NOVEL~*Hiding behind a Stranger*~THREAD 44-CHAPTER 49 Upd 31st May - Page 38

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Posted: 7 years ago

Hope the painstaking arrangements of the Yellai sappadu... hope it doesn't fall flat on its face by turning out too boring!


Edited by lashy - 7 years ago
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Posted: 7 years ago


OMG! The update is here. Am I the first to read it? Off then I go!😳
Thank you, Lashy darling!🤗

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Posted: 7 years ago

Originally posted by: karkuzhali


A small quiz to test your memory.

I. My name is mentioned in chapter one and in many others too
But I physically appear only in chapter twenty two
I play a key role in the lead pairs' union..
Who am I?

>>> Farmaan 😳

II. Find the odd 'person' out:

B.
a. Chota Faizaan
b. Qamran
c. Jamshed😕


III.Who were the pickpocket and convict whom Akbarkhan reformed?

>>> Azeez 😆


IV. What is the name of the Kunwar Mahendar's wife?

>>> did her name mentioned? 😕

V. Which one of the following places/venues helped for the important turning point in the story?



b. The Sabha Niwas in Bansi where Heera was summoned before Maharani and Maharaja of Manswar.



[Each runner-up will be given a packet of almonds.]

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Edited by binduprasad41 - 7 years ago
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Posted: 7 years ago

Hope the painstaking arrangements of the Yellai sappadu... hope it doesn't fall flat on its face by turning out too boring!

Lashy,
I understand the strain you would have undergone to finish the chapter..You have staged a beautiful
scenario with a lovely handling of words...Congratulations! ⭐️👏🤗
It took 50 minutes for me to read the entire chapter in one stretch..
Periyamma












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Posted: 7 years ago
Something else altogether...
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Posted: 7 years ago

Originally posted by: karkuzhali


Awww periyamma... a suda suda comment from you... which means this is special... 🤗 moi feels blessed! I didn't think you'd read it tonight since it must be getting quite late for you...
but you did... 😳

You are right. It was VERY VERY difficult - not because it was emotional... writing emotions is comparatively easy... for e.g. writing Akbar's scene was comparatively easy till the Shehzaade arrived.
However, writing simultaneous scenarios, with so many people, so much happening at the same time, and so many shifting emotions - is what is so difficult... i.e. getting the balance right...🤔

ETA - And after editing thrice, I still found a couple of typo-errors when I checked now

Edited by lashy - 7 years ago

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Posted: 7 years ago
Lashy, I am only through half of first part, will have to come back to finish it off in the evening! Whole day I will be itching to read at work. 🤔
The first paragraph about the treacherous clouds revolting against the sun was beyond excellence!! 👏 It looked so like my cup of tea! 👏 Fabulous! 👏
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Posted: 7 years ago

Originally posted by: --cute.manasi--

Something else altogether...


🤗
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Posted: 7 years ago

Originally posted by: lghosh

Lashy, I am only through half of first part, will have to come back to finish it off in the evening! Whole day I will be itching to read at work. 🤔

The first paragraph about the treacherous clouds revolting against the sun was beyond excellence!! 👏 It looked so like my cup of tea! 👏 Fabulous! 👏


Oh no my dear Lana has already flown off the nest... to tend to her day's duties...
Many many hours it will be, before she returns
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Posted: 7 years ago

I was all ready to attempt Periyamma's quiz when I saw that nervous man.

An hour and 10 minutes for C49.

This was heroic Heera's chapter through and through.

All the events right from the arrival of troops, but before that her refusal to run away, abandoning her people , to her leaving Parnagarh the way she did , could they have been written any better than the way they were? Brilliant.

The Begum of Ustaad , how the truth was revealed -in front of her townspeople by enemies when she was at her most vulnerable state- Lashy Sahiba, you sure know how to make us catch our breath .

Will have to give C49 another two reads , of course, but it was an absolutely heart grabbing chapter.

No matter how long the update, it is never long enough and I literally gasped when I saw the red paragraph - couldn't believe that it had ended.

Thank you so much darling Lashy Sahiba for another fantastic update. 👏 👏👏 🤗

It was not C49 and C50 but still it was a two-parter!😳

Periyamma, I will answer your quiz tomorrow. 😃

Edited by roseraja1915 - 7 years ago

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