AshDeep TS:- Who First? (DELETED) - Page 2

Tumne to kasam hi kha li hai Muskan ki mujhe shipper bana ke hi chodogi! 🤣 Ab main pakka B'day videos dekhne wali hun Randeep ke! Everything was perfect! I loved the flow, loved the doubts, loved the emotions at play here. You've melded the offscreen chatter into this story with perfection! Is the silent intruder Ashi? 😉 Ab I'm desperate for more! 

Wonderful story please update soon don't make us wait for more waiting waiting...

You left me in cliffhanger and I hate cliffhanger s please yaar update soon can't wait for long update soon

Thanks for the pm

AshDeep TS I love it




Edited by Anjali33 - 5 years ago

oh no
cliffhanger!
hmm ashi on d door???
plz continue soon

Excellent...please update soon and do not make us wait...excellent

It was amezing 

I usually avoid Ashdeep stories but you have written really well Muskan... I think the intruder is none other than Ashi... good going dear...thanks for the pm😊

I'm sure the intruder is none other than Ashi 😳
Awesome start 👍🏼
Love the update
Please update the next part soon