REVENGE- Thread II (Part-B10 Page 55) : Update!!! - Page 3

Posted: 3 years ago

Originally posted by babelicious


Great. I think Maan’s reaction is muchhh required. And it was about time he showed Geet his displeasure of her sycophant behavior ! 


👏your comment is gold! Yes! You call her out!!

Posted: 3 years ago

Originally posted by mkd.70


Yes true aur sayad maan ki jagah geet hoti to she will react like this


Wohi toh Gender change karke dekho, kitna revolting lagta hai

Posted: 3 years ago

Originally posted by maangeet.gmmg


Wonderful update but update little more it's too small


I know yaar getting into the mode. Will try and do better next time

Posted: 3 years ago

hi thanks for updating

hope you and your family are fine


Part 76

lovely update. nicely written

of cos Maan is angry seeing Geet with Akhil.

his dilemma is reasonable. 

its understandable that Maan avoids Geet

he does not want to talk to her as well.

at least Geet told her through messages about Akhil.

hope that they do talk about this

Posted: 3 years ago

Originally posted by khwaishfan


hi thanks for updating

hope you and your family are fine


Part 76

lovely update. nicely written

of cos Maan is angry seeing Geet with Akhil.

his dilemma is reasonable. 

its understandable that Maan avoids Geet

he does not want to talk to her as well.

at least Geet told her through messages about Akhil.

hope that they do talk about this


Yes, we are fine. Hope you and your family are in good health. Stay safe

Posted: 3 years ago

Part 77

 

Maan: Nothing. I have work to do

 

He types and goes into ‘Do not disturb’ mode so she is unable ping him

 

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Geet hasn’t able to speak to Maan since morning

 

She sees him getting up from his seat

 

She follows him and dashes in front of him

 

Maan is stops on his track startled

 

M-Wha…what are you doing??!

 

G- I want to speak to you

 

M- In the men’s room?

 

Geet is embarrassed as she realizes

 

Maan sighs

 

M- Okay, let’s meet at the tea place downstairs. We’ll talk

 

Geet grins and happily walks out

 

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Geet is waiting at the tea stall when Maan walks in

 

She hands him over his tea

 

He accepts the tea

 

Geet startles Maan with suddenly hugging him and almost hanging onto him

 

G- Don’t ever stop talking to me, Maan! I missed you so much. You know, how much you mean to me?

 

***

She comes back into the reality as Maan clicks his fingers in front of her face

 

M- Where were you lost?

 

She shakes her head

 

G- emmm….I am with Akhil last night….he was hospitalized

 

M- I am aware

 

G- I forgot to carry my phone…so couldn’t inform you

 

M- Yeah, expected. Akhil was in danger

 

He says bitterly

 

‘Hi! Geet’

 

Both Maan and Geet turns towards the voice

 

G- Antara? Emm…hi

 

Geet is surprised to see her there

 

Maan is shocked to see her there but composes himself

 

He is trying to hide his face hoping Antara won’t recognize him

 

Antara is gazing intently at Maan

 

Geet is looking at Antara wondering why is she looking like this at Maan

 

G- Antara tum yahan?

 

A-Haan wo…Akhil ki check book chahiye thi…he ishospital…so…


G- Haan chalo main deti hoon

 

Geet starts walking

 

But Antara has dug her heels there still gazing at Maan

 

Antara-Ye?

 

She asks, her eyes pointing at Maan

 

G- Yeh Maan hai, office mein accountant…tum mili hogi usse

 

Antara- hmm…kaafi jaani pehchaani shakal hai…shayad mili hi hungi

 

Geet looks at Antara then at Maan

 

Geet asks Maan

 

G- Tum aa rahe ho?

 

M- Nahi aap log jaao, I will come after a while

 

Geet starts walking

 

Antara gives a final glance at Maan and follows Geet


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Posted: 3 years ago

 Geet finally able to talk Maan and explaining about last night but Antara came and seeing Maan suspiciously he act normally 

Posted: 3 years ago

Maan is rightfully upset! Geet should just let Akhil be 😡

Peecha chod bhi de ab uska

Did Antara really recognize him? But if she did then Maan can also question her as to why is she close to Akhil after the drama that took place last? If Geet comes to know she’ll be upset and rightfully so!

Thank God you updated at last 😃

Posted: 3 years ago

Wonderful update fantastic waiting to see wat will geet do to manofy maan

Posted: 3 years ago

Part 77

outstanding update.

of cos Maan does not want to talk to Geet.

glad that Geet was determined to speak to him.

nice that Geet told Maan about Akhil but Maan was upset as Geet was with Akhil.

sad that Geet did not realise this.

oh no Antara is there and saw Maan.

Maan is shocked

update soon 



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