Originally posted by: Sairandhri
Thankyou for this! I am a huge Preedit fan and so hope to see something like this happen in the show. Bonding from neglect by friends is so relatable and I can easily picture these two doing that. Their friendship is being taken for granted and its great they can seek comfort from one another sharing those very human feelings of hurt, frustration, envy etc.
Originally posted by: yashimalhotra
This is super adorable
And that last dialogue was a killer.Lovely ❤️
Originally posted by: TereLiyeMINU
Thats such a cute,chocolaty feel good OS dear.😃 I loved the building up and the last lines..Reminded me of 'pyaar Dosti Hai'.
And the title is so creative ...Beautiful dear.Keep coming with more such stories.Waiting for your next musical OS.😳Thanks for the PM.With love-Minu.
Oh wow ! look who I found when I visit my another loved forum after ages. Approximately 6 - 7 months. ...
Ayushi !! You here darling ...Preeti is my love ...so am ever ready for Preehan or Preedit ...but ponga is attentive to every girl other than preeti & rohan is nowhere to be found ...our phooti kismet ...Since ages we're requesting CV's to give preeti a lovestory ...coz I know she will slay ...That's a pretty long rant ...but you know I got exited to see you after YPNTKH forum...And coming to the OS ...It's such a happy Friendship to love wala OS ...Lovely writing ...As always I would recommend you to never stop writing ...Lots of hugs
Originally posted by: Anmol333
Wow Ayushi 👏
Superb os it is.Poor preedit mere, but they are so cute too.Bura toh lagna hi tha, agar SamAina group me jaate toh itna problem nhi hota na ghar pe na dosto ke beech but...Pandit ka dhyan Madhuri ne bhataka diya tha show me warna vo bhout gussa hota 😆Or iss is me uski apni Madhuri ne dhyan bhatakaya 😆I really loved this os.Nice one.Thanks for pm and sorry for late reply.
Originally posted by: Mayashika
Liked it? I loved this to an extent that I have re-read this many times, such a sweet OS, omg PreeDit is love❤️
Ayu, dil le lo🤗I hate it when sisters are angry with each other but this was endearing to watch, what Preeti darling felt is felt in real too, when our friend or sister starts hiding things or spends less time with us, we do get annoyed and it's natural. Dialogues were on point and I could visualise it very much clearly.Both venting out their frustrations and Preeti doesn't chocolates😲 Hehe, koi baat nai, I love chocolates and I was elated to find that this chocolate led them to befriending each other as an individual😳And how you concluded raised my heartbeat, Pandit say he will be there for her indirectly and then, best friends falling in love I am in a fangirling mode now😉This was fab! 😃
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