes and increased love ...This breakup had made them both strong...And she was thankful for this second chance...

 

She looked at her lazy sister still in bed ...She took some water from the Jug and sprinkeled on Preeti..She moved her Sheets a bit and complained Naina .."Kya kar rahi hai ...Abhi to bas 7 hi baje honge yaar ..Kyu uthaya mujhe itni jaldi" ..

Naina smiling at her sisters antiques replied " kumbh karan ki Nani uth ke dekh 8 bajne wale haiN...Aur mujhe na aaj 9 baje tak kaise bhi college jana hai..Chal uth aur taiyar hoja fir saath me nashta karenge "..

 

Naina left her to get ready and came out to the Hall...She found her Chachaji was reading Newspaper ..And Chachiji was no where to be seen...

"Chachiji itni subah se kaha chali gayi Chachaji ,dikhayi nahi de rahi"

Anand moving his glance from newspaper replied "wo neeche sabji lene gayi haiN Naina , aur aaj tum badi jaldi taiyar ho gayi ...College jane ki itni jaldi"

 

Naina blushed..."Wo Chachaji soch rahi hu ab se roz thoda jaldi college jakar Sameer ki  help kar duN padhai meN...Jab college khule to hamari baatchit nahi ho rahi thi ..Isiliye usne shayad padhayi ki nahiN hogi...Aap ko koi problem to nahiN hai na "..

 hey all this is Asmita ..And this is my very first attempt in writing Fiction...I love this show but since some of the episodes I find it incomplete ...So this is my take post breakup..I would like to give credit to this lovely forum ,some of you have become good friends and others I like to read their views...This is prolouge ...Please let me know your thoughts  ... Joota ,Tamatars all welcome..

Chapter 1 - Page 1

Chapter 2 - Page 2

Chapter 3 -  Page 3

Edited by asmita21180 - 5 years ago

Wow Seems interesting.
Please continue and update soon.
We have boring weekend ahead would love to read your story:)

Hey 

👏lovely update .please continue.Thanks

Very nice and interesting prologue

Chapter 1

Kites and Wings

"Naina beta dekho mujhe problem to nahiN par isme tumhari padhai ka nuqsaan nahiN hona chahiye ...Tum samajh rahi ho na...Abhi sirf aur sirf apne bhavishya ka socho...Jab sahi samay hoga to fir hum aage ka sochenge" said Chachaji 

"Ji Chachaji "..Naina

"Beta Sameer ki baatoN se maiN itna to samajh gaya ki wo tumhe bahut pyar karta hai aur tumhara bahut samman bhi karta hai...Aur hamesha tumhara sath dega ..Us din College me..."

"Kis din Chachaji..." Asked Naina a bit flustered as to what did her Chachaji knew ...Though he had accepted both of their love but she didn't had any courage to ask him how ...

"Sharad ne jab college me hungama kiya tha us din...Mai janta hu beta mujhe pehle tumse baat karni chahiye thi ...Aur fir koi faisla lena chahiye tha lekin ..." and he told all the incidents from finding love letters to Sharad coming home  in beaten up condition ...The way he went and scolded sameer ..Everything ...And Naina was more then shocked about listening to it she would have never thought  her Sameer had this much courage to confront her Chachaji ...All the time she thought that Chachaji came to knew about their relationships through her love letters "silly her ,she even was angry for keeping them ..When she had broke up with sameer ."

.She had even felt proud when Sameer accepted their love to her Chachaji in Mandir...But never in her dreams she ever thought Sameer actually went ahead and said all those things to her chachaji ..

Chachaji wo jab sharad ne mujh pe haath uthaya to sameer khud ko rok nahi paya aur usne Sharad ko mara...Wo waise gusse wala bilkul nahi jaisa aap sabne uske baare me socha hoga...Ulta wo bahut bhola hai chachaji ...Bilkul saaf dil hai uska... Naina tried to excuse his behaviour

 

"Mai janta hu beta ...Ab sab Janta hu... Kuch usne bataya kuch un chithiyoN se samjh gaya...Lekin dekho beta ..Abhi tum dono ki umra bahut kam hai...Aur tumhe aage bahut kuch karna hai...Tum mujhse wada karo ki ab filhal ye sab baatein bhool kar tum dono sirf apne bhavishya aur career pe dhyan doge aur Sameer ko bhi yahi kahogi..Jo bhi tum dono ne ab tak apni nadani me galtiyaN kar li haiN ab wo wapas se nahi karoge...Aur haaN aage se koi bhi baat tum mujhse zarur kahogi..Thik he..

"Ji chachaji ..."

 

"To fir muskurao aur college  ke liye taiyar ho jao aur dekho wo preeti uthi ya abhi bhi soyi hai..Usko bhi apne saath padhao.."

 

"Ji chachaji.."

Naina turns to leave but chachaji stops her.." aur haaN suno Naina ...Ye baat abhi tumhari Chachi ji ko hum nahi batayenge...Ghar ka mahaul to tum jaanti ho ...Shayad bela ko ye sab batana sahi nahi hoga...Waqt aayega yo mai us se baat kar lunga...Aur sab samjha dunga ..

 

Ji chachaji...Thank you chachaji ...

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It was 9.06 am when she and preeti rushed through the college gate to find sameer's bike was not there...She thought to stay by the garden gate and wait for him... "Preeti tu ja aage ..mai yahi wait karti hu Sameer ka ..."

""Wo to theek hai behena.. lekin mere hone wale jijaji ko zyada pareshan mat kar dena kitabeiN dikhakar..Warna wo kahenge ki is se to achha Naina tum wapas breakup karlo aur us Boss ke chamche Sharad se hi shadi kar lo...""Preeti teased Naina on Sameers hate for books..

""Preeti ki bachi ..Tu  aaj ghar chal mai library ki sabse moti moti books le jaungi tujhe padhane ke liye..."" said Naina angrily

"Haww... Behen tu na pehle jijaji ko course ki books padha...Fir unse kuch romance padh..Uske baad unke sapne dekh..Aur mujhe maaf kar ...Mujhe padh likh ke kaun si collectori karni hai ..Apna to bas ek hi nara hai..

",College me khao samose aur karo mast mauj...

.Kaun le kambhakt padhne ka tension roz roz .."

Stating this preeti left...

Naina suddenly felt her heart full of pride for the four pillars of her life...Her Chacha ji ,Chachi ji ,Preeti and Sameer..These four people were always there for her...Always caring for her...Loving her ...

The moment a tear drop escaped her eyes she saw sameer coming in his bike..

" Are Naina ,YahaN gate pe kyuN khadi ho..." .sameer stopped his bike and asked her ...

"Sameer wo ...".  Naina

""Ha kaho..Kya hua naina ghar pe sab theek hai na.."" Sameer

From her bag she pulled out a box and opened it . There was beautiful red rose flower ..""ye usi paudhe ka  phool hai sameer jo maine tumhare Dilli jane ke baad lagaya tha..Isme bahut time ke baad phool khila to main tumhare liye le aayi..""

"Oh...Thanx Naina .."

Naina -""Sameer waise to main aaj jaldi aayi thi tumhe padhane ke liye..Lekin please aaj hum kuch baateiN karleN..""

Sameer - ""Ha Naina kaho na..Kya baat hai..Tum itna pareshan kyu ho..""

She pointed to the Garden and said.."Kya thodi der hum andar chalkar baateiN kareN..Yaha sab aate jaate hume dekhenge aur shayad hamari baateiN sun leN..

They went inside their college garden...It was small and there were hedge in the boundaries and only 2-3 benches ..Which were empty as it was early for other students ..

They both sat on grass.. Naina peeked at sameer ,who was till now dying out of curiosity ...

"Tere liye duniya se Baghawat na kar saki.

Shayad mai tujhse itni muhabbat na kar saki..

And some tears spilled from her eyes..

Sameer was now serious.."Naina ,..

"NahiN sameer mujhe please aaj bol lene do..Bahut kuch hai mere dil meN aaj nahiN kah paayi to shayad fir kabhi nahi keh paungi...

Mujhe aaj chachaji ne bataya ki kaise wo yahaN college aaye the tumko Sharad ko maarne ke liye daant lagane aur kaise tumne unko jawab diye..

Fikr mat karo..Chachaji ko bura nahi laga..Lekin in sab baatoN ko jaan ne ke baad mujhe bura laga..Khud pe bahut gussa aaya...aur mai tumse baat kiye bina nahiN reh sakti...aage chahe jo bhi ho ..Jaisa bhi ho..lekin ye baatein abhi honi zaruri hai Sameer...mai kitni pagal thi..Kash maine himmat kar ke chachaji ko pehle sab bataya hota. 

...Kash maine himmat haarne ke pehle thodi koshish kar li hoti..To tumko aur khudko  is dukh se bacha paati..Lekin us din Birthday ke baad jo bhi hua...Wo laparwahi ...Hamara late ho jana...fir lift..Aur wo police station...Uske baad to mai waise hi dari hui thi...Bahut zayada..Lekin jab ghar pahunchi aur waha jo nazara dekha...

Papa ka wo pareshan hona..Wo nirasha ...Aur fir fanda lagana..Tab tak to mujhe maloom bhi nahiN tha ki Papa ye sab Arjun bhaiya ke liye kar rahe haiN..Maine socha ki police station se phone aane pe ye sab ho raha..Fir Arjun Bhaiya aur Shefali..mai nahi janti wo sach tha ya jhooth..Lekin Arjun bhaiya ki aankoN me unki Kayarata ko maine pehchan liya sameer...Raat bhar sochti rahi..Wahi baat..Aur fir sapna bhi wahi dekha..Lekin is baar Arjun bhaiya ki jagah hum dono the wahaN..Aur is baar fanda Chacha ji ke gale meN tha..Tum se kya batauN abhi lekin maiN itna ghabra gayi ki mujhe raat bhar neend nahiN aayi...

Savere dekha ki Shefali ghar khali karke ja rahi hai ...Aur mere ghar waloN ne Arjun bhaiya ko bhi Jaipur bhej diya..Shefali se jo baat hui..Uske baad meri himmat poori tarah toot gayi..."" ..Naina started crying till now..Her breath hitched and words broke..

Sameer listening to all this calmly..."" meri zindagi to us patang ke jaisi ho gayi thi jiski dor kisi aur ke haath me ho..aur mai bas idhar se udhar ho raha tha...tumne to us din mujhe mauqa hi nahi diya Naina..Bas mujhe bulaya aur apna faisla suna diya..Mai bhi poori raat pareshan tha..Tumhari balcony ke neeche baitha raha..Pata nahiN ghar pe kya hua hoga..Kaise sambhala hoga tumne..Phone karne ki himmat nahi hui..Kyunki mai tumhe aur mushkil meN nahi daalna chahta  tha...

Lekin in sab ke baad mai bahut toot gaya..Poori tarah se ..Samajh hi nahi aaya ki kya karuN..Nanu ke baad mere liye sirf aur sirf tum important thi Naina..Maine to tumhare sath hi jeena seekha..Tumhare alag hote hi mai bas ek laash ban gaya ..Jisme harkat to thi par himmat nahi...Saanse to thi..Par zindagi nahi...Bas khud ki jaan nahi le sakta tha..Kyunki mai janta tha jis din maine aisa kiya tum bhi wahi karogi..

Naina started  crying hard after listening all this...

Sameer ""Mai ye sab tumhe dukhi karne ke liye nahi bata raha..Na hi jata raha..""

""Mai janti huN..Lekin sameer maine galat kiya...in sab me maine na sirf Chachaji aur tumheN..khud ko bhi bahut dhokha diya.."" Exclaimed Naina.

""Ab sab theek ho gaya Naina..Sach kahuN to chachaji se jo bhi kaha maine bahut gusse me kaha..Lekin mujhe umeed nahi thi wo Hamara sath dene ke liye taiyaar ho jayenge..Aur na hi maine unko hamare baare me kuch bataya aage se..Wo to pata nahiN kaise sab jaante the.."" Sameer explained further...

 

""Haa ..Unhone letters padh liye the mere kamre me..Aur tumhari photo aur baaqi sab bhi dekh liya tha..mai to letters phenk dena chahti thi..Lekin pata nahi kyu himmat nahi hui..Maine socha tum par nahiN kam se kam tumhari yaadoN pe to mera poora haq ho..""

Sameer smiled at her ignorance ."my dear Naina Agrawal..Aaj se tumahara mujh par poora haq hai..Bas fir se mera sath mat chorna..""

""Nahi sameer is baar kisi ke liye nahiN..Tum samajh bhi nahiN sakte ki tumhare pyar aur  Chachaji ke vishwas ne mujhe kitna hausla diya hai..Jaise mujhe pankh mil gaye hoN..Naye sapne dekhne ke..Khush rehne ke..Aage badhne ke..."Chimed Naina

""Are baba kitna aage badhogi..Bhool gayi tumhare Chachaji ne hum dono se promise liya hai ki apni Had me rehna "".Sameer teased..

""Tum na bilkul Pagal ho.."" blushed Naina and a small smile crept on her lips...""buddhu kahiN ke..Sochna bhi mat..Filhal bas padhai aur career..Aur mai ab se roz padhaungi tumhe..Samjh gaye.."

"" Hmm...""

Kya Hmm""

""Soch raha huN ki us Boss ke chamche se tution lena shuru kar duN..Pathe me dam to tha..Poora Agrawal khandaan deewana ho gaya tha uska..Aur meri Naina bhi..""

""Tum na naam mat lo uska..Usko to chachaji ne bola ki kas ke thappad lagao..Maine laga diya..Uski Maa ke saamne.."" Naina elaborated her act of bravery...

""Achha sach me..Tab fir tution ke liye kya karuN..Arjun bhi ab nahin yahaN.."" Sameer said Thoughtful

""Tum wo sab chhoro ..maiN huN na ..MaiN padhaungi tumhe..Hamesha..Promise..""

""Naina..""

""Hmm""

""Lekin agar fir kuch hua to..Aur tum fir kamzor padi to.."" This time Sameer sounded sad...

 

""ye zindagi hai Sameer..Hamesha hamare hisaab se to nahi chalegi..Kabhi bhi kuch bhi ho jaye ...kyuN na hum ye  wada kare ki ab se kabhi kuch bhi ho jaye hum us dil ko sambhal ke rakhenge jo hamare paas hai..""

"" Us Dil Matlab ..Tumhare paas to Tumhara  dil hai na.."" .Now sameer was confused 

""NahiN sameer ..Hamare dil to ab ek dusre ke paas haiN..Teen saal se..Ab hum dono sab kuch kar ke us Dil ki hifazat karenge ..Jo hamare liye ek dusre ki amanat hai..""

""Ok..Done...Said Sameer after a pause he continued 

 ""Waise ek sher tumne sunaya..Dusra mai sunata huN...

" Hai Aafat e JaaN dono hi soorat meN Numaya..

Aghaaz e Muhabbat ho ya ho Anjaam e Muhabbat..

With that they both slowly walked towards library hand in hand ..To start New chapter of their life ...

Sorry for the long update ..But i  had to wrap it in one chapter.. please tell me if you all want me to continue...All shayaris written by me..@asmipoems 

Precap : Pyar Ka ImtihaaN hum denge ...Log dekhenge aur Jaan...Hum denge..

Edited by asmita21180 - 5 years ago

Wow a conversation..please close the Shoe topic as well in next chapter..I really want Sameer to assure Naina that he will not run after another girl if things get difficult..
Also, can we please get the next phase in this story and not just eyelicks and hand hold..can Sameer try to touch her..flirt with her etc etc..please I know I am putting a wish list but can't help..CVS are not giving this 😭

Beautiful story and wonderful poems.
Loved their heart to heart conversation.

Nice work. Do continue. 

Thank you for this ...I was yearning to hear some sensible conversations between Naina and Sameer...if not in the serial we got it hear...nicely written ...Loved it !!