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finally both confess that can't live apart . geet accept maan's proposalof marriage

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Part 65

 

G-Itne saare paise kahan se aayenge? I was thinking of 2 bhk

 

M- I am rich....midas rich

 

She rolls her eyes

 

G-And really drunk

 

Geet pulls him out of bathroom

 

G-You know what happens when people kiss?

 

She says resting her head on his shoulder

 

Maan nods

 

G-What?

 

M-Babies

 

G-uffffff idiot! No! Marriage

 

M-Yes

 

G-There ferones hormones exchange and they communicate to check if they could make healthy babies or not

 

He look at her wide eyed ki Japanese kyun bol rahihai

 

M-So babies!

 

Maan thinks that’s what he said too...one thing leads to another and babies get made… Geet pata nahi kya bol rahi hai

 

G-tch no no! Its compatibility and diversity of genes to make healthy babies

 

M-healthy babies? We take care baby healthy

 

He says putting his hand on Geet's tummy

 

G-tchhhhhh! Darwin’s theory, gene mutation. That’s why we get attracted to some people and don’t get attracted to some. I was just watching a documentary on that when you were away

 

She says proudly trying to share her excitement with the man she loves but trying to discuss gene theory with a drunk man isn’t a very easy thing

 

M- No… kissing makes babies. Stupid!

 

G-kissing does not make babies, intercourse does

 

Maan gives her a superior look

 

M- You kiss.. touch... f*ck...viola.. babies

 

She abruptly kisses his lips quickly...go sleep in your cot

 

He nods... no more kisses before marriage this time for him

 

Wo chup chap jakar apni cot par let gaya

 

Geet zara khisak ke close soyi holding his hand

 

Maan holds her hand touching her fingers

 

M- my ring there. yes?

 

G-hmm?

 

M-my ring.. ur finger... married…kissing

 

Geet khisak ke Maan ki cot mein aa jaati hai, her head on his chest

 

G-Hey boyfriend

 

M-Who?

 

G-You

 

M-yes

 

She kisses him on cheek...nice good night kiss

 

Ab next morning

 

Maan up with a bad hangover jiska only solution seems to drink some more

 

But its only a thought not something he can do..

 

Wo utha gaya

 

Thoda paani pi liya, dheere dheere regaining his senses

 

Ki dekha fir Geet kahan hai....

 

wo to ab yaad ayaa ki Geet uske upar so rahi thi

 

Par wo uke upar kyun so rahi thi?

 

All Maan can remember is managing to get home... aaj to bike bhi nahi hai…taxi li thi and Geet se kuch to baat hui thi…he did spill some beans...

 

He knows he told her how much he wants her...but how much he told her he doesn’t remember

 

Jab se puke kiya tha uske baad ka bilkul uda hua hai

 

Usse pehle ka bhi kuch hi yaad hai

 

Maan isn’t used to being drunk

 

He is a bad drunk

 

Maan uthke breakfast banata hai

 

Newspaper padhne ki koshish karta hai par sab tair raha hai aakhon ke saamne. He was in pain

 

Geet aayi uthke…neend mein..baal thode dishelved

 

She hugged him from back

 

G-Heya

 

Kisses his hair

 

He stiffens for a moment ki ye kya...itna kya boldiya

 

But then feels ki jo bhi bola theek hi bola hoga

 

He pulls her hands and makes her sit on his lap

 

M- Good morning

 

G-How are you feeling?

 

 She asks touching his nose tip to hers

 

M- I am good. A bit...woozy I guess…I'll be fine after I eat. You are in very good mood; what did I say last night?

 

G-My stupid drunk...

 

She says lovingly twisting his nose

 

M-And what did the stupid drunk babble about?

 

He says smoothing her hair, running his hand all over her scalp and neck with a gentle massaging motion

 

She pouts

 

G-You don’t even remember?

 

M-Not really... I was drunk. I remember asking you to stay...mostly that’s all I remember

 

G-ooo my man can’t handle alcohol

 

M-You want a man who drinks? I can start learning to handle it..

 

She hits him playfully

 

M- Batao... do you?

 

He holds her chin

 

G-Stop it....kaam hai...

 

Geet uth jaati hai

 

M-oh kya kaam hai?

 

He says smiling playfully at her

 

M-Pehle meri baat suno... it’s more important. I don’t know what I said yesterday or what I didn’t say yesterday but I do want to say some things to you. I don’t want you to leave... not this house...but my side.I really do want to spend my life with you, and I am willing to wait however long necessary ... for you to want the same... I would even ask you to marry me right here and right now.... but I won’t coz I am till not settled. I till have unfinished business which I need to take care of... but nevertheless I want you to know that I love you

 

Geet looks down and hugs him

 

Maan kisses the top of her head and hugs her back

 

G-If I say...I don’t want to wait and want to capture your everything

 

M- I'll beg you to wait for a while then...I know it seems silly to propose in one line and ask to wait in another but I want to wait till I have relocated back to where my family is... settle down and have a steady life. I don’t want to live in this City anymore. Nothing about it appeals to me except meeting you here

 

G-How much I have to wait? 10 yrs? 15 yrs ? 20 yrs?

 

M-2 months max

 

G-Tab tak?

 

M-Tab tak I’ll court you, date you …woo you


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Note: Sorry for not updating me for so long. I went to India because of the tragedy. I hope all of you will understand. I again apologize for the delay


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Hi ,nice part geet accepted him , waiting for next 

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Aww this was lovely.. his drunken confession with her cute acceptance to everything... he wants to date her which is good.. I want to see them as lovers properly with good romance before she comes to know of his truth 

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Lovely update 

Hope everything is settled at home

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Lovely confession in drunken state and cute conversation about babies

 And in morning Maan don't remember anything but he confess his love and propose hr 

 Hope his work finish soon Geet thought heay take years but he asked hr to wait fr 2 months

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Nice update..

Waiting for next update..

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Great update. Thanks for updating after long.

Maan proposed Geet in senses. Loved their cute banter. 

Waiting for next. Update soon.

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Baby talk with a drunk Maan. Geet is thinking ahead already.

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Part 65

splendid update! 

Maan did say much when he was drunk! 

of cos he does not remember the next morning.

wow Maan wants to date and woo Geet! 

glad that she accepted..

update soon