ArHi FF: Retrouvaille (Based on Shyam's Revelation) | Ch5 Pg16 | 09-30 - Page 10

They still have a long way to go to prove everything. Hopefully Anjali will open her eyes.

Awesome chapter

Amazing!!

It's good to see a doctor, Sensible act of connecting dots and mostly someone observed what went on in house..
HP talk with Arnav is a nice scene..Arnav needed to know what she went through in his absence and nice to see the family's concern..
Everyone in family mostly Anjali needs to see what's going on with Shyam..

very nice. good to see HP so concerned about Khushi. Glad he told Arnav all that he heard and saw.

Very interesting & more of sensible take on the story, liking how you have shown everyone thinking & using little of their brains

Gr8 update liked Arnav-HP convo 

Beautiful update; Khushi deserves some happiness now 😳

Originally posted by: Savera84

Nice update.

There were so many questions the family could have asked themselves or asked Arnav, irrespective of the identity of the kidnapper.

I agree, until that moment they did not see anything negative about Shyam. So, it is a big blow to all of them.

But they stopped at the revelation and started blaming the bearers of the bad news.  Left everything to the boss who took care of them all these years.  They did not give a second thought about Arnav's supposed ordeal for 15 days in captivity.  It looked more like, you missed work for 15 days.  Get back to work and let us do what we were good at doing 😊  

We are enjoying your version.  As far as I am concerned PM is not necessary.

The title has all the information to tell us it is a new update.  If you don't mind, please add a date with every update to give us a bit more information.

Cheers...

Edited by ItsPearl - 5 years ago

Originally posted by: MissChaos2

This is really interesting. I was so unhappy with the kidnap track treatment. There should have been police case and there were enough clues  to help the police. Khushi and Mami had seen them, had been to the house belonging to one of them. NK's involvement was also not brought out fully and properly. 

Originally posted by: nitritt9s

ab shyam babua ki band bajegi cant wait love this sensible asr n nani n love the way you have written abt the after kidnap track that was so missing in the serial thk u